.MictoriouS. vs .K.onfliktz
 

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Check in by: 01-22-05 at 01:05 PM

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Closed - Expired / old battle win

.MictoriouS. has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-22-05 12:07 PM.

.K.onfliktz has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-22-05 12:24 PM.

Voted For: .MictoriouS.

I'd say Mic took this. Konflict's verse seemed to jump all over the place and wasn't straight forward. Kon had more personals (I guess) but didn't have punches, and you need a couple good punches to win a battle.

ok who the fuck are you kid dont ever vote on my shit again

uppin this shit motha fuckaz..........................

Voted For: .MictoriouS.

you won this so baly man nice job you won twith better hits better rhymes better structure and i enjoyed it homie nice job

alright thats 2 votes dq'd 0-0 lets start over. people who can vote plz vote. if you are vote illiterate. please FUCK OFF

This was feedback posted for .K.onfliktz
 

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Voted For: .K.onfliktz

*Quality in the verse but how did they come off?*

.K.onfliktz: The thing that stood out the most about this verse never usually stands out in txt battles normally. -Was the flow. This was like reading an audio!
opener was sheer brilliance, I loved the breaking bread with pigeons and the praising wack!!
Close was very nice, good personal with the illiteracy, and nice play on the golf saying.
Structure was tighter than tight, no playing or stretching flowed like perfection. Punches were hard hitting and on a higher level.

.MictoriouS: This was a cool verse bro. i liked it.
Opener was weak i think, could have come a lot harder than that. Lines seemed stretched and the punch was a little off target.
Close was better, very nice multis and good punch.
Your verse had plenty nice multis and wordplay but ya punches were not near as hard. And your structure was quite off too.

Haha, mictorious got two bullshit votes.

They dont even know wat they talking bout. No hate to you Mic, you cool, and talented but even you prob dont agree wiv those votes like they are

exactly. word dex. i feel you on that...haha two bullshit votes indeed...

Voted For: .K.onfliktz

Yeah, .mictorious. Breaks Bread.....When He's Feeding The Pigeons
Hopped Off The Elevator, Kid Praises Wack Like It's A Fuckin Religion
good opener
Spittin' Shrooms, Dumbass Forgot He's the reason we laughin
Your Raps Is Garbage, Shit, Even Oscar Uses 'Em as a trashbin
work on ur spellin, decent punch
Dope? Nope! That Aint The Reason Why The Cainines sniffin u
Ya You "Ahead Of Ya Dawgs" Sick Fuck, Illest? He spittin the truth
pretty decent, kinda weak tho
Look in your Moms Room, It's Fact, That Kon Drops Bang-'ers
Fuck It, have this kid see'in more colours then power rangers
good punc
Math illiterate, Said 1 hour to drop, But set it For Thirty
Fuck GolfI'll "pluck Ya Chicken". This kid still missin the birdie
nice closer, punch landed

Deliver you to the gate of Death, here’s what gonna happen next as the K-Gets-Neutralized .. !!
You’ll ascend Stairway to Heaven, followed by a Leap of Faith, After-Life-Suicide.. !!
decent punch
No one gonna 'Vote For You' like Bad-Country-Rulers.. !!
Fuck that, watch Mic 'Drop K' like Clumsy-Jewelers.. !!
weak punch here
Beware-Bitch, I Bear-switch blades, so say your Prayers-Quick .. !!
If greatest fears give an erection .. Then I got you Scared-Stiff .. !!
kinda good here, punch was aight
I Choke-This-Cretin, me sayin you're a Joke-Is-Needless .. !!
Get your 'penis fondled by Einstein' if you want a Stroke-Of-Genius .. !!
decent
You're not Shootin-For-Wealth, Just gettin Bruises-And-Welts .. !!
Of course you stay "strapped".. Cause your father keeps Usin-His-Belt .. !!
decent closer

Overall I think that Killah took this one though,
punches were harder, flow was good, and had a better
structure too…no hate to both

thats what im going to do but i want him to feel confident if he wins by his lil d/r's then i can just d/q him and win LOL

ha ha .Konflictz is dope :thumbup:

D/R !?!?! wtf ..

I don't even no Neptune or phive ..

Voted For: .K.onfliktz

i think kon got this one w/ harder punches and better wordplay. yo shit was decent homie. real talk. no hate, i was feelin it all tha way thru
lockdown-you had a nice verse, but kinda off track in some parts. some parts rhymed ignorantly, or just was irrelevant. no hate, just elevate on that yo. but yo shit was ight, just wasnt feelin it all tha way thru.
overall-kon took this one in my vote. i think he came a lil more prepared, and harder wit punches and shit like i said.

uppin this for yall...and RTF plz. bottom link in sig.

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