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"Hip-Hop" ft. Babylon & Supervillian
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Hip-Hop! Its Just The- Culture, Truth, Hardship, The Triumphs... The Crews, Colors, Artships, The Tried Ones... C.S. Lives To Represent The- Paint Cans, Breakdance, The B-Boys To Schollars... The Ballers, Playd Hands, Make Stance To Dollar... The Walks Of Life Like Those Untaught By Talks... ...Steps More Forth Slowly Collect Your Thoughts [[Verse One: Abstrakt]] Emotions Building Ill Scars As Bars Lead Our Release Of Moment... Teeth Come Open With Each Gasp Art Bleeds Scenes Of Broken... The Days Quocient Filled Way Over Reasons Spoken Ways... As Skills Moment To Play Psych Teethves On Open Graves... This All Amounting The Down Fall Now Falls Down Gun's Pounding... I Need This All In Script So The Grounds Allowence Is One Down, Shit... Pen To Page Wage War With Ink, Infect Threw Heads Of Slaves... The Led Gives Way, Crumble Difference In Man And Connect On Stage... Life Passed In Lines Of Sands Grasps, The Kids Spun Tite... With Sons Entrapted, At Peace Of Mind I Stand At One With The Mic... [[Verse Two: Supervillian]] i pop tops on tins to drop non-stops real thick...drips: non existant time to make my mark...the paint begs to be released, i cant resist it my wildstyle needed sumthin' lovely, so i left it a toon for company finished and complete i hear sumthin'..."POLICE!!! dont run from me!" its hard 2 "freeze" when heats comin'...s.v.'s no dummy, i flee runnin' i depart the scene and keep gunnin', you aint catchin' me for nuthin'!! anxious finger-tips grip chain link and frame piece as i evade heat elevate above gate wit' ease, maybe a chase'...but never detain me krylon...rusto...and montana cans with phat caps fill my back pack i laugh at the fact that my nap sack KLACK KLACKS as i smash tracks long story short, portly pork bored me *snore* so i became escapist i do it for the glory, sport.....the court worry's worth bein' the greatest the truth is, my senses use this for improvement......to 200% proof it fine tune and not abuse wits, mind over matter, body over movement [[Chorus]] Its The Hip-Hop's True Life To Speaks Our Hours... ...Disc Shops n Diss Drops Risen' Threw The Cowards Live Or Die Let Step But To Break Is Failure, Just Wasted Miles... ...No Matter The Struggle, A Man's Defined Threw His Hip-Hop Trials [x2] Written In Hip-Hop First The Music Starts Off... ...Outa The Box Now, Culture Branched Out In Alike Thoughts [[Verse Three: Babylon]] These emotions going, flowin' and explodin on page's composin' pen motions, releasing my closed mental cage's sentimental stages, of life, exposed and let go when i wright blind anger mixed in spite, like a match to a spark it ignites from paper, to pen, to ink, like razor to skin let me think it releases pain, without thinking insane or drowdin' in drinks without blades or pills, or a rush from amazed days of thrills from these pages i feal, a since of sin and ways they appeal from wrighting, thoughts stop hideing and cetain notions arise that murder, death, and suicide, were exposed for their lies [[Verse Four: Abstrakt]] Viens Replaced As AV's Now Stream Their Proud Ways Threw Me... Waves Bleed Age n Race As The Ground Quakes Threw Seats... Energy Rising Surprised In The Responce Im Gettin From Tried Kids... Theirs Minds Whipped By Lines Lashed As Gasps Release Minds Fits... The Middle Man Holding Middle Ground Now Fiddlin Little Sounds... See The Stage Ripple Round As Alound I Stand To Cripple Crown... All Kinds Lur, Seek Peace, For Breif Seconds I Seem The Equalizer... Teach Lines To Ease, Breaths Connect All Minds To Equal Life Forms... Lines Fuse And Pitch Threw Each Kids Top The Mics Tune Sits Caught... At Last I Taught, Scene In Kids Eyes Throb As A Mass Of Unified Heads Bobb... [[Chorus]] Its The Hip-Hop's True Life To Speaks Our Hours... ...Disc Shops n Diss Drops Risen' Threw The Cowards Live Or Die Let Step But To Break Is Failure, Just Wasted Miles... ...No Matter The Struggle, A Man's Defined Threw His Hip-Hop Trials [x2] Written In Hip-Hop First The Music Starts Off... ...Outa The Box Now, Culture Branched Out In Alike Thoughts .One.
