HipHop- ThirdSelf feat. Calamity
 

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titled "Hip Hop"

listenin
beat is pretty nice
verses definatly have a nice flow,delivery,lyrics and everything is definalty on point
overall a real dope track

ur a bitch...ne way



funny...that lil run at the beginning sounded like under water effects


flow ain't bad here...delivery is good

**I found myself wishin this hook wud speed the hell up

2nd person...voice is nice...flow is good...matched 1st person well



Not a bad track...I still don't like u bitches


hahaha..> Q mothafuckas

TRACK WAS PURE FIYA
quality and flow was dope and u had the delivery on lock
beat is ok but the bass sounds poppy to me
the hook sample is TERRIBLE and means the song isnt a RV classic
but still dope choose a better beat. i cud prolly make a better hook sample than that

you fellas know what i thought of this track, its dope, and you all added you're own flava, there wasnt a weak verse here, nice job on this, i appreciated the lyrics and was reminiscing a bit....old school style..lol..stay up.1

shits hot to death.. stop sleepin..

Seven: Dope shit nice slow flow rode the beat real nice the way you made comparisons and stuff

Calamity: nice verse again slow flow good kept it real well didn't lack which was good some nice lyrics too

Tony.Self: Nice rhyming again slow flow riding it again some dope shit here rhyming good this was a nice verse.

Props to all of ya, you all ripped this track Seven especially but yall shined on this beat was good to go off and yall did a decent job.

Fuckin soundclicks down... ima edit this with feed tomorrow..

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Hmm.. production nice.. this beat is ok cept the sample is a little wierd...

seven: dope flow, lyrics, presence... a NICE verse. Very well written shit.

Calam: word word... Flow was on... feelin the lyrics... nice voice... ill.

Tony: Nice... contrast to seven and calams voice is good. Lyrics were good. flow slow low and tight. Dope.

Quality was good all the way through.. dropped slightly on tony's verse i thought.

But overall, a dope track.

woooooooooord. Where's my verse bitches..... lol. Anyways - I hate this beat, but all three flows are nice. Good looks to continuin to drop on here. I'ma have to get on some jams right quick.

lmao.....
I like the Old version.....

Songs are so dope...when they old and remixed.
Especially when unexpected like this.

I want this beat. I could rip it.
Anyways. I liked it alot.
3 good heads....keep it up. -1

no doubt this shit is hott good looks carson

This needs to rise up a bit....

IIght...First Cat..Good Quality..Flow was real laid back...Lyrics Good...Ok..hook is wack..Sorry that sampel aint workin for me..Beat is coo tho...Third cat..Flow was good..another laid back style..lyrics are good too..Third cat..flow was iite..lyrics are coo..This was a good collab..KEep droppin Yall...E z..

Feelin the delivery to this ... i like the flow and the mic pressence ... im feelin the lyrics too ... i dont think that i like the effects tho ... i think that you should leave everything natural ... and have it all come str8 from you ... not from effects ... O damn ... i like the second dudes Voice ... damn thats nice ... his delivery is really nice ... i dont know who is who but he is nice ... damn ... "Hip hops my baby and im bout to come cradle it" <<< NICE ... i like this song ... the hook is funny ... lol ...

Peace !!

~1~

The hook was annoying me but other than that, this was nice track. Lyrics were tight and all three heads were flowing good, the different types of voices formed an interesting change within the song. Presence was strong throughout the whole thing and no bad comments on quality either.

Straight hotness...keep it going, enjoyed listening to this...

DQ

I wasn't really feelin the effect on the first vocals, flow was ok decent delivery, hmm maybe it's on the whole track i dunno if it's soundclick or what, but it sounds wack. Second guy is chill, good flow, delivery could be more pronounced but it's consistent. Third guy was pretty solid like the second. Good drop overall tho, holla at ya boi

dope ass collab..... for some reason tho, i dont really feel the hook...... like the effect u put on it..... that aint hiphop, man!......... i like the speedup alot for the hook, but if u put that effesct on it, i suggest takin it out

I dont even needa give feed on the verses, u all dropped fire..... no messups, nice flow, didnt sound like u rushed at all....... it does sound like CALAM mighta recorded at like 2 am with some of that emotion, but i could tell that he was tryna do a whole breakdown, and thats y emotion was lost......

the verses really carried the track very well.....pc

yea this is pure dopeness...........
lyrics was nice....yall already know that......beat is tight.....i actually like the hook for some odd reason......flow was good with everyone.....delivery was good from all......overall this was a nice track.....i was definitely feelin it.........stay up

im feelin that shit
beat is pretty nice
verses definatly have a nice flow,delivery,lyrics

I already did a track to this and mine was wayyyyyyy better. This was fucking horrible.

I mean, learn to rhyme. >_<

The damn beat is sampled from Hotel California obviously, so yeah, talk about drugs and shit. Not history of Hip-Hop which most of you don't know shit about.

wheres ya audio wiggy ?

the wig.. iknow u .. i saw u here a while back.. and u fuckign sucked.. u probably still fuckign suck... u got beat repeadetly... u got no respect.. take ya faggot ass netcee wannabe black ass to some AA meeting.... your not even CLOSE to calam sev or tony.... period ?

Matter of fuckin fact,

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/1/wigmusic.htm


thats ya soundclick.... now dont evenr post ya bullshit hater coimments in a good thread ever again or ima have u banned for idiocy

Whats up. that kick isnt working for me. Your quality is alright. Good Meaning to the song. The first verse good. Closer was alright. Had meaning to it. But it kinda stalled. 2nd Flow is on point. This is a good verse, deep. Sometimes you would speed up words which kind threw it off. But still good. 3rd guy. I like this. I dont know what the hat has to do with this though. Your verse is alright. Nothing made me really say man.. in this verse. 2nd kat was close to it. Liked his shit alot. Keep this coming yall. Later

I got beat in one tournament because I did a rush record. Big fucking deal.

Check the record bitch. 3-0.

Typing as I listen: Man, you must love reverb. This shit ruined the intro completely IMO. Beat is pretty hot - but reverb is too high in the first verse IMO. Lyrics and flow in the first verse are dead on and net-flow isn't anywhere in the vicinity. Second verse, pretty clear - still too high on the reverb though. Lyrics were on. Chorus - damn, DEF gotta roll that reverb back at least another 30%. It's more effects than beats which is a recipie for poision. Third verse - same thing, reverb was too much, lyrics were solid, flow was great. All in all - coulda been an Album-quality track if the reverb weren't added so goddamn heavyhandedly. Definite banger.

ROFL... ok ? you still suck.. ya soundclick shows it.. bybye

nice shit. Seven, ill flow, lyrics tight as fuck, yo. props on this shit. Good shit

Tony had nice verse too. Pretty dope lyrics, and flow was pretty good.


calam, damn dude. lol hot shit. flow lyrics, damn. tight shit. Can't say more

beat ill too. props on this shit. 9/10 yo

RTF on my track wit Senser pc

Put your fucking money where your mouth is and set up an audio battle.