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Epic vs Empire
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6-10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Feeding No Dickriding Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 01-23-05 at 06:57 AM Must drop verse in 50 minutes after check in. |
Empire has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-23-05 06:30 AM.
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Epic has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-23-05 06:31 AM.
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Establishing my might, but epic cant handle da punches....
Like endurance tests wit fat bitches performing crunches... Too hot for Epic, Den stay away from dis candle.......... Call me a toddler, w/e u bring will b like a toy 4 me 2 "Dismantle". U got Fab in Ur avy, but i cud giv u "street dreams" by layin u out on da curb. I mean shit,u MUST b dreaming of beatin me...its JUST absurd. Ur alias is Hip Hop, well one swinga dis punch will make ur kidney pop. An' yeah Epic can "pack heat" problem is hes lost da key 2 da lock! Punches rock ur jaw, leave u wit fragile & lopsided expression.. Epics skillz descend & r not nessasary like business men @ da WSDepression! Dun.. only explanation im doin is da last line da WSDepression is da wall street depression, and basically business men was not needed and his skillz desend like money u shud git it..<hiddan punch lol.. |
His Imaginative Scheme Of Beating Me Is Like Walt Disney
Coz This Kid Get's Abused Daily How Bobby Hit's Whitney Call Me An Emperor How I'm Owning This Kid Empire I'll Whipe His Entire Career Coz C.A.L.I's Help Can't Amplify~Ya Kid's Skill Is A Retards Walking On A Tight Line At The Circus I Burn His Fuel Out, So Like Gas Stations He's Out Of Service Kid Is So Whack.........That His Name Had To Be All Stolen His Rhyme Scheme Is Shit, It Came Straight Out Of Is Collin Like Fab He Has To Breath Coz I Left His Chest All Swollen A Toy At The Store He Was Playable So Now I Own Em Let's See Hmm I'm Sure Yall Know That Walt Disney Is An Imaginated Scheme And Bobby Brown Hit's Whitney Houston And Uhh Retarded Kids Walking A Tight Line??? Ha You Need Concentration FOr That His Name Is Empire And That Use To Be C.A.L.I's Old Name On Here Still Don't UnderStand Then Don't Vote Don't SLeep On This.......... |
Nice Verse Kid, Well Done Homes...Good Luck..........................
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This was feedback posted for Empire
checkin pollz.....................................
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This was feedback posted for Empire
for some reason i get the feelin that this isnt the real Empire..... i mean, he hardly explained anything..... and its NOT in CAPSLOCK
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Voted For: Empire
Close battle! Epic His Imaginative Scheme Of Beating Me Is Like Walt Disney Coz This Kid Get's Abused Daily How Bobby Hit's Whitney ^cool opener Call Me An Emperor How I'm Owning This Kid Empire I'll Whipe His Entire Career Coz C.A.L.I's Help Can't Amplify~Ya ^not feelin it Kid's Skill Is A Retards Walking On A Tight Line At The Circus I Burn His Fuel Out, So Like Gas Stations He's Out Of Service ^nice one Kid Is So Whack.........That His Name Had To Be All Stolen His Rhyme Scheme Is Shit, It Came Straight Out Of Is Collin ^decent decent Like Fab He Has To Breath Coz I Left His Chest All Swollen A Toy At The Store He Was Playable So Now I Own Em ^like the closer Overall solid drop. Vocab n structure were tight and I was feeling your flow. Had some good punches and personals in there,sometimes bit played though. Wordplay was good,some creativity here and there.Keep at it... Empire Establishing my might, but epic cant handle da punches.... Like endurance tests wit fat bitches performing crunches... ^no punch but good wordplay Too hot for Epic, Den stay away from dis candle.......... Call me a toddler, w/e u bring will b like a toy 4 me 2 "Dismantle". ^nice one U got Fab in Ur avy, but i cud giv u "street dreams" by layin u out on da curb. I mean shit,u MUST b dreaming of beatin me...its JUST absurd. ^hehe,like it Ur alias is Hip Hop, well one swinga dis punch will make ur kidney pop. An' yeah Epic can "pack heat" problem is hes lost da key 2 da lock! ^1st line bleh,2nd good Punches rock ur jaw, leave u wit fragile & lopsided expression.. Epics skillz descend & r not nessasary like business men @ da WSDepression! ^hah,dope closer Good job man! Had mad creative punches, some personals and flow was on lock. Vocab n structure were straight to the point, good wordplay, made me laugh here and there... |
Voted For: Empire
very close battle... imma have to give it to empire.... heres the reasons why... empire you had some decent punches in there and some good multies that was what won you the battle.. your flow was on point but you need to work on your structure.. epic you had some good punches in there aswell but you fell off on the c.a.l.i line thats played already and the guy's only been here for 3 days i think... some of your lines i felt couldav been better... overall i thought empire won this because of his harder punches and his multies... empire you need to work on your structure but apart from that this battle was good.... return the favour links in the sig... pz. no hate :thumbup: |
