golden shellz vs lantis the great
 

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6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-24-05 at 07:53 PM

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lantis the great has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-24-05 07:23 PM.

Things you need to kno:
Beef: a lyrical conflict
Baby calf: a baby cow
Running a train: raping a girl
Bars: lines in a verse

Im a lyrical geniuses its ironic for me to be battling my other half
You’re no use for a verse or beef like a baby calf
You’re not on my level not even playing the same game
Im a pimp your girl is a subway map easy to find a train
I run thing like this here and run shit in your crib {get it}
You can call me Mr. Freeze Im as cold as shit in your fridge
Batman found out it was hard to stop me and u will soon
Im the champ I lose like…. once in every blue moon
I didn't even need to write this verse, yours in Self Defeating,
Didn't ya know having your moms write ya verse is considered Cheating
Like overweight kids in gym class you better off reading my punches
In battles my Raps be as nasty as cafeteria lunches
In a real battle ill be the great Ali and u will just be a mimic Tyson
Im your motivation wit out me u wouldn’t have no bars Im like a liquor license {get it}
Is it my fault that this was so easy for me to do?
Punch lines no, kick lines having u jumping more than kangaroos

Golden shellz has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-24-05 07:32 PM.

doggs ya whole career is fucked up were should i begin
yo comitted a sin man u shoulda just handed this win
u lucky i aint a crip cuz i woulda slapped ur ass to the west coast
its been 4 months nigga and u less than 10 posts
0-1 notorious got u sonned
lookin for ya first win chill im not the one
pickin fights with higher level niggas, will get ya jaw rocked
a rapper like u is an excuse to those who rap around Pac
ill leave u undergroun like u was buyin a bootleg movie
4 months dog and ur still new here this fuckin newbie
dim ya house lites ya careers gonna fade
ur an embarrasment u cant even pm strobe for an upgrade!

g;luck man

for once nigga good verse i made a few typin errors but ya still understand wat i mean

oh shoot u could tell this was a written how u gonna explain before u posted ur verse.. written written written

Voted For: Golden shellz

i felt golden shellz more simply cuz he had better structure so i could read his flow better and he had better wordplay...Lantis was a lil choppy and i couldnt see what he was tryin to say...Punches were lackin in dis battle...i give thiz battle a 6/10 overall...nothin entertaining about it...no hate just sayin how i feel about thiz...~1~

my v/Golden Shellz

i feel u too cuz i dropped weak i aint think this fag would elevate since i last seen his battle so i said fuck it lemme throw this at him

iight iight uppin uppin this battle~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Voted For: Golden shellz

nice shit mayn

L-u didnt really get ma atention it wasnt that creative, punches meh at best.

GS-not that great but good enough, it was koo, nice flow, keep it up

Voted For: lantis the great

this was close

intro- LTG had da into goin

punches- GS

personals- GS

metas- LTG

multis- none of yall niggaz

closer- GS ur closer was soft homie, i like the reference u made about me in ur verse but you lost. LTG out worked ya man!

v/Lantis Da Great

w/e yo uppin this battle for votes iight~~~~~~~~~~

cmon doggs uppin this battle~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~.

Voted For: Golden shellz

aight good battle from both of you.. but could have been better.... break down:

Golden- ya verse was aight... bad structure tho, it was stretched and in some places under developed... but it didnt hurt ya over all flow to bad but still work on it... your punches were aight but ya personals kicked ass, i liked em a lot.. good stuff... vocab was aight , would have liked to have seen some mulitis tho... ya closer about strobe was clasic, had me laughin lol... any way good verse... 6.5/10

lantis- aight man ya verse was iffy at best... for starters ya structure just didnt work man, shit was stretched to the max... flow was hurt by this but some of the flow was still kinda tight... i was diggin some of ya punches and personals, nothing spectacular but they were aight... ok vocab but up on em... overall this was an iffy verse 4/10

no hate to lantis but elevate a lil bit homie, youll get there no worries... and golden just work on ya structure... werd...........

VOTE- GOLDEN.............

uppin uppin uppin this battle for like 2 more votes iight

Voted For: lantis the great

this battle goes to lantis the great... he had some pretty straight punches... his were aighht, but most importantly, they were better than golden shells's. shells's lines were aight but some shit was played or wack.. best lines were the considered cheating line and the tyson line which won this battle for him... thanx... i'll post a return vote dealie later

return the favor right here... thanx
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=174821

uppin uppin cmon lets get some more votes iight~~~

omg damn uppin this battle~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

uppidy upp up up this battle damn 2 more votes....

Voted For: Golden shellz

Golden shellz - pretty good drop. work on structure and flow. the vocabulary was basic, but you had some punches and personals that connected. your best line was probably your opener. not bad 6/10

lantis the great - pretty good drop. the structure was a bit off, and the flow was off too. some stretched lines in there really threw the flow off. you had the better vocabulary, but all your rhymes were basic. your punches were kind of played and you really didn't have any personals. work on that. your verse was okay 5/10

v/ golden shellz

return the favour vs kamikazee, link in the sig

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Voted For: lantis the great

i think lantis won this battle
he had better flow and better vocab
also harder punches n better overall read in my opinion
golden shellz didnt come very hard at all. he usually is alot better. maybe underestimated lantis.
opener=lantis
closer=lantis
vocab=lantis
punches=lantis
RTF+++++++++++++++++++
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Voted For: Golden shellz

VOTE FOR Golden SHELLZ

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