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Os1ris vs Blackmage
Battle Rules:
10-20 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Hate Votes No D/R Votes Minimum posts to vote: 50 Check in by: 01-24-05 at 07:54 PM Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in. |
Blackmage has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-22-05 07:55 PM.
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Os1ris has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-22-05 07:55 PM.
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all your words are like a cancer patients dying breath repentence cause in every verse you Only Spit 1 Really Ill Sentence(spells os1ris)
rapverse needs to check how did you even get admittance Skills Is Rated 1st stated obsolete and good riddence(os1ris backwards) my bars will lock you away i'm a lyrical alkatraz wit power pound on this coward to powder his talcom ass in the middle yo malcom ass is sittin odd in the head(1 is odd) judgin by yo lyrics you really are the god of the dead(osiris) you say you from the squared circle but what ring's in question just so you know you and ya lyrics are as fake as pro wrestling i gotta give it to you, you got the heart to score cause this guy is 1-4 and he still wants more you soft core sophmore my verse is a neck amputant where ya head at, you'll win when the nets win a championship out my mouth is "sick shit" so i cough and flush i'll toss u up cause you ain't just soft u plush so often lush my lyrics pumped cross and u crushed and i ain't even gotta rap when i talk you blush you softened up and off as fuck don't try to win or act grown mc hammer has a better chance of gettin a house loan whatever this verse is blah anyway good luck |
Blackmage sorry no support for ya, you get shitted on dude/
I got ya beat when you come unarmed like roman statues// You winnin is like roseanne being a dodgeball player/ And you get no respect for originality like your avatar// You could be an airpilot and still never be flyweight/ Your nothin but dollars thrills not even worth the net space// Id say you had a good verse but id be straight lyin to you/ I'll step on mage's soul like I put my feet in your shoes// Os1ris is sick and mage is nothin but lame talk/ I beat and run over any black like playground asphalt// *finisher* I'll stretch my bars and try to make the punch work like half these kids/ Mage tries to be black, but in the end he's still a redskin, like Clinton Portis// |
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Voted For: Os1ris
V/os1ris.......he came harder wit punchs an his creativity wit them an his vocab was good his structure was also....blackmage....u had sum good lines but it wasn't good enough to get my vote i seen better from u....u werent really that consistent wit creative diss's an vocab.... punchs=os1ris vocab=os1ris structure=os1ris opener=black mage closer=os1ris overall=os1ris *RETURN THE FAVOR* Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Os1ris
dat was hot u got my vote 4 originality, punches, multis, opena, closa, & personals Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
you've seen better. hey i have fans. thanks for the votes rv uppin
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Voted For: Blackmage
blackmage gets this...... damn nice mutlies in there blackmage...but tone them down a little bit and work on your punches more instead of making it all about a multi....multies dont matter that much when your text battling...... i felt like both of your verses could have been better.....no real personals in either one of them....punchlines...i have to go with blackmage...his just hit a little harder....work on your creativity osiris....your punches have potential to hit hard...but you have to be more creative with them...same for you blackmage...just not as much.....multis go to blackmage....wordplay....none really in either verse....so i have to vote on punches pretty much......blackmage work on that structure...not too good.......so blackmage gets this on better punches......PLEASE return the favor with a vote in my battle vs. Dee Block....please explain your vote also........thank you.... |
Voted For: Os1ris
i give this vote to os1ris he had betta punches.....mage had betta flow...os1ris had betta structure and vocab i give this vote 2 os1ris Blackmage sorry no support for ya, you get shitted on dude/ I got ya beat when you come unarmed like roman statues// 8/10 good opener Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Uppin this thing ^()()()()()()(((^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^)(&()*&)*^
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yo i'm uppin this bitch for votes so r.v get at me
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This was feedback posted for Os1ris
checkin polls........................................
