The Dex vs Empire
 

Battle Rules:

6 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Feeding
No Dickriding

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 01-26-05 at 09:50 AM

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Empire has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-23-05 09:50 AM.

I'll destroy this fag, leave him BLACK & BLUE like UK football racists..
Battling me really...he jus tripped coz Dex couldnt tie his laces.
Mike skinner in ur avy? well, I'll make u jump outta ur "SKIN" b4 u grab da "MIC".
But da words "DOPE" & "DEX" in da same line, to us all it jus dont sound rite.
Attempting ur verse, u just booked yaself a free post-mortem.
N id demand Dex payed me respect...but he cant afford-em..

Dun..........dont git ma punchs den dont vote den.

The Dex has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-23-05 08:30 PM.

Check the links in the verse peeps.


Empire-this names familiar. I remember it being the most hated
It was fate you took the hate off CALIs plate..
………………………………..cos your probably related

And if not close cousins then best of bum-chums
But his verses are skilled wen yours are just humdrum!

Im a samurai in this game, your just a TumTum*
If only the birth control pills never ran out..
………………………………..curse your Dumb Mum!

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*TumTum was onr of the Three Ninja Kids. if you saw the film you'd remember.

Voted For: The Dex

Chekkkkkkkin polllls...................................if i could vote cuz im in dexes crew,,,,i wud vote 4 him........empire.......dawg i heard shit like u were awesome ive even seen otha battles frm u and u do betta than dat....any wayz returnrhe favour in the bottom battle me vs diplosive

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^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^shit sorry fuk posted in wrng place or kliked wrng shit.sorry dwags take dat out

Voted For: The Dex

The Dex - Good spit man, flowed well.. liked the style, and you had some good punches.

Best Line - Empire-this names familiar. I remember it being the most hated
It was fate you took the hate off CALIs plate..
………………………………..cos your probably related

Worst Line - And if not close cousins then best of bum-chums
But his verses are skilled wen yours are just humdrum!

Empire - iight spit man, you got iight flow and some pretty hard hitten punches.

Best Line - Attempting ur verse, u just booked yaself a free post-mortem.
N id demand Dex payed me respect...but he cant afford-em..

Worst Line - I'll destroy this fag, leave him BLACK & BLUE like UK football racists..
Battling me really...he jus tripped coz Dex couldnt tie his laces.

OVERALL - This battle wasnt to bad. My vote is for Dex. He had the better overall verse, with harder punches and better flow. Empire, work on your flow abit man, and try throwin personals into your verse.

Vote - The Dex

Voted For: Empire

I'll destroy this fag, leave him BLACK & BLUE like UK football racists..
Battling me really...he jus tripped coz Dex couldnt tie his laces.
^^^^COOL OPENER...COULD OF WORDED A LIL BETTA THO..7/10
Mike skinner in ur avy? well, I'll make u jump outta ur "SKIN" b4 u grab da "MIC".
But da words "DOPE" & "DEX" in da same line, to us all it jus dont sound rite.
^^^^OKAY PERSONAL..6/10
Attempting ur verse, u just booked yaself a free post-mortem.
N id demand Dex payed me respect...but he cant afford-em..
^^^GOOD FINISHER...6/10

aight umm empire...u had a solid verse nice punches but u aint have no real hard personals datz da only thing dat fukked up ya verse but it was good tho

Empire-this names familiar. I remember it being the most hated
It was fate you took the hate off CALIs plate..
………………………………..cos your probably related
^^^NICE OPENER...NO PUNCHLINE BUT GOOD PERSONAL

And if not close cousins then best of bum-chums
But his verses are skilled wen yours are just humdrum!
^^^^????? YA SECOND LINE WAS DUMB..SO DAT FUKKED DA WHOLE THING UP

Im a samurai in this game, your just a TumTum*
If only the birth control pills never ran out..
………………………………..curse your Dumb Mum!
^^^^GOOD FINISHER..BUT U PLAYED OUT DA UM SHIT U COULDN'T RYHME ANYTHING ELSE

overall u had alot of personals no creativity in ya verse and u just kept ryhmin dat umm shit like i said there 4 u dont get my vote fam

This was feedback posted for The Dex
 

This was feedback posted for The Dex
 

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Voted For: Empire

it was an ok battle but both need elevation :
opena: empire
multis: both
punches: empire
structure: empire
closa: empire
very close but i have 2 say empire took diz 1 barely cuz he came a lil harder den dex

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Voted For: Empire

Close battle

But I gotta give it to Empire

Reasons:
Empire came with way stronger hits then Dex did

Empires bes line:
Mike skinner in ur avy? well, I'll make u jump outta ur "SKIN" b4 u grab da "MIC".
But da words "DOPE" & "DEX" in da same line, to us all it jus dont sound rite.
(Pretty Good)

Flow was a tie both were good
Structure went to Empire dex ya had alot of ..................... wasnt liken it man
all was pretty much tied up cept for the punches

Dex ya punches were tuned but not hard they sorta slipped i mean usin movies n disses i neva have felt that from anybody

Dex bes Line:
It was fate you took the hate off CALIs plate..
………………………………..cos your probably related
(cut all the dots man but nice line)

Fair enough il accept the vote froma herb who obviously dont know shit bout battles.

-Well, i know he dont know shit bout battles, cos the moment our battles is close and i sonned him he starts voting against me on my battles

-Coolio anyway uppin this

Uppinn dis battle yo cum on.

Voted For: Empire

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=174004

empire shitted on Dex...Dex, how does bolding and resizing your words affect the quality...u came...weak to me...closer was the best line, and that wasnt good...

empire had a nice opener, second line was gay...but the 3rd line was coo...

v/empire...no hate, just the truth.

can you guys go hit up my battle, link above.

Voted For: Empire

Blah... CALI took this one sided.. his punches were overall better and his personals were hard hittign...... the flow was suprisinly good...
Dex... yours was not good.. punches were wack.. the last line was fucking gay...... and it seemed froced..
CALI VOTE

blah my bad... i thought he was cali..
Damn im a fucking idiot :banghead:

This was feedback posted for The Dex
 

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Voted For: Empire

Dex-Structure is fucked....didnt even flowed good.....The punches was ok....Need elevation still...Multi'z i see you using them "finally" using hypher links is very creative, meaning you got personals. Punches on the other hand was "eh" weak, effective but not hard hitting.





empire- Flowed nice. Punches was good, effective...Nice dissing his avy, got personals.....Punches still needs elevation...getting good......Not much to say, add some multi'z...use wordplays......





Overall=Eh kinda an wack battle, Empire had some great punches, very mostly effective...Flowed nice.....The dex punches was kinda weak, effective, but weak. Flowed not really good in my opinion....I have go with empire with this, because he threw some punches, thats effective, dex well threw some weak ones....Empire flowed pretty better too, dex didnt. Sorry no hate, wun