MaRVJay1009 vs CounTREE Jay
 

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6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 01-25-05 at 02:29 AM

Must drop verse in 360 minutes after check in.

CounTREE Jay has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-25-05 01:57 AM.

MaRVJay1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-25-05 02:18 AM.

look.....

dis not ya lucky-day,so afta u get hit wit da pumps-we-spray
"pussy" u'll b hangin from "da branch" datz whut i call a "CUNT-TREE-jay"
no u wasn't on da phone with ya wifey fam...u dis like bitches
only time "change- skins" u tryin da "veiw dis site different"....
go reach 4 my crown im squeezin pound n u meetin da ground
ya moms a hoe she like "homeless ppl" do alot of "sleepin around"
ima make sure dis prick's ghost....i'll doubt u'll even make dis shit close.....
out in "Ny" u da "HERB dat be on da sideline" like da "knicks coach"
but if u really puttin grams on da block..betta keep ya hands on a glock
i'll kill ya "grandmother" by beatin her ass with a "grandfather-clock"

nuff said.....

explinations..

first bar=in his profile he in a crew called DA BRANCH..and i just fliped his name PUSSY ON DA BRANCH....CUNT-TREE JAY

second=bar..when i mean CHANGIN SKINS i mean gettin different pussy if u dont get it dont vote

4th bar=i dont know if ya follow da nba but da knicks gota new coach named HERB WILLIAMS....u'll get da punch

aight.

I eat these commercial Mcz for dinner, but I don't even really like tha beef,
If your bark is worse than your bite, somehow you musta lost your teeth.
Prolly tan from all the sunnin'z, so I know what you did last summer,
1009 a tribute to the girls you spit it at, just writin' random numbers.
Another NYC M.C., confusin' hip-hop wit tales of comin' from the gutter,
Stay talkin' bout toast, and can't believe your shit still ain't butter.
Lines can be long and heavy, mine still ahead by years of light,
Name COMICal, only 1 Jay that makes niggaz MARVEL on the Site.

Too lazy to write anymore, let's just leave this shit at that.

-CJ-

Voted For: CounTREE Jay

ite heres da breakdown
Punches=countree(both had reasonably good punches)
wordplay= marv(you flipped his name but the punch was shit)
personals=countree
structure= tie
im giving it to county coz i thought his verse was stronger.. both werent ill but they was ite. by da way marv wtf has killing his granmother wit a granfather clock got to do wit dissing him?? ask yaself that lol

Yeah, Uppin'............................................ .................................................. ...........................


-CJ-

Voted For: CounTREE Jay

This aint a hate vote. I wanted to vote for Marvejay cos his verse was dope and i wanted to show im fair. BUT then i read countreejay's verse.........

MarveJay: Some real good multis and metas with a lot of hard hitting punches. Your vocab was good and flow was cool. Strcture was good, i think some lines only stetched cos of the bold text. Your biggest problem was you tried too hard to get the multis in your punches lacked in power and this is a battle not an open mic. Nonetheless a real good verse, giving me second thoughts as to whether i ever wanna battle you. lol

best bar: "go reach 4 my crown im squeezin pound n u meetin da ground
ya moms a hoe she like "homeless ppl" do alot of "sleepin around"
-This was cool


Countree Jay: Im not that familiar wiv ya work and i seen you floating bout RV and i must say you are fucking dope!!!! Metas coming in quick, your punches were out of this world! some real hard hitters that were all on target with some cool personals. Structure was cool making it nice flowing, easy to read and enjoyable.
-One day im gon be this good.

best bar: "Another NYC M.C., confusin' hip-hop wit tales of comin' from the gutter,
Stay talkin' bout toast, and can't believe your shit still ain't butter."
-aah nice one!

uz a real hater fam its sad..........................................

This was feedback posted for CounTREE Jay
 

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Uppin'.........................This............... ......................Shit...........

-CJ-

Uppin'.........................This............... ......................Shit...........

-CJ-

Yo, Uppin' my niggaz and niggerettes....................................... ............

-CJ-

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

DEFFINATELY HAD BETTA OUNCHES...A LIL STRECHED BUT DEY WAS STILL HOT NIGGA...I GIVE IT 8/10



RETURN DA LOVE NIGGA

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Yo nigga, i don't like you, you stay droppin' unexplained votes in my shits. don't post a vote if you don't know how to asshole.

-CJ-

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yeah, uppin' again, it's aight to vote.............................................. ............

