Hot Sauce vs Flamin Barz
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-25-05 at 03:10 PM

Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in.

Hot Sauce has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-25-05 02:15 PM.

Flamin Barz has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-25-05 02:31 PM.

I'm a lyrically and physically *murda-dis-cat*, you're *unheard-of-in-rap*, Stop tryin ta act gangsta when u ain't neva *heard-of-a-gat*
I'm *LEAVIN' U MURKED*, *SCREAMIN' IN DIRT*, *BLEEDIN' THROUGH SHIRTS*, ya name's "flamen bars", so you should be *KNEELIN' IN CHURCH*
Confessin', nigga I'm about ta teach u a lesson
Dis nigga's done, not even "Pastor Offering'll" "throw him a blessin'"
I'm tha lyrical physician, curin' niggaz of *SICKNESSES*, hittin' niggaz from all *DISTANCES* wit'out leavin' *WITNESSES*
I'll have u layin' on ya back like niggaz "gettin'-a-tan"
Tha only sin you've committed was in church, givin' "head-ta-ya-man"
You fuckin' *hataz'll* get left on *respirators* "breathin'-through-tubes"
Treated like old men at nursin' homes wit' bitches "feedin'-u-food"
"Leavin'-you-prude", you ain't neva had no in-ter-course
Cuz nigga, tha only thing dat you've eva rode is-a-horse
When ma *GAT POPS SHOTS*, u gon realize u ain't DAT HOT*
You only "hard", when u lookin' at gay porn on ya LAPTOP
You heard of tha K.K.K., well I'm B.B.B.
*BIG, BOLD, AND BLACK* tha only nigga wit' *SIX GOLDEN GATZ*
"Somebody *HOLD HIM BACK*!"
Plus I got chrome "cold as ice" so I can pop dem "*FROZEN CAPS*"
Nigga shut tha *fuck up*, i'll leave u *cut up* like *CHESSE IN ITS PACKAGE*
I'll leave ya body a *FEAST TA MAGGOTS*, python-grip procedes ta *SQUEEZE THESE FAGGOTS*
This fuckin' "bum is see thru" (fake)
You can have all tha "vistin' hours" u want, but nobody's gonna "come ta see you"
I'm lethal, like ma boy Danny Glover-is-his-prime
Ya Fam wants me ta pay for ur death, so I left ya mother-with-a-dime (he ain't worth a funeral)
You can't get ya fuckin' deal ta *land yet*
Nobody wants ta see you, like viewin' Suge Knight in *Spandex*
This battle's lopsided towards me like whole Ja and *50 fight* (50's murkin' him)
You beatin' me is like thinkin' tha threat of *SARS is ova* (impossible)
You ain't no fuckin' "hustla" jus cuz u stole *bars from "H.O.V.A."*
I'm a *FINISH* this fake *LYRICIST* and *DEMINISH* his *IMGAE*
By murderin' tracks and "breakin' records" like dem niggaz in *"GUINESS"*
So if u don't think dat I'm gon' *WIN THIS* then you need ta be *sent-to-a-psychiatrist*
Cuz I'm tha "best thing ta happen ta rap" since Vanilla Ice *"went-inta-retirement"*

u dont want to plex - i send bullets and u can't dodge them-
im simply killin you softly - when i let the blades massage him-
i straight demolish you - becuz my little pellets can turn to missiles-
why face me when ill stab u in ya cheek and leave permanent dimples-
Sauce a Jenny Craig protester? - explains why ya rhymes are counter fit-
no talent eh? - lets test his reflexes and see how well he can counter hits-
you're just a fool - and me a G - so i back up and fire-
i slap up liars and leave em with no escape - like i gashed ya tires-
leave you smellin like a skunk cus ur simply a punk-
u cant reach higher heights - like midgets attemptin to dunk-
I’ll chop ya wrist - no need for a gun to stop ya gay ass rhymes-
Your death goin be a RapVerse Exclusive - like Pac in the LA Times-
you're just a loser - I shoot first - you aint tight - even a loose birth-
I cant help that my styles “Addictive” - but I guess that the “Truth hurts”-

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Voted For: Hot Sauce

wow pretty good battle, however yo:

punches- tie as fuck.....very close

personals- HS adressed the personals more

multis- HS had multis out his ass

structure/flow- FB by far, it was way easier to read ur lines were streched as fuck Sauce.

