phive vs Queens Killa
 

Battle Rules:

10 UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
house rules

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-26-05 at 08:30 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

QueEns KiLLa has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-23-05 08:31 PM.

phive has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-23-05 08:31 PM.

yo he set it up plannin for a easy win....
my turn to change his thought nd wipe off his grin....
he couldnt get the edge of this battle if we had it on a cliff....
hes like a 17 year old on viagra,madd crazy stiff....
there aint no way im losin to a canadian....
ima treat him like a math problem show him that im greater than....
yo get off the site and never come back, aint it time for hockey?....
im the underdog bout to take this him out like rocky....
im the predator he the prey, he bout to get snuffed like dre....
yo u aint gotta send me a pic i can tell by ur name that ur gay....
he thought he elevate if he listen to higher by game....
his lifes pretty sad,especially for the fact he has 4 screennames on AIM....

in math theres a problem where the answer is greater than,>= greater than,game has a song called higher,
rocky was favored to lose

by 4 screennames i ment he had 4 screennames on his buddylist

Aight dawg imma ice ya

yo check this........ Im the blood spilla, cuz my rhymes are illa, and im here ta kill da queens killa, yo dont fuck wit me cuz im not one to be fucked wit, my spit leaves niggas breathless with one hit, bitches be yellin PHIVE IS DA SHIT//
i hit you with mad force, my rapstyle has much source, you be leavin head down, cuz i beat you of..course,//
im spinnin ya head and makin ya brain jump, soon youll be as retarded as forest gump, im throwin you to the dump, my lyrics you cant stump, queens killa? you aint nothin but the queens chump,//
i make the sickest lyrics pop outta my throat, im hittin you wit rap eqasions makin ya choke, your lines are chopped and broke, im laughin cuz queens killa is just a funny joke//
you cant win against phive cuz ive already won, im shining like the sun, im eatin you like a sesame seed bun, you cant beat me its like tryina fuck a nun//
im give you a dent in you battle record cuz i hit with each line, im crunchin ya spine, with every rhyme, its time you learn you cant beat mine//
im givin you shellshock, making your heart stop, you about ta drop, cuz im at the top,//
i spit bars that spark fires, fast like car tires, im cuttin you up like barb wires, ive got a grip on you like steel pliers, deep down yall know its phive who queens killa admires//
im crackin through ya skin like an earthquake, im makin ya tremble and shake, imma break what you make, givin you a lyrical head ache,//
queens killa saga has come to an end, you just got expelled, cuz my lyrics rebelled, dont fuck wit me kid unless you wanna be shelled, P.H.I.V.E now read what i spelled//

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Voted For: phive

diz was a pretty interesting battle 2 read ova
opena: phive
vocab: phive
multis: phive
punches: phive
structure: phive
overall: phive
closa: phive
da win goes 2 phive; but queens killa i give ur props u came hard but just didn't outdo phive

^bullshit this is cuz i have like 5 posts im on other rap boards its hard 2 get any votes with this little posts

Voted For: phive

WOAH...good battle..pretty even
i think Phives delivery was better, seemed more raw but killa had some nice punches..im gonna have to say Phive just for the fact i think he went a lil "harsher" but Queen dont take it as a bad thing ya'll ish was tight too.

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Voted For: QueEns KiLLa

u won dis fam i couldn't understand nothin phive was sayin cuzz of his nasty ass structure...

opener-killa
structure-killa..hands down
punchlines-killa
creativity-killa
wordplay-nun
multis-nun
personals-killa had about 1
finisher-killa
enjoyed-killa....

return da favor links in da sig

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Voted For: QueEns KiLLa

V/Queens Killa.......this was a close battle but Killa gets my vote because he had sum punchs an used them creatively also his structure mad it easy to read.....phive ur verse had sum good lines but u lacked in beenin consistent wit the punchs an ur structure needs work....no hate ....good battle to both...
punchs=Killa
Vocab=Killa
opener=killa
closer=killa
structure=killa
multi's=(none really)
overall=Queens KiLLa
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queens killa do u fukkin vote on battles...damm u got 9 posts vote nigga stop sitin ond a frontlines just lookin at shit

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Voted For: phive

Ok this battle was uneven in in bar counts. I must dont get the rules around here. It says 10 unlimited lines? huh? Ok Unlimited lines I get, but whats 10 unlimited lines?! Anyways phive had more multi's and more ammo against the queen. Had a thousand more bars too! lol...but guess i gotta give it to Phive. Good Fight yall.
Peace

voters are trippers
 

OH MY GOD, this is the 3rd shit I've seen in front line where voters are fucked up!
Now I dont know anyone in this fuckin thread. OK?
So my opinion aint a dickride one, its from a bystander who cant sit here and look at votes that are bogus! Ok, maybe this is a fuckin newbie forum...if so non of yall muthafuckas vote on my battles, becuz EITHER yall dick/clit riding, OR yall dont know what compents of a rhyme are (multi, punches, metas,) all that.
Now notice above these 2 voters said no multi's.

Go to Phives verse, and i just pick out a line full of multi's easily:
"i spit bars that spark fires, fast like car tires, im cuttin you up like barb wires,"
So u must assume yall dont know what MULTIple sllyable/word rhyming
is. Yall dont understand the concept of it? But yet u vote?
Ok let me give a fast lesson.
If in ONE bar you are rhyming 2 words, at least 3 times within that ONE bar.... you are using multi's!
Here is an example newbies: "i spit bars that spark fires, fast like car tires, im cuttin you up like barb wires,"
See the underlined words? That is called Multiple Word Rhyming within a bar!
Also if u use 3 or more words WITHIN one bar, in which the syllables rhyme....that is also called multiple syllable rhyming!
here is example:
Its EVIDENT, the ignorance or rhyme scheme here is Prevalent!
Now I'm hesitant to even make Rap Verse my permanent residence!
Ok, in this rhyme scheme, each word has 3 syllables, which all rhyme! This is yet another facet of Multi's! Come on now voters, step ur voting game up! Be fair! U will get hella respect for that!
PEACE

^how about u stfu, lol tomb raider sig ur cool, his multies were wack, uppin..........

shut up you fucking idiot this gurl knows what she is talking about so all those voters who said i had no multis are fucking ignorant poorn niggas that i schooled and they just cant handle my lyrics so fuck yall and anyway thanks shi-1 much respect girl

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