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Voted For: Os1ris
Voted for Os1ris Many may now n many may not I look for Flow n Punches when I vote Os1ris had the better punches n semi better flow i like how he tied it all into a nice verse the flow was good n his punches were harder Mage i liked how u spelled his name backwards wit lyrics etc.. but that was good rhyme work but not hard on the punches ya flow was good no doubt but wit large vocab n sum lines i had to restart n try to get back in rhythm so the vote goes to Os1ris Not hatin us votin |
yo uppin this shit so yall i don't wanna be rude but hurry up wit the votes
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lets gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
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Voted For: Blackmage
ur shit is hot u keed doing the damn thing......... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
^^^^^^^delete that vote and UPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP PPPPPPPiinnnnn
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yo go get that last vote deleted homie. we need to keep this fair just like i got your votes deleted you should get mine erased maybe one of these days someone can get this shit right
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I'm uppin this and by the way os1ris, to make it fair we could just get the votes on this battle reset and start from scratch so what's up. Hit me back p.m. post it don't matter
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I mean the 1-1 thing is cool really dont matter just want some people to vote fairly on this shit lets go yall
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bumpinthis thoing ahghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
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This was feedback posted for Os1ris
nice drop o u got sum good wordplay & decent punches in this battle
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Voted For: Blackmage
i think blackmage won because he had good vocab really hard hittin punches good structure good multis and a great opener os1ris u had good structure u need a lil work on ur vocab u had a pretty good opener u had some good punches overall both battles were pretty good favorite blackmage lines: you say you from the squared circle but what ring's in question just so you know you and ya lyrics are as fake as pro wrestling i gotta give it to you, you got the heart to score cause this guy is 1-4 and he still wants more you soft core sophmore my verse is a neck amputant where ya head at, you'll win when the nets win a championship out my mouth is "sick shit" so i cough and flush i'll toss u up cause you ain't just soft u plush favorite os1ris lines: You could be an airpilot and still never be flyweight/ Your nothin but dollars thrills not even worth the net space// Id say you had a good verse but id be straight lyin to you/ I'll step on mage's soul like I put my feet in your shoes// Os1ris is sick and mage is nothin but lame talk/ I beat and run over any black like playground asphalt// |
Up this yall we need some votes to end this get at us
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Voted For: Blackmage
siris... you came cool on this. you had some creative concepts......and nice structure (but drop the //'s at the end of your lines). your flow wasnt bad either. next time, try to add some personals. also, try to fine tune your punches a little better. they were cool, but they could've been sharper. when you get a 10 bar line limit (20 lines)...either you use up as much of your limited lines as you can, or you really shut them down in a few. you didnt do either brutha. next time, use the lines to your advantage.....and rip 'em apart (whoever it may be). please dont take any of my remarks as haterish homie, i just want to help.......word. keep up the good work. i'll keep an eye out for your future pieces. mage... you came pretty original. i liked your flow..........and your structure was nice (except that first line....owww! lol.) you had some pretty nice ideas that you ran with in here. right on. some of that shit was pretty funny......however, you need to fine tune your punches as well homie. your vocab was fairly decent, good job. you had some basic multies...but they worked. next time, be careful with the self glorification. alot of people dont like voting on that kind of shit (i liked it though). good job fellas...........continue to hold it down. (p.s.- osiris, good luck with the new crew.) oner... ...the super.....c.s. |
Up this yall we need some votes to end this get at us
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Voted For: Blackmage
jea blackmage got this easily...he had an all around better verse....and his structure was easier to read..and had much stronger punches osiris' Wtf..ive seen better shit from you...ur punches was off...ok flow though,...structure was blah overall;;; blackmage got this easily Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
yo up this this almost over yall get at me come on.......
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^^^isnt that an unexplained vote by lord.wun....hmm......
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up this so we can end this.........................
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This was feedback posted for Os1ris
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This was feedback posted for Os1ris
lol shit this battle was aiight...........good luck to both
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Voted For: Blackmage
all your words are like a cancer patients dying breath repentence cause in every verse you Only Spit 1 Really Ill Sentence(spells os1ris) rapverse needs to check how did you even get admittance i love this bar for what reason i don't know it just fits well i would break it down it on just so onesided to me blackmage got this for all around better structure rimescheme and general punches and wordplay... os1ris you need to step up you rime scheme was way off point and your closer theres no need to tell everyone thats your finisher ... |
Voted For: Blackmage
aight not the strongest battle in the world boith came pretty weak, didnt have any creativity, no hate tho Black ya had the more consistant verse i guess, never really had any nice noticeable punches, but some of your stuff hit harder, ya had the better flow an what personals ya both had ta offer, Black took them with eaze Os, no hate hommie, just keep elevating, ya verses seemed ta have more fillers than anythin, thats not good man, thats why my vote goes against you Ya gotta learn ta play off what u know about your oppenent, aan use harder disses towards him, all the stuff y'all had ta offer was a lil played NO HATE Just step it up a little... could y'all RTF in any of my battles ya see floatin around Front Linez, i got shit loads of battles so it shouldnt be hard thanks Peace |
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