Golden shellz vs phive
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 10 LInes
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No hate votes

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-25-05 at 11:01 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

phive has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-22-05 11:04 PM.

Golden shellz has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-22-05 11:09 PM.

aight dawg you wanted this shit,

golden shellz? haha ya name sellz, ill be ringin ya neck like church bellz, you sellin yo busty rapstyle to me, just to prove that shit smellz,//
im like a rap awat team, making ya face green, im on you like jack climbing the bean, my ears steam, with yo rap scheme, wake up kid you suck, so adjust yo dream,//
imma rip you like a piece of wet paper, you aint fittin the rap suit, just cuz your raper, im knocking your block off, cuz phive is a shaper,//
dont sit and frown when you read this rap i give you, i just happened to slip through, phive made due, by defeating golden shellz and his whole crew//
I won this battle so i wonder if this kid darted, gloden shellz got bombarded, ohives rap skills are guarded, nigga i schooled you before i started,//

i think u need to bump up them wins cuz its skill u missin
u too gassed up u need to cool it now like new edition
head crack~lead tap~ this sucka dont notice yet
more loses than wins turn it around u still wont be a vet
no questions asked~smash ya ass~the way potatoes get mashed
ima keep u in check like my payroll was gettin cashed
ya whole family is fucked up, u and ya next of kin
u tryna be like my RAPPERZ u wanna be AS SICK AS HIM
u couldnt win,even if u stoppped rappin and got ya best friend
heres a little math friend - {f-r-i} equals the end....

um a little explanation:

u too gassed up u need to cool it now like new edition
cool it now was new editions first song

u tryna be like my RAPPERZ u wanna be AS SICK AS HIM
my rapperz name is as sick as him^^^^

yeah half of ya shit didnt make sense man elevate and make sense bext time man

did make sense??? no beef but homie ur tellin me to elevate????

yeah dawg no hatin but i didnt get that last part though man

its simple spell friend, f-r-i-e-n-d. when u subtract the f-r-i ur left with end. get it??

iight iight uppin this battle get in dis poll man~

Voted For: Golden shellz

Reason I Voted For Golden Shellz Is Coz His Structure Was There Along With Some What Rhyme Scheme And His Punches Where Decent Came Clean His Vocabulary Was Neat Some Decent Ish, Also Coz His WordPlay Came Out Better Sounding One Of The Thing Opponent Did Not Have, He Had Some Multi's Here That Was Decent And You Need To Add More Meta's In You Verse But Overall...8/10

Phive
Wow Your Structure Needs Alot Of Work And Punches Was Weak
I Mean There Was Nothing There, You Rhyme Scheme Needs Work And You Have Basic Vocabulary Through Out Your Whole Verse....
WordPlay Needs Alot Of Help And Add Some Multi's And Meta's Here It'll Do Good

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This was feedback posted for Golden shellz
 

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Voted For: Golden shellz

this battle was terrible lol. but i think golden shellz won barely. only cuz phive didnt reall diss nobody that much. cuz GS's verse didnt make much sense n didnt hav ehtat many good punches at all. but he had better structure and the better opener. but idk what was goin on wit tha tcloser. phive. work on ya structure homie that makes u lose madpoints.
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Voted For: Golden shellz

lol, one sided battle

punches- GS, came strong all da way....phive ur punches R SOFT LIKE TISSUE

personals- none.....work on dat both of yall

multi's- both...but GS's made more sense homie

closing- GS closin was Ok, coulda worded it betta and he coulda came stronger but it was still betta dan phive's

v/G. Shellz

Voted For: Golden shellz

ight diz battle was good but here's how my shit go:
opena: phive
punches: both
multis: both
structure: golden shells
creativity: both
closa: golden shells
it was real close da whole way but golden shells wasn't overlapping his rhymes; & phive i didn't 1 line afta i'ma rip u like a piece of wet paper; when u said, "U Ain't Fittin Da Rap Suit, Just Cuz Ur Raper'' huh oh yeah return da favor

uppin fo some votes people and playassssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss

seems to be a knockout so far so uppin for one more vote doggs

uppin fo some real votes playasssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss ssss

uppin fo some true emcee botes man this guy just has hios possee on his side yall know i schooled this fool

Voted For: Golden shellz

ok you win...

5: you where all around wack.....you need to elavfte alot....
your structure was way ooff
atleast fix oyur structure....also use more personals and learn how to make punches...and i see you like multies but you still need to practice with them a lil bit...no hate but your wack


shells: i think your new so you are fairly good for being new but still wack...you had perfect structure and you wordplay was attempted but didnt really hit that hard....all in all you where also hella wack...both need to elevate alot..thenyou should rematch.....
shells wins this becuz of structure..

vote=golden shells