-CJ-

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

hahaha dayum i think marv ripped this one...this niggaz dope..came back with straight fire...jea i give this vote to marv

Coutnree: your shyt was koo but you had no multi's u had sum good wordplay use but he got u on that...punches umm i think he got u...umm personals he got u...he didnt merk u he beat u by a bit

marv: nice shit nigga multis was killen em..so was ur flow and punches and shyt nice shit dawg

vote:marv

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uppin 4 more votes ppl

uppin 4 some more votes

This was feedback posted for CounTREE Jay
 

peeping polls............... nice job fellas........ :thumbup:

This was feedback posted for CounTREE Jay
 

checkin pollz.....

ok since "CounTREE Jay" think im "hate" votin on his ass lemme break it down...

personalz:CTJ
punches:MJ
wordplay:MJ
structure:equal

so now u c jay...dats how i voted....so u can stop messagin me on AIM ridin my dick talkin bout u wanna banishment battle me son...wun

Voted For: CounTREE Jay

I eat these commercial Mcz for dinner, but I don't even really like tha beef,
If your bark is worse than your bite, somehow you musta lost your teeth.
decent opener, punch landed
Prolly tan from all the sunnin'z, so I know what you did last summer,
1009 a tribute to the girls you spit it at, just writin' random numbers.
decent punch here, flow was good, landed…
Another NYC M.C., confusin' hip-hop wit tales of comin' from the gutter,
Stay talkin' bout toast, and can't believe your shit still ain't butter.
nice punch it connected here
Lines can be long and heavy, mine still ahead by years of light,
Name COMICal, only 1 Jay that makes niggaz MARVEL on the Site.
decent closer, kinda weak though but was good

overall you had a good drop, punches were hard-and landed
structure was in place and the flow was good with it…decent drop
from you

dis not ya lucky-day,so afta u get hit wit da pumps-we-spray
"pussy" u'll b hangin from "da branch" datz whut i call a "CUNT-TREE-jay"
decent opener, flow was choppy to it
no u wasn't on da phone with ya wifey fam...u dis like bitches
only time "change- skins" u tryin da "veiw dis site different"....
decent punch, kinda weak but was aight, flow was okay
go reach 4 my crown im squeezin pound n u meetin da ground
ya moms a hoe she like "homeless ppl" do alot of "sleepin around"
weak punch, wasn’t much feelin it here
ima make sure dis prick's ghost....i'll doubt u'll even make dis shit close.....
out in "Ny" u da "HERB dat be on da sideline" like da "knicks coach"
can’t say this is played, but it seems like it is…
but if u really puttin grams on da block..betta keep ya hands on a glock
i'll kill ya "grandmother" by beatin her ass with a "grandfather-clock"
decent closer, was aight

overall you had a decent drop too, punches were okay, some played
but okay…decent flow to it too…

This was feedback posted for MaRVJay1009
 

lol....me and u think alike...that 1st line....funny as shit...cant post a full vote so just feedback for now

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

this was really a 1-sided battle hands down all across the board:
opener: marvjay
multis: marvjay
structure: marvjay
punches: both
personals: marvjay
closer: marvjay
marv just came harder & had more punches then countree did; countree jay u need 2 elevate in ur rhymes more

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Battle me homie, see who need to elevate. Ain't you that nigga who hatin' cause i fucked your girl? :evilgrin:

-CJ-

Voted For: CounTREE Jay

vote/cj... he came pretty weak on this and still came hard enough to take marvj.. it was close though..flow was even structure was even... but i just think countree came harder with tha personals and punches.. so no hate.. pz

This was feedback posted for CounTREE Jay
 

^^^UPPIN'!!!^^^

nice shit c.j.......good job marv.

BOOST THE MUTHAFUCKIN' CRHYME RATE HOMIE!!! hold it down like a boss......word.


...the super...

Uppin' this shit, so it can be done. Nice sig change by the way Marv. Guess the personal stung a lil', huh?

-CJ-

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Finish this mufukin' shit, someone please. Either way, i don't give a fuck.

-CJ-

This was feedback posted for CounTREE Jay
 

check pollz............................................. ....

Yeah, how the fuck about votin' bitches????????????????????????????

-CJ-

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

marvjay won it was close battle i liked marvs veres cause of his punches they hit hard and vocab was amazing nice wordplay 8/10

best line- dis not ya lucky-day,so afta u get hit wit da pumps-we-spray
"pussy" u'll b hangin from "da branch" datz whut i call a "CUNT-TREE-jay"