J DOT vs CounTREE Jay
 

CRHYME SINDICATE vs. nok out kings

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 250

Check in by: 01-27-05 at 10:44 AM

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J DOT has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-24-05 05:02 PM.

CounTREE Jay has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-25-05 12:14 AM.

Will be postin' by Thursday. Don't know if i'll have time tonite and i don't work again till 3 on Thursday. This will be done though, cause i got till friday if my math is correct.

-CJ-

word. i got til thurs. im brain blocked right now, so i gotta freestyle it when im ready to post. its nuthin tho..GL

Nok Out Kings vs Crhyme Sindicate crew battle



Step in da ring, I'll assassinate ur Nok out dreams
Watch out fien, JDOT got him NOK OUT KINGZ
block out teams, especially when yall shout out schemes
tryna beat us is rare, like seein a fake watch gleam

i got that beam, send it to you, watch yall scream
i block yall theme...cock back and drop yall team
im not that mean.....CJ made me act that way
send him back to tha "Countree" and whip him like black slaves

i admit im amazed, this nigga really want it with J?
i dont like gays.....so back up and go that way
i seen ya'll play...matter fact ya whole playbook
what type of nigga make a crew and fill it with gay crooks?

im safe rook(rookie)....i'll give this nigga slow-mo stitches
....how u rep a crew that breeds only homo bitches
u gettin no mo' digits.....landing in yo winnin column
.....call him, invisible? how, J DOT still saw him

FINISHER

(NOK SPEAKING)

"J DOT TAKE IT"

ask yo crew, they call me they favorite
we give u a double head start, and u still wouldnt make it
"ya crews sacred"?...these niggas fell far outta line
ya'll aint no criminals, ya'll cant even spell out "CRIME" *

*they spell it..."Crhyme", or some wierd shit...


NOK vs CS crew battles...no D/R..and only explained votes...PLZ...honest votes only...


I decided to come up with something now, cause i may forget...this aint my life u know....GL

Don't know about RED BEAMs, don't be poppin' things,
No coup de'tate, but I'll show you how to Nok Out Kingz,
Pyro for just one battle? What, couldn't take the heat?
Soon expelled from the site, to win, you'll hafta cheat.
Started your own crew, and still on Code Steel's roster?
Couldn't beat or join us, so you sided wit an imposter.
Posin' more than 50 sayin' that you rockin' wit the best,
Thought your crew was aight, till your co-leader left.
You crew can't touch C.S. like a certain M.C. that lost it,
I'll hammer the point home & put the first nail in y'all coffin.

-CJ-

Explanations, cause i know niggaz won't get 'em.

Red Beam is his old name.
If you don't know what the fuck a coup de'tate is, look it up or don't vote.
He started Code Steel, yet he on Code Steel's roster (another C.S.)
C.A.L.I. was his co-leader, know he down wit us.
If you don't get the last bar, then fuck y'all.

-CJ-

This was feedback posted for CounTREE Jay
 

this was nice........also j dot you came so damn wack...lol you fucking suck....

upping for my fellow crew member

This was feedback posted for CounTREE Jay
 

nice shit fam........checkin' the polls.

also, for those that havent caught the genius behind the name, CRHYME is a creative play off of two words........crime and rhyme. lmmfao.

s.v.

uppin this shit.............faggots ..................

ha!!!.........were still murdalizin' your crew pussy.

"y'all just got kN.O.K.ed the fuck out!!!" damn. i bet you feel crunchy as fuck right now loser.

to all of nok (except the queer)...........c.s. has love for ya, word.


s.v.


s.v.

Voted For: J DOT

ok ok good battle overall...but before i announce the winner, heres a quick replay...

CounTREE Jay:
Don't know about RED BEAMs, don't be poppin' things,
No coup de'tate, but I'll show you how to Nok Out Kingz,
---------------------aiight opener 6/10
Pyro for just one battle? What, couldn't take the heat?
Soon expelled from the site, to win, you'll hafta cheat.
---------------------like the first line but you fell off 5/10 :bored:
Started your own crew, and still on Code Steel's roster?
Couldn't beat or join us, so you sided wit an imposter.
--------------------- meh 6/10 :sleep:
Posin' more than 50 sayin' that you rockin' wit the best,
Thought your crew was aight, till your co-leader left.
--------------------- hehehe...ok...7/10 :thumbup:
You crew can't touch C.S. like a certain M.C. that lost it,
I'll hammer the point home & put the first nail in y'all coffin.
---------------------good closer...6/10

overall decent...but tended to fall off....work on finished with a good punch...


