Pop Lotty vs MaRVJay1009
 

Battle Rules:

Crew Battle

The Establishment Vs Non-Phixional Con.Tentz

10-14 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 01-27-05 at 07:16 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

MaRVJay1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-24-05 07:21 PM.

Pop Lotty has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-25-05 03:26 PM.

Marv can be hot at times, but most of the time he's lame
Skills go up and down so much, it affected your wackass name
Good thing you had someone on your side, or your outta luck
Lucky dude set up a battle for you, you cant even set up a punch
Made a name off battlin n00bs, don't know what respect is like
Battle some many 0's, you wont ever amount to nothin in life
Elevate without battlin anyone good? Do away with your pen
Sad thing is, you came back with this name just to do it again
Ya crew must be dumb though, got you battlin
The Establishment? We just Established that you wack as shit

mc's on rv? im da livest son,its 2 late fam da try hide n run
p.lotty aka gotaasswhoopin4u aka mike hawk dis guy's a bum
in jerz i heard u known 4 snitchin u'll even describe da gun...
beat marv? no no retarde..remember when i merked u 5 -1
im real u could try proven dat i lie..ima ruin dis guy why?...
his crew dicks how they "catch a flat" while "doin a drive by"
im nice ur not herb respected it,look how my words connected
he thought if "aint have sex" he'll get "signed 2 virgin records"
sorri fam i gotta do it i really hate da be violent with kidds....
u battlin 4 n.phixional & got ill.diplomats & got e style in ya sig
my hands on da throne,im good at killin fags n handlin chrome
crew's like "krutches" 2 u cuz u could neva "stand on ya own"
u a fan of me homes!..merk u? datz no problem wack nigga..
but fam u from jerz but stole da name of a harlem crack dealer

nuff said.......

2nd bar-just click da link..

5th bar-he's battlin 4 one crew and has like 2 others in his sig

last bar-he took his name from a guy datz from harlem dat was ind a drug game if u heard dat mase and jim jones convo on da radio..u know whut im talkin about

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

im nice ur not herb respected it,look how my words connected
he thought if "aint have sex" he'll get "signed 2 virgin records"

oo shit nice....

ya verse was good some personal and some punches that hit well not hard besides the one i quote but u was well creative andall around tight drop...

mike hawk: u had a decent flow, but u aint have no good punches whats sup with that?? u aint have no personal either so its like u basicly came un-prepared for this battle, creativeness was average

Good thing you had someone on your side, or your outta luck
Lucky dude set up a battle for you, you cant even set up a punch

^^ that was ya best line and it wasnt even that good and been flip many times befor.....

vote: marv cuz he came way harder and was prepared...

RTF of a vote....

aight goodlookin fam uppin 4 more

This was feedback posted for MaRVJay1009
 

checking the polls.........merk this fucker MaRVJay

ahha, first nigga that know bout Lotty...word son.

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

MaRVJay1009 - Good spit, your wordplay was good, and you had a good flow wit hard punches.

Best Line - in jerz i heard u known 4 snitchin u'll even describe da gun...
beat marv? no no retarde..remember when i merked u 5 -1

Worst Line - u a fan of me homes!..merk u? datz no problem wack nigga..
but fam u from jerz but stole da name of a harlem crack dealer

Pop Lotty - Iight spit, your flow was good, and your punches were hitten hard.

Best Line - Marv can be hot at times, but most of the time he's lame
Skills go up and down so much, it affected your wackass name

Worst Line - Ya crew must be dumb though, got you battlin
The Establishment? We just Established that you wack as shit

OVERALL - Good battle here, but I vote for M, I like his wordplay and his punches were hitten harder. Pop shoulda used some wordplay.

Vote - MaRVJay1009

goodlookin fam uppin

This was feedback posted for Pop Lotty
 

pop lotty if you ever want to battle pm me..for fun or for real

vote ppl............................................... ................

Voted For: Pop Lotty

Checking the polls................................

