IllRhymePhonetic vs. OFF~CeNTeR
 

First ot 5 Votes (no k.o.)
No crew,d/r, hate votes
match my bars....
post when you ready...

<---Is ready

IllRhymePhonetic dares to step up...with no flow,
His records aight...considering all his wins are no-shows//
He asked for this battle and its here...Now IRP's hopin,
that I'll drop my pants...even his avatars mouth is wide open//
Syntax posted about siggy length, yours is 40, rhyme...
your about as gay as those 7 dots at the end of your lines//
this dyke wants a belt so bad hes suckin off the sites host,
he thought he wasnt a newbie...Just cuz he has 150 posts//
think you can win with wordplay about crap and shit..?
I wanna battle you alone, dont bring yah dictionary into this//
I drop this one-time, dickriders wonder...yah won-rhyme?//
how can I take him seriously...when he has a crewmate named sun-shine//




*editied for grammar*

My Shit
 

i shatter ur rhymes and cover em with dirt and grime..............
i could spit my hole verse with dots and still wreck yo rhyme...
u were crazy steppin ta me and claimin that im a rook...........
u can call me barry sanders cus u jus got shook....................
kid ya rhymes is took...............prolly bitten like yo style..............tha only thing ur winnin is under biography in ur fuckin profile http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/mem...nfo&userid=3039 ............im tired of these fakes ................. ur rhymes r "off center" like fruitcakes.....not straight...............crooked faggot.........u aint really tryin ta bag shit.....................tha only "experience" u got is from yo"long service" suckin on my prick.*points at sig*

*edited to add link for profile line*

i think i posted a line less, oh well whatever, good verse dawg, ur definatly not a new-b
respect.
Peace.
Uppin

alright man...lets get htese votes in...

upping sleepy heads...

i'ma have to give this to off-center, he just edged it with a few tighter concepts and less filler in his verse.

that I'll drop my pants...even his avatars mouth is wide open//

had me laughing.

vote- off center

1-0...this has been up for a whole day...and only 1 vote...RB can do better htan this...I hope

0-1 uppin niggas
dont sleep
Peace.

Off Center

IllRhymePhonetic dares to step up...with no flow,
His records aight...considering all his wins are no-shows//
He asked for this battle and its here...Now IRP's hopin,
that I'll drop my pants...even his avatars mouth is wide open//
damn your flow is byound off.. work on it.. Opener wasnt bad, follow through suckd
Syntax posted about siggy length, yours is 40, rhyme...
your about as gay as those 7 dots at the end of your lines//
this dyke wants a belt so bad hes suckin off the sites host,
he thought he wasnt a newbie...Just cuz he has 150 posts//
first part COULDA been good, but it fell off..more like a filler
think you can win with wordplay about crap and shit..?
I wanna battle you alone, dont bring yah dictionary into this//
I drop this one-time, dickriders wonder...yah won-rhyme?//
how can I take him seriously...when he has a crewmate named sun-shine//
end wasnt bad.. Had iight punch to it, nothing special, personal punch was iight...Dictionary part wasnt bad either

Over all like a 6 for a verse.. Lackd on W/p and hard punchs.. Multis were weak, an vocab was ok.. Metaphors were lacking big time i thought..


i shatter ur rhymes and cover em with dirt and grime..............
i could spit my hole verse with dots and still wreck yo rhyme...
ok line
u were crazy steppin ta me and claimin that im a rook...........
u can call me barry sanders cus u jus got shook....................
weak
kid ya rhymes is took...............prolly bitten like yo style..............tha only thing ur winnin is under biography in ur fuckin profile http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/mem...nfo&userid=3039 .....
its ok
.......im tired of these fakes ................. ur rhymes r "off center" like fruitcakes.....not straight...............crooked faggot.........u aint really tryin ta bag shit.....................tha only "experience" u got is from yo"long service" suckin on my prick.*points at sig*
ok punch.. other than that kinda weak..

lieka 6.9 for a verse.. You had one or two lines that werent bad, but ya metaphors were down, same with hard punchs an dope mulits... keep elevaten tho..

Vote= Rhyme Phonetic due to the fact he came betta, a slightly harder witha few bars..

one

1-1....Im goin on vacation...this better be finished by the time I make it to a comp

aight m vote is gonna go to off center cuz i feel his verse was just a lil better. this was a pretty even battle in punches, but it was a good one. I.R.P. hasd some nice stuff, but o.c. just kinda edged out by a lil bit in my eyez.
holla
~1~

THIS BATTLE IS GONNA GO TO OFF-CENTER CUZ I THOUGHT THAT HIS VERSE WAS JUST BETTER THAN IRP'S...HIS PUNCHES WERE STRONGER....AND SO WAS HIS VERSE...

that I'll drop my pants...even his avatars mouth is wide open//

^^^FUNNY SHIT..

VOTE=OFF-CENTER

IM OUT

off center had better everything..
i.r.p. needs a lot of help. thats that.

well....its 4-1 roght now....okay the votes IRp...

I dont kniow where IRP is.....but Im upping for the win right now...

.

4-1.

Up.

"His records aight...considering all his wins are no-shows//"
AND OFFCENTER JUST FLOWED BETTER
THAT LINE WAS STR8 VOTE=OFF CENTER

5-1 I win if IRP okays it...

sorry, my comps been down all week, good shit Off.
Peace.