Voted For: Epic
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Voted For: Epic
Normal Punches-Epic, harder hitting and more of them. No self glorifying either. Empire, ok punches, but you self glorified which doesn't count, and brings down the verse. Personal Punches-Tie, both had one, and both weren't that strong. Metaphors-Epic, not that great metas, but more original than Empire's. Empire, ok metas, but not that original or hard hitting. Multiple Rhymes-Neither Structure-Epic, barely got this. Try to not use ......... and ~ to make it work. Empire, too many stretched lines, and too many ...... Flow- Epic, punches just kept flowing, did fall off much. Empire, fell of at the end, and a little in the verse. Word Play- Neither Epic- not your best verse, but you won it. Your punches kept coming and that's what won it. Use more wordplay and try more personals. Empire- One of your best verses, but not good enough. Try better personals and try more wordplay. No Hate Just An Honest Voter v/Epic One Vote, One Battle, One Win. |
W/E 2-1 to me.....uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
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This was feedback posted for Empire
just checkin polls...shit epic lost by far...epic you need to re word your words they are mad fucked..bad grammer
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Alright Homes, Thanks For The Feed I Guess Good Looking....................
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Voted For: Epic
Ok I vote for u cuz u had better flow and punches the empire did i like the cali line that was a good punch but anyways Empire wtf was that u really need to elavate badly man and Epic I liked ur verse with the punches and multis but u could of done a lil better with ur personals but over all u did really good so my vote goes to Vote goes to- Epic Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Empire
votin empire cuz ya structure seemed betta 2 me...it all kinda coincided Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Epic
nice drop between you 2...pretty good battle here empire...u had some pretty decent punches, the flow as good, vocab was aight, and the structure was in place, some of the punches were kinda weak though but overall u had a good drop, epic. u had a good drop too, punches were in place, and the structure was good, and u had some pretty decent persona's overall, u had a good drop too... overall i think that Epic took this one though, came a little harder in the punches and the flow + structure was good with it to NO HATE TO BOTH THOUGH |
Voted For: Epic
v/ Epic ehhh, pretty close in mah book..... empire man you had some nice flow for the most part, but you really stretched a few of your lines...doesnt help.... punches werent all dat great, you had a couple good ones but nuttin really special....your best was the "heat" one.... you had nice personals though... epicman, you really held it down in this battle i think.... definetly feeling your punches... you had em spread out through most of the battle, which helps out a lot...and had a good amount of personals as well, probably better ones than Empire... flow was just about as good.... so really you take it on the punches.... good battle for both of you.......... |
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Voted For: Empire
Empire im giving it to you coz i thought u r verse was stronger. u both need better concepts for the punches but you both doing ok. I thought u had a gd structure to.. just keep wrkin on it. Epic man wts the point on playing of of fabs song breather lol tis wack. Anyways keep it up your both obviously on the same level just keep practicing son n youll be there. peace breakdown: Punches= Empire Structure= both Wordplay=neither Personals Empire (neither had many) Yea so just keep it up man!! |
Yeah yeah uppinnnnnn..................................damn.
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Weerd, Bullshit Votes, Upping This..........................
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Voted For: Epic
i think u won this by a lil man..................... |
Voted For: Empire
i voted for empire coz i like the way his punches sounded better empire punches were good best one Establishing my might, but epic cant handle da punches.... Like endurance tests wit fat bitches performing crunches... structure was gopd flow was good also epic equally as good punches best one Kid Is So Whack.........That His Name Had To Be All Stolen His Rhyme Scheme Is Shit, It Came Straight Out Of Is Collin ^^ that was hilarious structure was good but i feel as if i heard that line about boby and walt disney in another battle already |
Voted For: Epic
diz was an one sided battle da whole way but here's my vote: opener: epic vocab: epic structure: epic multis: epic punches: both personals: epic closer: epic e just came harder den empire did point blank but empire if u would have elevated more u would get da votes |
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