J DOT:
Step in da ring, I'll assassinate ur Nok out dreams
Watch out fien, JDOT got him NOK OUT KINGZ
block out teams, especially when yall shout out schemes
tryna beat us is rare, like seein a fake watch gleam
----------------------aiight opener like the multis..7/10 :thumbup:

i got that beam, send it to you, watch yall scream
i block yall theme...cock back and drop yall team
im not that mean.....CJ made me act that way
send him back to tha "Countree" and whip him like black slaves
----------------------like the first bar but fell off the second...6/10

i admit im amazed, this nigga really want it with J?
i dont like gays.....so back up and go that way
i seen ya'll play...matter fact ya whole playbook
what type of nigga make a crew and fill it with gay crooks?
----------------------liked the personal....7/10 :shoot:

im safe rook(rookie)....i'll give this nigga slow-mo stitches
....how u rep a crew that breeds only homo bitches
u gettin no mo' digits.....landing in yo winnin column
.....call him, invisible? how, J DOT still saw him
----------------------like the first bar but not the second..5/10

ask yo crew, they call me they favorite
we give u a double head start, and u still wouldnt make it
"ya crews sacred"?...these niggas fell far outta line
ya'll aint no criminals, ya'll cant even spell out "CRIME" *
----------------------nice closer...8/10 :shoot:


CounTREE Jay..............................60%
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J DOT............................................64%



do the math.......

v/J DOT

Sovereign= lyrical havok.. crew vote removed

return the favor in the text battle of the sig...the other two battles arent up yet...pz

-L.H-

^good lookin out on tha vote...yo crew wunna battle us...if we decide to accept, we gunna merk yall..........lol....

uppin for more votes...and ^we got tha same IP cause this is tha network IP that we using....no d/r...and if u dont believe me, we are on at tha same time.....uppin this shit

Voted For: J DOT

i gotta go with u fam u take dis cuzz of ya flow n punches i aint see no personals tho nahmean but good verse overall..countree ya shit was hott but i wasn't really feelin ya ryhme scheme u had 1 punchlines and dat was ya opener..da rest was personals which were good but dat wasn't enuff

opener-dot..good flow and multis..jay nice punch but dot shit was betta

structure-a tie

punchlines-dot takes dis....jay u had like 1

multis-dot got dis..jay aint have nun

personals-jay took dis u had some good ones..dot u like wun

finisher-dot good personal fam...jay ya shit was aight but could of came harder than dat *pause*

enjoyed-j dot...his shit was betta overall da flow was good and punches were landin..jay if u would of spit a lil more and soem cleva shit in there maybe u would of won but u didn't

RETURN DA FAVOR YA'LL LINK R IN MY SIG

Damn, these votes is madd comical to me. Dude had no structure or flow at all. Damn, this shit is funny. Guess i'll just hafta take a moral and real-life hip-hop victory. This nigga can take the internet, computer geeks who don't know shit about rap votes. marv, niec hate vote by the way. It's all wood though.

:thefinger

-CJ-

Voted For: CounTREE Jay

J Dot

Step in da ring, I'll assassinate ur Nok out dreams
Watch out fien, JDOT got him NOK OUT KINGZ
block out teams, especially when yall shout out schemes
tryna beat us is rare, like seein a fake watch gleam
Little simple but i liked. Flowed very well. 9/10

i got that beam, send it to you, watch yall scream
i block yall theme...cock back and drop yall team
im not that mean.....CJ made me act that way
send him back to tha "Countree" and whip him like black slaves
Last bar sounded kinda rasict but i liked the way it flowed and the punch landed. 8/10

i admit im amazed, this nigga really want it with J?
i dont like gays.....so back up and go that way
i seen ya'll play...matter fact ya whole playbook
what type of nigga make a crew and fill it with gay crooks
Simple and not landing well but flowed pretty good. 7/10

im safe rook(rookie)....i'll give this nigga slow-mo stitches
....how u rep a crew that breeds only homo bitches
u gettin no mo' digits.....landing in yo winnin column
.....call him, invisible? how, J DOT still saw him
Nice closer. You know it. Flowed very but I wans't feeling it. 7/10

J Dot. You had nice flow but I wasn't really feeling ur punches. You gotta come harder. I know for a fact you can merk anyone. Just keep trying. lol. over all. your rating was 31 all together. lol.


-CJ-

Don't know about RED BEAMs, don't be poppin' things,
No coup de'tate, but I'll show you how to Nok Out Kingz,
Liked it but it coulda flowed better. 7/10

Pyro for just one battle? What, couldn't take the heat?
Soon expelled from the site, to win, you'll hafta cheat.
Don't know if he cheated before but it woulda good personal. I liked it. 10/10

Started your own crew, and still on Code Steel's roster?
Couldn't beat or join us, so you sided wit an imposter.
Pretty good. I thought it was a hard punch. Nice. 10/10

Posin' more than 50 sayin' that you rockin' wit the best,
Thought your crew was aight, till your co-leader left.
Nice personal. i guess. Nice punch. 8/10

You crew can't touch C.S. like a certain M.C. that lost it,
I'll hammer the point home & put the first nail in y'all coffin.
Weak closing. Knew it coulda been better. 7/10

I saw alot of hard and complex punches in ur verse. really liked it. you got this wif harder punches. I took alot of time to vote on this so i know it is honest.42 was ur over all rating.
:D


RTF Pwease.

