Damian vs Phive
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

yah man im not that strong so hum lets try

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-27-05 at 06:35 PM

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Damian has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-24-05 06:36 PM.

phive has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-24-05 06:37 PM.

yo dawg imma ice ya

yo this fool is from quebec, eatin flies like a frog, ill be leavin ya brain lost in da fog, //
i have unnatainable style thatll leave ya brain restless, ill squeeze at ya lungs leavin ya breathless, phive aint one to be fucked with// im dangerous to every emcee, who stands up against me, youll see, after i split ya like the red sea, you cant win D// im crooked like stray cops, makin heads pop, i cant stop, till im on da top, you cant stop till i make ya drop G// im an ill lyracist with mad powers, im knockin niggas down like the twin towers, im drillin you in da ground like a meteor shower// you fucked son cuz you aint passin go, your rhymes are slow, im pullin ya down like an under toe, im the champ son and i just added another KO//

yo man spit ya fuckin lyrics youve had atleast 30 hrs man what the fuck

You have: 1 days, 22 hours, 0 minutes, and 55 seconds left

just shut the fuck up iight :thumbup:
imma post it when i want

why cuz ya have ta think shit up over a lon time period cuz ya suck shit ya fuckin pussy you know ya gonna lose

thats why your hidding your battle statistic......

what are ya talking about just spit ya verse ya fuckin pussy fuck you frog fuck

frog fuck...lmfao...................................... .

Ill cut your Phive fingers from your hand and stick it
So like that atleas youll have something long to play with
Dumb enough to call me out while im already battlin him
My violente relation with you will be kinda Eminem to Kim
Let me complicate the situation by telling you to elevate
Imma make your lyrics turn good like magic like Hodini the great
My bad,thats just impossible,no ones perfect,i do too mistakes
I could only do one fucking line and put ou on knoc-out
So time out and stop fucking runing your fucking mouth

here you go asshole...............................

thats so shitty man you diddnt rhyme once you fucking loser

Voted For: Damian

Phive- Ok, The flow was messed up. I still read it, you had some good multi'z, but the structure is messing up the flow. Punches "eh" werent that great. The only thing that stood was multi'z. If you fix your structure the flow wil be good with them multi'z.




damian-The beat maker. Alright, you had some good flow, with some good punches,very creative. Wordplays was good. Still elevate on them punches, then you'll get better. It was basic, but effective.





overall= Alright, one-sided battle. Damian gets my vote, cause of better flow and punches. Multi'z, goes to phive, if you fix your structure phive, then you'll have good flow with them mulit'z. Phive you lose by flow, and plus punches were weak. Damian flow was very good, punches was very effective. My vote goes to Damian. wun.

what are you talking about man your this nigggas friend you fucking idiot who cant tell that i fucking schooled this pussy fuck you ya fucking retard i need honest votes from playas not hatas nugguh fuck

The only thing you was wack in was flow. Multi'z you had them, but you need flow and structure to master multi'z. Sorry fam, in what category did you beat damian in?

flow
punches
multi'z
personals

^^ in what category?

i cant belive how bad you are,YOUR the fucking retarded one,you such a fuckin prick i cant even belive you,it was so dumb was u just said that i quoted it in my sig so the others could see how looser you are

Voted For: Damian

damian wins.....
phive..no structue, struc ya verse like damians.you had no punches at all,no metas..although u did have plenty of multies,u need to make creative punches usin metas n try makin em personal..

damian..u attempted some wordplay, but it din quite come off,your punches need to be harder n personal..keep elevatin.
u did have enough to beat this guy however

Voted For: Damian

Damian - Iight spit man, have seen better.. but flow was good and decent punches.

Best Line - Dumb enough to call me out while im already battlin him
My violente relation with you will be kinda Eminem to Kim

Worst Line - Ill cut your Phive fingers from your hand and stick it
So like that atleas youll have something long to play with

phive - Iight spit, your rap was iight, but no real punches in there.

Best Line - im an ill lyracist with mad powers, im knockin niggas down like the twin towers, im drillin you in da ground like a meteor shower// you fucked son cuz you aint passin go, your rhymes are slow, im pullin ya down like an under toe, im the champ son and i just added another KO//

Worst Line - yo this fool is from quebec, eatin flies like a frog, ill be leavin ya brain lost in da fog, //
i have unnatainable style thatll leave ya brain restless, ill squeeze at ya lungs leavin ya breathless, phive aint one to be fucked with//

OVERALL - close battle here, both were pretty weak but I vote for Damian. He had the better flow and throw better punches. 5, you need to throw punches and flow better.

Vote - Damian

Voted For: phive

I give this shit to PHIVE cuz hes got the grimey pop u in the face with my knob style

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This was feedback posted for Damian
 

nice drop Damien, work a tad bit on the vocab but great flow. And Phive, wtf is is with the racism man, do you have to call him a frog just cause he'S from quebec. English's probably his 2nd languauge and he still whooped your ass.

Javelin

yo uppin fo some votes .................................................. .....

what the hell? thats bot a real vote

This was feedback posted for Damian
 

your verse was real good damian.

Uoi elevated so much since you first came

Voted For: phive

Voted for Phive

Phive had dis in my mind.

TG gonna be screamin hate vote i know it but ive voted agaisnt Phive in other battles so this is no hate votin this is strictly lookin at both n pickin which one I thought was best n thas Phive

Phive had way harder disses n a way better flow
Multies were at random i liked that
Personals didnt see much but from what I saw Phive had that

Damian disses was ight pretty strong but a little humerous

Ill cut your Phive fingers from your hand and stick it
So like that atleas youll have something long to play with

Made me laugh yo, diss n make it hurt man not a joke

vote goes to Phive

NOT HATIN, Jus VOTIN

Voted For: Damian

phive
well ok first of all your stucture was pretty weak and it made me go damn i dont understand a word...and the flow lacked as well....you had no decent punches or anything creative to your verse i jsut felt you had nothin at all to win this....use more vocab and metaphores...give you tight punches..but you lacked punches...no hate

Damian
alright i liked your verse alot more....good stucture decent punches.....i just liked the way you worded it better...btter vocab just had a better wittiness to it.....good battle for you, you will win this easy i think...

opener: D
closer: D
punches: D
creativty: D
metas: D
stucture: D
flow: D
...win: Damian

yo uppin fo some real votes come on people yall know i schooled this fag come on playas

why not shutin the fuck up stupid bastard
now uppin for some more votes
seriously Phive,your one of the dumbess bitchs on RV

everyone jus breath....... lol I can understand why Phive so Mad i mean i saw damians verse it was ight but nothing worth 4 votes to his one i mean rhyme skills definitly r in that verse Im not understandin how he is gettin these votes sayin he came harder n shyt

iight Phive pm Armada to tell him to stop taking your side,his finish with your vote so

uppin fo some true votes that actually make sense this rapper is on bullshit about eminem lol

your on bullshit on anyway thing you fag thats why your loosing

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uppin fo some real votessssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss ssssssssssssss

lmfao you have 500 post and still suck? mmm i probly suck too but come on

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