J.R. Freeze vs phive
 

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Check in by: 01-22-05 at 11:15 PM

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phive has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-22-05 10:47 PM.

J.R. Freeze has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-22-05 11:00 PM.

okay man imma school you man,

This kid thinks he can step up to Phive, with yo bith ass talking shit, its a suprise, that yo still alive,//
kid you cant play this game, cuz ya shit is lame, fuck who would rap with such a gay name?//
i take aim, at ya brain, im like bleach son im gonna leave a stain, you wanna hit puberty so ya rubbin ya ball sack wit fucking rogaine,//
im not one to be messed wit, cuz i take niggaz out wit one hit, ya cant hit shit with your spit, keep tryin son its like climbing out of a mud pit,//
my wraith is like gettin casted by a warlock, knock knock, jr freeze just got shot, ill tie you in a knot tryin ta beat phive, kid you wont get alot,//
im reading you like the sports page, i destroy you with much rage, my rhymes are wild, they kept in a cage, im reading 700c on the merkin you gauge,//
now time ta finish this joke, imma make ya choke, when ya read my note, cuz imma leave ya rappin style like nelly, ya shit is broke.//

(sum punchs........)
Light Me On Fire Is How You Get This ~Thug Burned~ On Ya Knees So Much Ya Azz Is Gettin' ~Rug Burn~ Ya Came Out At Birth With "Half A Leg" So It Explains Why You ~STUB-BORN~ (Stubborn)

My Rhymes Kill Ya When You ~See Text~ Take This Loss Fair And Don't Be A "Snot" Cause I'll Just Choke Ya Wit ~Kleenex~

Your Skull Is Where I ~Place My Nine~ My "Bars" Hold Ya In "Jail" So ~Face Ya Time~ I'll Wrap My "Watch" Around Your "Hip" To Show Ya How Much Ya ~WAIST My TIME~

I Got A Lyrical ~Mind n Its Great~ My Words Got You Trapped And Even If You Looked On Your Keyboard, You Still Couldn't ~Find an Escape~ I ~Rhyme To Create~ Hatred And Jealousy, So That's When A ~Nine Can Relate~

Fuk What Ya Said~ My Bullets Are Like Ya Favortie Songs Cause They Get~Stuck In Ya Head
I'll ~Plumit Ya~ I'll Eat Your Rhymes And Still Then I Couldn't ~Stomach Ya~

(finish this noobbbb....)
Man-Your-On-Crack Ya Plans-Is-Wack, I Snap Ya Wrist-Back And Leave Ya HANDS~DE~CAPT(Hadicaped)/
You Like Bum Implants Cuz Ya Always Gonna BE-BEHIND, I'll Beat Ya Ova Da Head Wit A Book Untill I Can READ-YA-MIND/((ovERRr))

man those lines are in your other raps man what the fuck you cheatin homes and anyway you went over the limit man

right son how i cheat an i went under the limit bitch

you used those rhymes in other raps and shit anyway nice job no hatin

Voted For: J.R. Freeze

i give my vote to freeze he had betta punches n flow

Light Me On Fire Is How You Get This ~Thug Burned~ On Ya Knees So Much Ya Azz Is Gettin' ~Rug Burn~ Ya Came Out At Birth With "Half A Leg" So It Explains Why You ~STUB-BORN~ (Stubborn)
8/10 good opening

My Rhymes Kill Ya When You ~See Text~ Take This Loss Fair And Don't Be A "Snot" Cause I'll Just Choke Ya Wit ~Kleenex~
7/10

Your Skull Is Where I ~Place My Nine~ My "Bars" Hold Ya In "Jail" So ~Face Ya Time~ I'll Wrap My "Watch" Around Your "Hip" To Show Ya How Much Ya ~WAIST My TIME~
6/10

I Got A Lyrical ~Mind n Its Great~ My Words Got You Trapped And Even If You Looked On Your Keyboard, You Still Couldn't ~Find an Escape~ I ~Rhyme To Create~ Hatred And Jealousy, So That's When A ~Nine Can Relate~
7/10

Fuk What Ya Said~ My Bullets Are Like Ya Favortie Songs Cause They Get~Stuck In Ya Head
I'll ~Plumit Ya~ I'll Eat Your Rhymes And Still Then I Couldn't ~Stomach Ya~
8/10

(finish this noobbbb....)
Man-Your-On-Crack Ya Plans-Is-Wack, I Snap Ya Wrist-Back And Leave Ya HANDS~DE~CAPT(Hadicaped)/
You Like Bum Implants Cuz Ya Always Gonna BE-BEHIND, I'll Beat Ya Ova Da Head Wit A Book Untill I Can READ-YA-MIND/((ovERRr))
9/10 good closure

ma vote goez 2 freeze

whered he get those rhymes from if u prove it den iight but i dont belive he did

ma bad i wuz frontin anyways no hatred between dat vote iight peace

uuppppinnn on thissss battttlleeee ......................

Voted For: J.R. Freeze

JR KILLED PHIVE!!!!
seriously, jr came wit da punches, hard hitting and da metas were hard as well, ur structure is fucked up but thats about it...7/10 solid drop.
phive u lacked ant creativity ur ounches were weak and everything u typed was played...structure waz fucked up as well..ELEVATE
J.R PLZ PLZ PLZ RTF IN MY SIG ON EITHER BATTLE THEY GETTIN SLEPT ON U KNO WHAT ITS LIKE..

uppppppiinnnnn.................................... ......

Voted For: J.R. Freeze


J.R.
Wow This Battle Was One Sided
Vocabulary-J.R.
Strcture-J.R.
Punches-J.R.
Worplay-J.R.
Rhyme Scheme-J.R.

Bacially J.R.'s Verse Came Out Harder Through Out The Whole Thing It Never Fell Of Once Had Multi's Really Enjoyed This Verse, One Of The Best Lyrcist On Rv,

Phive, You Need Elivation Try Reading Some Tutorials And Battles To Help You Out, Also Add Multi's And Meta's In You Verse

Over All J.R. Got My Vote One Sided Battle, On Punches Vocabulary, Meta's Multi's And Rhyme Scheme....

Vote-J.R.

Return The Favor Link In Sig

Voted For: J.R. Freeze

IDK who ima give it to..this shit was pretty close...Structure from both was awful...Flow from JR i was feeling more cuz he had better wordplay...Phive stretch out couple of his lines so that threw me off...Punches came OK from both cornaz of da ring so its a draw...Personals were sorta lacking in dis battle but JR took em...Vocab i give to phive...Multis was also lacking in thiz...

v/JR...for overall better verse..good battle...pretty close match

ehaterver man this is bullshittttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt tttttt

Voted For: J.R. Freeze

Freeze won this one. I had a little easier time readin phive's but i think the punches in freeze's verse outclassed phive by way too much. the multi...ness of his verse was pretty good too. a lil difficult to read but not enough to effect the quality. anyway phive's verse didnt have any real good punches. this one goes to freeze. return the favor.

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