Closing- tie....both closings was nice

vote/ ah close one but Flamin was overheated by the Hot Sauce...

I Got My Eyez On U HotSauce, Imma Battle U And Murk U Wen U Ready...lol

Bring It On Bitch...lol!

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Voted For: Flamin Barz

checkin the polls...nice verses by both of you too....

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^^i wasn't tryin to vote...i was jus checkin the polls...so tell Strobe to delete my vote....holla

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Voted For: Flamin Barz

Voted for Flamin Barz

Barz gets my vote due to flow

Both had damn good pucnhes
both had some personals

but it was the flow

Hot ya verse is so wacked out man all the * n commas n quotes it is jus , mad confusing i couldnt stay wit u at all man

loose some of that shyt man freal

good battle

Not Hatin, Jus votin

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checkin dem pollz....

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and do you even battle your a dickrider , you votes bitch that it

Voted For: Hot Sauce

Hot sauce u killed di cat itz a 1 sided battle
u had multiz punchlines and metaphor
no one had strucure
the kid had notin

return da fav vote

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Voted For: Hot Sauce

whoooooo flow and multis was crazee datz whuts up fam...ya structure need some work tho alot of niggaz aint gon be able da follow dat....flamin barz fam u good but u didn't go as hard as hot did i seen u do betta u lose dis 1 tho..no hate true story

opener-hot sauce i was feelin da multis ya flow was good alos..flamin ya opener wasn't strong at all
structure-flamin takes dis his shit was neat..and hot ya shit need work fam
punchlines-hot took dis wun his shits were original..flamin u aint really have nun dat stood out
multis-hot dis were he killed it at shits was crazee...flamin i seen about 1 from u
flow-hot even tho some of his lines stretched da multis help da flow...flamin ya was good but his was betta
creativity-hot ofcourse...
personals-nun from both of u

hot sauce took dis..

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Voted For: Hot Sauce

i think hot sauce took this one. not because his verse was longer, but because i think he came wit more creative mettaphores in this one, and more creativitie.
FB-u had a nice verse. relatively short, compared to hot sauce, but i wasnt feelin ur overall verse. i thought it was kinda boring, and not interesting at all. i think when u text battle, u need to come harder, and more interesting. some of ur punches landed well, and seemed hard, and UNplay'd, but allota yo punches were kinda wack to me, and didnt land like i think they shouldve. u had good structure in yo verse. i didnt really see any stretched or unfinished lines, so i think u took tha stucture part of this one. yo wordplay was off in this one, and yo vocab was also off to me. i wasnt feelin ur rhyming either. i think u had too many predictable rhymes in there. on tha mettaphore part, i think u came okay on that, but not any tight shit, that aint been said before. but ur overall verse, i wasnt really feelin it. no hate tho
hot sauce- i was feelin ur overall verse. yo opener, and first couple of barz was off tha chain, i thought, but i think near tha middle of ur verse (tha main focus part), was off, and ur punches started to land incorrectly, and they seem'd a lil play'd. u did manage to pick it up near tha end tho. i wasnt feelin yo structure in this one. yo lines were too close together. yo had some hard punches, but i think yo mettas was better. (when you typin in text, you should really leave out that "*" shit, and all that xtra shit you put in there, it really fucks up yo structure, n thats a big focus in text battling), but like i said, i was feelin this overall verse, and i think u came wit it, and took this one.
overall-yall should work on some shit that i stated, but this was a one sided battle to me. i think hot took this one hands down, wit a better all around verse.


opener-hot sauce
punches-hot sauce
mettas-hot sauce
structure-flamin barz
body verse-flamin barz
creativeness-hot sauce
vocab-hot sauce
wordplay-hot sauce
multies-hot sauce
rhymin-hot sauce
closer-none
overall-hot sauce

v/hot sauce

[B]And plz RTF on battle one of tha battle links in sig. and plz explain it. yall prolly aint, but if u dont, i wont vote on yo shit no more, cause they;re really aint that many honest voters on RV...but, plz RTF this shit...

GOOD BATTLE....~1~

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