Vote removed

My bad on voting....I'll PM strobe to remove it....

wow y would u check da polls tho fam???...might as well vote

This was feedback posted for MaRVJay1009
 

whoa.......nice battle here....checkin polls......

lol............uppin.............................. ..............

vote muthafukkaz

Voted For: MaRVJay1009


Marv can be hot at times, but most of the time he's lame
Skills go up and down so much, it affected your wackass name
weak and simple... not good.
Good thing you had someone on your side, or your outta luck
Lucky dude set up a battle for you, you cant even set up a punch
Im not really feelin it, but Ill give u this one. decent punch.
Made a name off battlin n00bs, don't know what respect is like
Battle some many 0's, you wont ever amount to nothin in life
eh, your rhyme scheme is very very simple- and your insults are similar. Try to up the content in the future.
Elevate without battlin anyone good? Do away with your pen
Sad thing is, you came back with this name just to do it again
yea yeah... o.k
Ya crew must be dumb though, got you battlin
The Establishment? We just Established that you wack as shit

man-- ur rhymin picked up here... but this punch could have hit so much harder if you spent some time and re-worded it... as it is now its just average all the way through. Really work on upping the content of your verses.



mc's on rv? im da livest son,its 2 late fam da try hide n run
p.lotty aka gotaasswhoopin4u aka mike hawk dis guy's a bum
wow, u both need to up your content... weak weak opener
in jerz i heard u known 4 snitchin u'll even describe da gun...
beat marv? no no retarde..remember when i merked u 5 -1
decent personal, probly the best bar so far in the battle...
im real u could try proven dat i lie..ima ruin dis guy why?...
his crew dicks how they "catch a flat" while "doin a drive by"
rhyme scheme is real sloppy- punch is horriffic- in a not good way.
im nice ur not herb respected it,look how my words connected
he thought if "aint have sex" he'll get "signed 2 virgin records"
arright... this isn't the most original concept but at least its a bonofide punchline w/ a lil wordplay... thank you.
sorri fam i gotta do it i really hate da be violent with kidds....
u battlin 4 n.phixional & got ill.diplomats & got e style in ya sig
could have written it better- saying got illdiplomats and got eystyle just like that kills any flow to that point.... but good route of attack.
my hands on da throne,im good at killin fags n handlin chrome
crew's like "krutches" 2 u cuz u could neva "stand on ya own"
real basic, but o.k
u a fan of me homes!..merk u? datz no problem wack nigga..
but fam u from jerz but stole da name of a harlem crack dealer
o.k-- not a great closer... however you threw more punches than ur opponent... you connected more, I found that your verse while being fairly basic was more complex than your opponents also... Vote MarvJay

Voted For: MaRVJay1009


mc's on rv? im da livest son,its 2 late fam da try hide n run
p.lotty aka gotaasswhoopin4u aka mike hawk dis guy's a bum
4/10
in jerz i heard u known 4 snitchin u'll even describe da gun...
beat marv? no no retarde..remember when i merked u 5 -1
6/10
im real u could try proven dat i lie..ima ruin dis guy why?...
his crew dicks how they "catch a flat" while "doin a drive by"
7/10
im nice ur not herb respected it,look how my words connected
he thought if "aint have sex" he'll get "signed 2 virgin records
"7/10
sorri fam i gotta do it i really hate da be violent with kidds....
u battlin 4 n.phixional & got ill.diplomats & got e style in ya sig
4/10
my hands on da throne,im good at killin fags n handlin chrome
crew's like "krutches" 2 u cuz u could neva "stand on ya own"
7/10
u a fan of me homes!..merk u? datz no problem wack nigga..
but fam u from jerz but stole da name of a harlem crack dealer
1/10

u had nice concepts
punches were kinda lame
ya wordplay wasent there
ya intensity wasent there
nice Multi's
and Metas
could of worked on your delivery
and punches


Marv can be hot at times, but most of the time he's lame
Skills go up and down so much, it affected your wackass name
4/10
Good thing you had someone on your side, or your outta luck
Lucky dude set up a battle for you, you cant even set up a punch
6/10
Made a name off battlin n00bs, don't know what respect is like
Battle some many 0's, you wont ever amount to nothin in life
5/10
Elevate without battlin anyone good? Do away with your pen
Sad thing is, you came back with this name just to do it again
5/10
Ya crew must be dumb though, got you battlin
The Establishment? We just Established that you wack as shit
6/10

punches were ok
no real wordplay
ya drop could have been better
ya concepts were nice
ya drop was kinda basic
seen alot better from u

okay uppin 4 more votes

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

im nice ur not herb respected it,look how my words connected
he thought if "aint have sex" he'll get "signed 2 virgin records"
^^^ only witty punch.... all the rest didn't have wordplay or i've already heard 'em like... he's up and down like his wack ass name, and jay's crutch line... all the rest were real weak punches, they were just tellin the trueth. your sopposed to take the diss that is true and make worplay out of it. tutorials much?