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Metaskriptz vs WerdSmith
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8 Lines... No Crew Votes.... No Recycling... No Biting... No Feeding... No Dickriding... Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 01-18-05 at 03:47 PM Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in. |
WerdSmith has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-18-05 03:18 PM.
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Metaskriptz has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-18-05 03:24 PM.
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Wedge a math book in ya pupil, so you can literally watch the nine. I asked him if he fucked a bitch & he got excited thinkin' of a canine! Ya script's are like unwanted receipt's, they just easily discarded. ...Sniff sniff, Meta's script's wreak of garbage, and i ain't saying he farted. Ya retarded, he try's to please by relentlessly poloshing up his \masters-piece/ Attracted maggot's to his comp upon dropping his verse, obviously they thought it was a feast! I don't need a closer, cos your verse basically just self destructed. And to add to ya rec this battle was another "No problem @ all" deducted!. Man that sucked...btw the last line you won't get, cos he said in my callout that it'll be "No problem at all" to merk me. |
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My Crusialnist Is Now InTacked, Plus Your Flows Is Wack and Creativity you Lack I threw so many hard punches I made you lean Back farther then Petey Crack WerdSmith, about to get ripped just like Lil Flip, to call me Out real quik Mainly You about to recieve hard Punches, So I guess you can say you was Born with a Fat Lip Can't denie The Truth Can't Try to fake It, Even Re-awake it, As I Even If Faggot Niggas Make it You Aint hard as My Dick was when I seen your Momma Naked 8 Lines is your Limit as I can see, Its Time to pay your fee, For Fake G's So When you Turn Back around the only thing you see is the door Closing Right Behind Me, |
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Voted For: Metaskriptz
My Crusialnist Is Now InTacked, Plus Your Flows Is Wack and Creativity you Lack I threw so many hard punches I made you lean Back farther then Petey Crack nice multi’s here…kinda weak punch here, but decent closer WerdSmith, about to get ripped just like Lil Flip, to call me Out real quik Mainly You about to recieve hard Punches, So I guess you can say you was Born with a Fat Lip decent punch, nice multi’s Can't denie The Truth Can't Try to fake It, Even Re-awake it, As I Even If Faggot Niggas Make it You Aint hard as My Dick was when I seen your Momma Naked good punch here…once again u had decent multi’s in this punch 8 Lines is your Limit as I can see, Its Time to pay your fee, For Fake G's So When you Turn Back around the only thing you see is the door Closing Right Behind Me, good closer Overall…u had multi’s up the ass like whoa though, but that’s good made your drop more complexed, and hard hittin punches thru it all overall I give you a 7/10 Wedge a math book in ya pupil, so you can literally watch the nine. I asked him if he fucked a bitch & he got excited thinkin' of a canine! decent closer, kind of a weak punch though Ya script's are like unwanted receipt's, they just easily discarded. ...Sniff sniff, Meta's script's wreak of garbage, and i ain't saying he farted. decent multi’s…weak punch though Ya retarded, he try's to please by relentlessly poloshing up his \masters-piece/ Attracted maggot's to his comp upon dropping his verse, obviously they thought it was a feast! good punch here…get rid of the \’s though I don't need a closer, cos your verse basically just self destructed. And to add to ya rec this battle was another "No problem @ all" deducted!. …like you said…I would’ve never-gotten that punchline… Overall…u had a decent drop, punches were kinda weak though, you should work on that some more, one of your lines had a decent multi’s up in it…but overall I give you a 6.5/10 Return Tha Favor Meta http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=172698 |
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Voted For: Metaskriptz
V/metaskriptz.....this was a close battle.....but my vote goes to meta cause his verse was creative wit punchs an his vocab an multi's he had sum of everything.....werdsmith u had sum good punchs but not as consistent wit them like meta u lacked in creative diss's..... punchs=meta multis=meta vocab=meta structure=tie overall=metaskriptz *RETURN THE FAVOR* |
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Voted For: WerdSmith