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this was an alrite peace I like the ya creativity Return the favour please
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=172696 |
this peice will be 1 of the 5 nominated for the jan awards congradulations
vocab excellent svs multis great i think sv shined on this peice he owned it lol |
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OOOHHH BBBOOOYYY!!!!!!!!!
i like what i see fellas. we dropped a fireball on 'em. babz.....abz......nice shit family. lets get some more feedback....UPPIN'!!! one love... ...the super...crhyme sindicate |
will a peer says gj sv woned lol
good job to both though |
Decent Drop Yall I Got A Audio Drop Similar To This How Youll Approached It I Liked The Topic Of Course Yall All Came At It Nice Here Good Struture By All Good Vocab Also Not In Excess Good Drop Also Return In Links In My Sig
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nice piece here. excellent imagery in SV's verse i was diggin that the most. kool chorus'. babylons verse was tight it was a nice contrast to abstrakt n SV verses. need i say nice shit from abstrakt as always. word to C.S this was some hot shit.
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nice shit..........CS we are still alive....and dont forget that...
djMC- |
^^^UPPIN' FOR MORE FEEDBACK!!!^^^
s.v. |
yo nice drop y'all..I think it had real potential...shit was dope yo!!
I liked supervillain's verse..nice collab still good multi's and everything...catchy chorus |
much love my man, thanks for the feed............UPPIN' AGAIN!!!
s.v. |
oh yeah...return favour in sig y'all!!
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Hook is cool. Catchy and clever. Good vocab and multis.
Abstrakt verse: Fucking heavy bro. Loving it, You dropped a bomb, nice use of the topic there. This stuck out to me: "Pen To Page Wage War With Ink, Infect Threw Heads Of Slaves... The Led Gives Way, Crumble Difference In Man And Connect On Stage..." Ya second verse wasnt as good but still cool. Good use of multis from the start of it SV: Nothing short of amazing! the verse blew me away!!!! I dont really know wat to say. The topic was follwed superbly, the vocab was cool, the whole verse just rocked! Babylon: kept the pace up well. I was feelin ya verse no doubt. nice multis and vocab and topic kept up. Well-thhought-out verse man. Truly superior fellas. Keep it up. RTF in my battles pls fam |
i liked dis drop from all three of yall it was pretty tight vocab was dere flow was on point all da verse was jus wow speechless 9/10 was a hott drop
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*s.v. toasts everyone involved with the making of and critique of this thread......"cheers!!!*
^^^psych!!! if i did that, i'd be corny....lol. thanks for the feedback everyone. ^^^UUUPPPSSS!!!^^^ the supe duper one |
^^^UPPIN' THE THREAD!!!^^^
s.v. |
straight fire, everyone brang it on this one. great collab, great topic. shit was def. ill and needs to be on the Jan. awards i gotta give ya 9.5/10 please repay the favor on "Too Fresh" in the open mic...
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nice piece here....vocabulary was good, and flow was good...all verses was dope...i felt every verse yall...CS keep doin ya thing...1
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I liked it, it had some good flow in it and the rhyming was iight and it had an ok creativity to it over all 7.7/10 hit up on my links peace!
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Good Drop Verse Wass Well Struktured By All You..Nice Vokab Good Topic Ta Do..Umm Decent How Yall Came In Tha Beginnin Of Every Verse And Made A Head Line..
Overall Good Sgit 9.8/10................ |
shit was nice, both had good flows, nice vocab..
overall nice drop though, 8/10 |
this was pretty dope, all the way through it had really mental expression, and at times...really good imagery....i felt you all did an excellent job of saying what you needed to say, thats what hip hop is, saying whats on your mind....without sacraficing detail...this is definately worthy of an award. I don't expect to see much better than this from anyone....very nice work
return the favor' http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=172883 |
thank you very, very, very much everyone for your positive feedback on our piece. we appreciate it more than y'all know. word.
one love...our culture. s.v. |
Decent drop, sv was killing it with them multi'z, abstrak was good with creativity and imaginary with alot of emotion. Bab your piece was good fam, very thoughtfull and very creative. Dope piece from the C.S, vocab was decent, flow was decent, Wordplay was decent, even with emotion and imaginary was decent.
wun nice shit. \ |
Definatly feeling this one. Nice job guys.....C.S is on top :thumbup:
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^^^jesus christ i love this guy!!!...and his quote!!!^^^
(my bad abz.....i wasnt tryna post up again.....sorry fam.) s.v. |
shit was dope i liked it da flow was nice da hook was nice i jus say da hole thing is pretty dope.......~1~
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^^^dope piece. bump, bump, bump.
esvee |
^^^bumpin' an old crhyme sin collabo written in late '04 and posted in early '05, featuring atty, babz and myself.
the super, c.s. |
This is was nice dude, I like the concept though. First verse was ok, second was coo. Overall I'll give ita 7/10
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