Tstorm vs Empire
 

Battle Rules:

6 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Feeding
No Dickriding

Minimum posts to vote: 100

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Empire has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-23-05 03:20 PM.

Tstorm has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-23-05 03:21 PM.

I'll shoot dis bitch evry week, cos hez subscribed 2 my magazine..
Cuz frankly tstorms linez r neva eva eyed, not even by mabeline..
Fracture ur spine, and put ma point 2 ya bullshit facts......
Cuz hiz lines culdnt b str8...
If they were formed up on bicycle racks!....
T's-Storm's r light, they just feeble and ghostly showers.....
An shit, u culdnt elevate ur skills, blessed wit Supermans powers!
Quick spit dun...dont git punches dont vote.

no life or day-job, this guys on here almost 24hours a day
heard the saying..but in your case "hard work dosent pay"
i heard the rumours...but u really are a hated figure on rv..
vet?..guy has to upp his own thread, and still remains free!
ya lyrical skillz out-balanced, like a fat chick on a see-saw
standing still on a golf course..this guy couldnt met-a-fore!


explan-1-hard work/no job..get it
2-free agent thread bumped upp n still completely ignored lol
3-met a FORE/golf course (what they shout..
if u dnt get dnt vote
peace

Btw u kno i aint CALI da old Empire so sry but u got fake personals

yes u are.
theres no way u could be called "empire" if ur not..coz the system doesnt allow 2 accounts to be opened with exactly the same name.
2nd- how does a newbie know so much aboyt empie?.aka cali?.
duh

uppin

HA ha i joined yesterday, i bin on anotha rap site...n check da ips of CALI which is da name change DA OLD empire had if u dont believe me type in C.A.L.I in battle stats n ull see,,,and i dunt kno alot bout CALi he jus talked 2 me yesterday and explained, so there

Voted For: Tstorm

overall both had good drops,
stucture=tstorm
punches=tstorm,fav.i heard the rumours...but u really are a hated figure on rv..
vet?..guy has to upp his own thread, and still remains free!
good job
v/Tstorm

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Voted For: Tstorm

close battle and in my eye's a personal could've made either a winner if it was placed well but this goes to tstorm because his punches were slightly better. the structure was a tie. and no multis so the battle was close but this goes to tstorm. rtf

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http://community.rapverse.com/showpost.php?p=1913233&postcount=4 like u said empire................................



uppin this shit

upppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp
return tha fav

W/E..mayne uppinnnn dis shizzat....!!!!....................

Voted For: Tstorm

open: storm
close: storm
structure: storm
flow: tie (both really good)
personals: tie (again close shit there)
punches: tie (again both were good)

But overall i think that tstorm got this battle overall cause he hit a little harded in some catorgreys but tied him in greatness on the outhers

So return the favor link in sigg

V/Tstorm

Voted For: Empire

Obviously both sucked.... omg empire.... wack... especially that last one....OMG....

EMpire hasd better punches...
stroms was bull.... those were striaght out dumb personals.....

can any voters..explain?...2 more to get removed...

n paramik....shut the fuck up hatin..id merk the fuck outta ya

uppin 4 sum well explained votes

Voted For: Empire

Voted for Empire

Kay to be honest neither impressed me .

Only thing I Like was Empires verse due to he had a more serious approach to it his punches were hard in some spots humerous though

Flow given it to Empire

Tstorm ya verse was ight but ya punches were more comical i didnt see anything serious in it at all not even so much as callin him a bitch or w/e mosly jus dissin free agent n fat bitches nah not feelin it

all n all decent battle, gotta vote for sumone

Not Hatin , Jus Votin

uppin this battle....
votes will b returned......

Voted For: Tstorm

there's not much 2 explain dis a 6 bar battle..but i felt storm shit more it sound like u were tryin da get a lil personal and empire u was just talkin bout some other shit fam and some of ya lines were short then long it doesn't flow rite...

opener-empire da secod line was creative...storm shit was cool but not really hard
structure-storm..
punchlines-a tie
creativity-empire
flow-storm
multis-nun
wordplay-nun
personals-storm ima give it 2 me cuzz he tried and u didn't empire
enjoyed-basically ya'll were a tie but i think storm takes dis by a lil bit cuzz his verse was neat and battlin is personal and he had 1

return da favor links in my sig

Voted For: Tstorm

ight diz was an ok battle not really 2 many lines sttod out:

opener: tstorm
vocab: both
punches: both
personals: tstorm
structure: tstorm
closer: tstrom
da reason tstrom won my vote is b'cuz he came a lil bit harder & hit empire wit more personals; empire & tstorm u 2 need 2 elevate more in ur rhymes next time

Voted For: Tstorm

Empire:
I'll shoot dis bitch evry week, cos hez subscribed 2 my magazine..
Cuz frankly tstorms linez r neva eva eyed, not even by mabeline..
Very nice opener Empire, good wording & nice flow
Fracture ur spine, and put ma point 2 ya bullshit facts......
Cuz hiz lines culdnt b str8...
If they were formed up on bicycle racks!....
nice set up but not very effective
T's-Storm's r light, they just feeble and ghostly showers.....
An shit, u culdnt elevate ur skills, blessed wit Supermans powers!
an aight closer, i expected you to come up wit something more effective tho, the first half was just right, the superman half was wack..

Seemed like you rushed this battle a lil'.. however, this is pretty decent for a 3 bars.. you have to complete ya punches and make them effective, you start ya bars off really good but end it wit a terrible second half..

Tstorm:
no life or day-job, this guys on here almost 24hours a day
heard the saying..but in your case "hard work dosent pay"
Best opener- nice personal and set up..
i heard the rumours...but u really are a hated figure on rv..
vet?..guy has to upp his own thread, and still remains free!
^^another nice personal.. nice punch lol
ya lyrical skillz out-balanced, like a fat chick on a see-saw
standing still on a golf course..this guy couldnt met-a-fore!
this didn't rhyme unless you have an accent.. but other than that nice meta in the second half.. first half nice meta also...

aight i feel this battle was a lil' too short but Tstorm wit the bars you spit, you took the battle cuz you came harder, had some nice metaphors.. nice personals, and the second bar was a really good punch and personal.. Overall, you came a lil' harder than Empire.. that's why you took it..
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Voted For: Tstorm

Tstorm

no life or day-job, this guys on here almost 24hours a day
heard the saying..but in your case "hard work dosent pay"
i heard the rumours...but u really are a hated figure on rv..
vet?..guy has to upp his own thread, and still remains free!

vs

Empire

nothing

Storm clearly won this battle. Empire those punches were weak mayn,
Hardly any of them landed, and ur flow was choppy. Storm had aight
Punches, nuttin much of it but obviously storm took this one…