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^leave it to u to bitch about votes...stop cryin. ^that was a madd d/r prolly. i aint bitchin. yo flow was hella wack...and yo punk ass crew came in hear bitchin about tha battle....yall niggas is fag ass dykes...

Voted For: J DOT

V/J Dot.....this was a close battle.....j dot came wit original punchs that were creative his structure was good an he had sum personals...countree jay....u had sum good lines in ur verse also wit good structure but i felt u weren't consistent in diss's an u lacked vocab it felt like u didn't come wit everythin o seen better from u...no hate....good battle to both.....
punchs=dot
structure=tie
vocab=dot
multi's=dot
opener=countree
closer=dot
overall=J Dot
*RETURN THE FAVOR*

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

What a coincidence, they in the same crew and this nigga said my vocab wasn't good. Lol, y'all niggaz can't even lie good. J Dot, if you honestly think you won with that piece of trash you tried to disguise as a verse, damn, you will be an internet rapper, and a bad one at that, for the rest of your days.

-CJ-

Voted For: CounTREE Jay

good job

Removed

oops i meant to leave feed back but mine and homo above me both need to be removed

so mine needs to be removed
marv jays does its not explained
and jr freeze needs to be removed

hell nah u ass fuck...dudes not in my crew...im not in code steel...im just collabin with them...and marv's shit is explained...ur a fuckin D/R...real talk...

Voted For: J DOT

gotta go wit j-dot mayn...his shit went togetha way betta...his structure was betta...his punches werent AS dope as JAY's but he had more "quality" punches i guess u could say mayn... i give it like an 8/10

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Wow, this is the whackest example of the herb and d/r votes that go on on this fuckin' stie, every vote you got was a d/r and no feedback. Y'all niggaz is whack.

-CJ-

ONly herbs vote on ur battles. lol. Well. Make sure you return da favor. Not the rest of you other herbs.

^^dq his vote.....the times or too exact.....excatly 1 minute after lyrical havok posted j dot tells him thank you....fuck that....seems kinda odd to me...


j dot i know your not a bad guy
and you think you got this win,,,so tel strobe to dq this vote...

thank you strobe...upping for countreejay..............

This was feedback posted for CounTREE Jay
 

checkin pollz...

what a hella d/r vote Legend drop for Countree jay...

This was feedback posted for J DOT
 

dope battle and was close, i aint gonn a vote cos J dot is NOK aswel.

SOV aint in my crew...he got tha boot...he's been inactive...and LH aint sov....


fuck yall....uppin this shit...i murdered him

uppin this shjit/////too many battles gettin slept on

This was feedback posted for J DOT
 

you whooped his ass

uppin this.......stop sleepin on stuff. it was posed to be done wit

c'mon people....i took this shit....lets close this. people dont RTF. but its coo

Voted For: CounTREE Jay

Aight this was a nice battle...... I must say that both of you did pretty well, both had some good and bad parts to y'all verse... JDOT i like how you dissed the whole crew at the beginning but you never threw any direct punches at CJ besides this bar:
im not that mean.....CJ made me act that way
send him back to tha "Countree" and whip him like black slaves

but you had a few decent personals in general like:
i seen ya'll play...matter fact ya whole playbook
what type of nigga make a crew and fill it with gay crooks?

im safe rook(rookie)....i'll give this nigga slow-mo stitches
....how u rep a crew that breeds only homo bitches
^^not bad...
However, your opener and closer was not good at all... But i was feeling your metaphors combine with multis.. not a bad combination.. but you gotta knock the shit outta ya opponent wit some punches, which i felt you were lackin this in your verse..

CounTREE Jay:
ya opener was aight... i like your personals using Red Beam and this portion:
Started your own crew, and still on Code Steel's roster?
Couldn't beat or join us, so you sided wit an imposter.
Posin' more than 50 sayin' that you rockin' wit the best,
Thought your crew was aight, till your co-leader left.
^^that was a good punch and personal.. you coulda worded the third line better, however.... i liked how you dissed his whole crew as a finisher..
You crew can't touch C.S. like a certain M.C. that lost it,
I'll hammer the point home & put the first nail in y'all coffin.
^^was an aight closer...
Aight from looks of this battle, CJ won because of his consistency wit punches........ he had some good personals to combine wit his punches.. even tho his was shorter he took this win easily..
v/ CJ

^^^UPPIN' FOR SOME LEGIT VOTES FUCKERS!!!^^^


s.v.