Da King vs H-N-I-C
 

Battle Rules:

4-6 bars
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-24-05 at 09:19 PM

Must drop verse in 120 minutes after check in.

H-N-I-C has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-24-05 08:20 PM.

Da King has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-24-05 08:22 PM.

well first of all i'm the king you aint in charge
you hella scared dat's why you only want four bars
you a phony actin' crunk lik' you go do sumthin'
when i'll drop you in dese' streets like J.Lo's husbands
get when i spit it deep lik' fifty
i move so much weight u might think i'm oprahwinfrey
an' wit dis last line remember dat i bomb
i'll leave you on da' corna' working nex' to ya mom

dat's all i got fo' now. i'm jus' getting warmed up. pretty soon ya'll see why dey call me king.

This nigga calls himself da King.......yeah I guess I can see it
Cuz he was jockin the king of pop when he first heard Beat It
U more like The King's daughter slobbin up pedophiles
I heard u was in Neverland makin Mike and Bubbles smile
Versatile wit my writin style time to switch it up
It's sad u haven't battled once and u already outta luck

Uppin...................................Sorry about tha quality of the battle folks

Voted For: H-N-I-C

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^ Vote on that plz.

This nigga calls himself da King.......yeah I guess I can see it
Cuz he was jockin the king of pop when he first heard Beat It

Best line out of the whole battle to me...ok wordplay...didnt really like anything else from the battle. That should be enough.

v/head nigga in charge.

Return the votes ppl.

Voted For: Da King

umm wow this was short as a mofo but i thought DK took it in the short amount of time. better punches and structure HNIC didnt really diss nobody that hard so he kinda fell off both had wack openers n closers tho work on those. but i was feelin dakings verse more
get at me please
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Damn, lets get this shit closed......................

Damn, lets get this shit closed......................

Voted For: H-N-I-C

4 a short battle dis was good both yall came hard but i got to give it to H-n-i-c cause his wasent to simple
so his punches had a little more effect

Da King dis line is kinda funny but super played out
an' wit dis last line remember dat i bomb
i'll leave you on da' corna' working nex' to ya mom

both yall keep battlin keep elvatin repay da fav vote

Uppin............................................. ...

Uppin............................................

IP: E7AF 9196


Damn, lets get this shit closed......................

Voted For: Da King

aight this battle sucked ass, none of you looked like you even tried in this battle. HNIC you had two michael jackson punchlines which i may add are very played out, also your finisher was too but you put it in a way that i'll count as a punch. DA KING? lol anyways u brought the same kinda flow but i think this punch was enough to take this battle, althought u used the same concept for your finisher.

when i'll drop you in dese' streets like J.Lo's husbands

uppin.............................................

Voted For: Da King

Da King
structure is good.. flow is on target.. no multis.. u attempted wordplay a few times.. 1-2 of ur punches connected.. attempted personal..

H-N-I-C
structure is good.. flow is on target.. no multis.. attempted wordplay.. but it was terrible.. none of ur punches connected.. no good personals..

Overall
both had a good structure.. both had a good flow.. neither had multis.. Da King had better wordplay.. more connecting punches.. and an attempted personal.. so basing off of that.. Da King gets my vote..

VOTE - DA KING

Voted For: H-N-I-C

ok hnic wins daking went over the line limit rules is 6 lines max he dropped 8 therefore hinic wins

Voted For: H-N-I-C

da king-u had a nice verse, but ur structure messed it all up. ur lines were stretched in some places, and then they were not finished in some places. ur punches were kinda played, and that oprah winfrey line was clean. but, c'mon...u kno jay-z said that. but whatever, u still lost..
jay-z "...then i move tha weight like im oprah's son...uh...i
ll show u how to do this son..."
not xactly bitin i guess, same concept tho...
hinc-yo verse was there. u came harder in punches and mettas. i was feelin ur personals, but i think u should elevate a lil in that, cuase they were kinda simple. yo structure was wayy better in this one, and thats tha main reason i gave u tha win....
overall-hnic took this one by far to me, but i still think yall should elevate more on originality, and better wordplay...

plz return tha vote on battle link in sig...against CJ...last one...that would be much appreciated. cause i took tha time out to vote on this, and i xplained it. so plz xplain ur votes...


good drops, but still everyone can elevate

~1~

Voted For: Da King

HNIC
This nigga calls himself da King.......yeah I guess I can see it
Cuz he was jockin the king of pop when he first heard Beat It
^^rofl best opener... lol
U more like The King's daughter slobbin up pedophiles
I heard u was in Neverland makin Mike and Bubbles smile
^^getting played, these Neverland lines.... but the first half was decent..
Versatile wit my writin style time to switch it up
It's sad u haven't battled once and u already outta luck
^^nice closer.... not bad seemed like a quick key

Da King:
well first of all i'm the king you aint in charge
you hella scared dat's why you only want four bars
^^nice opener.. lol aight punch
you a phony actin' crunk lik' you go do sumthin'
when i'll drop you in dese' streets like J.Lo's husbands
^^not a good rhyme scheme lost points there u stretched that rhyme scheme, concept not bad tho..
get when i spit it deep lik' fifty
i move so much weight u might think i'm oprahwinfrey
^^you talkin bout celebs, diss HNIC.. lose the self-glorification lines..
an' wit dis last line remember dat i bomb
i'll leave you on da' corna' working nex' to ya mom
^^lol nice closer not bad either... I thought HNIC had some nice punches but I feel Da King was a lil' more original with his lines.. This was a close battle but Da King took this one in my opinion but slightly.. stay up, you 2..
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Voted For: Da King

aight fuck feedback.....you win structly becuase he didnt drop atleast 4 bars.....he only posted 3 bars


This nigga calls himself da King.......yeah I guess I can see it
Cuz he was jockin the king of pop when he first heard Beat It
1 BAR
U more like The King's daughter slobbin up pedophiles
I heard u was in Neverland makin Mike and Bubbles smile
2 BAR
Versatile wit my writin style time to switch it up
It's sad u haven't battled once and u already outta luck
3 BAR

sorry kid..next time go by the rules