lmaooo whut da fukk@meta's verse....fam half ya shit wasn't even ryhmin u lost rite there damm i thought u was a vet on dis bitch....werdsmith u got lucky fam ya verse was kind of weak 2 i didn't really c no creativity or punchlines and ya ryhme scheme was kind of weak...but u take dis cuzz meta's verse was horrible no hate fam just speakind a truth nahmean opener-werd...i didn't get it but da shit sounded betta than meta's make u lean back like petey crack lmaooo wow structure-werd..both of u had some stretched shit but werds looked betta punchlines-a tie both of u had some weak shits personals-nun from both damm.... ehuff said return da favor ya'll |
Yea FUckin Right...Get the Hell Out of Here...My shit Rhymes and It was better..Take your fake votes and go somewhere else with that shit...Like you Say .....DUnny
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Voted For: Metaskriptz
I think metaskriptz got dis its close but heres y i think he had better voc. flow and punches...... My Crusialnist Is Now InTacked, Plus Your Flows Is Wack and Creativity you Lack I threw so many hard punches I made you lean Back farther then Petey Crack ........Good line didnt hit to hard 5/10 WerdSmith, about to get ripped just like Lil Flip, to call me Out real quik Mainly You about to recieve hard Punches, So I guess you can say you was Born with a Fat Lip ........dat was iight hit a little harder than da first one 6/10 Can't denie The Truth Can't Try to fake It, Even Re-awake it, As I Even If Faggot Niggas Make it You Aint hard as My Dick was when I seen your Momma Naked .......played but it was iight 6/10 8 Lines is your Limit as I can see, Its Time to pay your fee, For Fake G's So When you Turn Back around the only thing you see is the door Closing Right Behind Me, ..................good line 6/10 Overall=23/40 Wedge a math book in ya pupil, so you can literally watch the nine. I asked him if he fucked a bitch & he got excited thinkin' of a canine! .......haha dat was a funny line i liked dat 7/10 Ya script's are like unwanted receipt's, they just easily discarded. ...Sniff sniff, Meta's script's wreak of garbage, and i ain't saying he farted. ..............first line was good but da next one didnt hit as hard 5/10 Ya retarded, he try's to please by relentlessly poloshing up his \masters-piece/ Attracted maggot's to his comp upon dropping his verse, obviously they thought it was a feast! ...........not feeling dat at all 4/10 I don't need a closer, cos your verse basically just self destructed. And to add to ya rec this battle was another "No problem @ all" deducted!. .........iight closer but wasnt dat good 6/10 overall=22/40 Return da favor please both yall..........~1~ http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=165754 Im up (4-2) |
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Voted For: Metaskriptz
Metaskriptz My Crusialnist Is Now InTacked, Plus Your Flows Is Wack and Creativity you Lack I threw so many hard punches I made you lean Back farther then Petey Crack ^okay opener WerdSmith, about to get ripped just like Lil Flip, to call me Out real quik Mainly You about to recieve hard Punches, So I guess you can say you was Born with a Fat Lip ^like it Can't denie The Truth Can't Try to fake It, Even Re-awake it, As I Even If Faggot Niggas Make it You Aint hard as My Dick was when I seen your Momma Naked ^lmao...good... 8 Lines is your Limit as I can see, Its Time to pay your fee, For Fake G's So When you Turn Back around the only thing you see is the door Closing Right Behind Me, ^good closer Overall solid drop,love your internal rhyming which definately improves your flow a lot.Structure was okay and vocab was tight,liked your wordplay to.Had some nice creative punches in there,no real bold personals but you had good creative things in your verse...Enjoyed reading it... WerdSmith Wedge a math book in ya pupil, so you can literally watch the nine. I asked him if he fucked a bitch & he got excited thinkin' of a canine! ^haha,funny shit... Ya script's are like unwanted receipt's, they just easily discarded. ...Sniff sniff, Meta's script's wreak of garbage, and i ain't saying he farted. ^liked 1st line,not feeling 2nd though Ya retarded, he try's to please by relentlessly poloshing up his \masters-piece/ Attracted maggot's to his comp upon dropping his verse, obviously they thought it was a feast! ^hmmm,doesn't do trick for me... I don't need a closer, cos your verse basically just self destructed. And to add to ya rec this battle was another "No problem @ all" deducted!. ^good closer Good drop from you to: flow,structure and vocab were straight on point.Wordplay was nice,had funny and creative punches/personals which even made me laugh here and there. Too bad you kinda fell of towards the end in my opinion,no hate though because I thought this was very close battle but my vote goes to MetaSkriptz... |
Voted For: Metaskriptz
Vote: metaskriptz Punches: meta Wordplay: werd Lyrics: werd Vocab: meta Flwo: meta Originality:werd Structure: meta Multis: meta by far..ill multi fow Personals: neither Meta - 8/10 Werd - 7/10 Peace :thumbup: |
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