MaRVJay1009 vs kamikazee
 

Battle Rules:

10 lines...nothin more
3 votes=tko
No Crew or hate Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

check da fukk in nigga


Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 01-25-05 at 05:50 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

Kamikazee has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-25-05 04:51 PM.

Yo dis kid think he scares me wit dat record wit a name like MaRVJay1009,
Some say he is ill, i dont see it cant rap at all, ur rhyme will neva be as syck as mine
They call me da one hit wounder, cause wit one punch ill have your ass KO'd,
Tryin to win against me is stupid, wrong way ur goin down tha damn merk road
i aint even on fire half way threw my battle, cause right now im jus a little spark,
jus imagine your worst nightmare u ever, had im da one u see when u in da dark
Im telling you now, you betta start showing ur master some damn respect,
Before i let you hang from da rope i jus tied around your fucking neck*
Seeing your raps make me wounder, dat the esablishment got no talent,
Herbish crew or Vet crew?, kind of a herbish crew check da scale they off balance*

*I jus hung his dreams of winning dis battle....
**Its nothin but wack ass herbs there r more herbs than vets so u put them on a scale they off balance....lol

He said it takes 10 minutes 2 drop a 10 line vers in a PM to me and it jus took me only 5 minutes.....~1~

MaRVJay1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-25-05 05:10 PM.

look stupid dickhead......

he had da pre write last nite...dis BiTCH iS WILDiN.......
if "kamikazee went platinum" they talkin bout "twista album"*
just look at how i go thru rounds,but fam but suppose u drown
i'll do like dat "alchemist song" put ya face in a pool & "hold u down"
my bars each-vet respect it...not u ya weak text neglected....
lose 6 in a row and you were 3-11 be4 u reset ya record.....
u liked boys & gilrs at young age fam u was bi-3,guns? i buy 3
im not "weed" u'll get literally "hooked"*snuffed" if u "try me"
u'll be in a gown "holdin a pole like stripper's" but its gon be a "iv"
ya girl gave me her "address" now her face is where "i-pee"

nuff said......

first bar=da rapper twista had labum called kamikazee

second bar=if u dont get it dont vote

3rd bar=he lose 6 battle in a row and be4 he reset his shit his record was 3-11 check da battle stats

da rest u should get

yo i got to say dis is no hate cuzz i jus wanted to battle u.........but nice verse anyways.......~1~

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

Normal Punches-MaRVJay1009, pretty good punches. Bi punches are played, but other than that. Kamikazee, only a few punches, rest were self glorification.

Personal Punches-MaRVJay1009, some personals. They were ok but work on more of them, and harder hitting. Kamikazee, nothing to rate.

Metaphors-MaRVJay1009, ok metaphors. Not much to say really. Kamikazee, played metaphors, work on em.

Multiple Rhymes-MaRVJay1009, you had them. Kamikazee, none.

Structure-MaRVJay1009, a lot better structure. Not nearly as many stretched lines, but still too many. Kamikazee, bad structure. Work on your stretched lines.

Flow-MaRVJay1009, decent flow. Fell off sometimes though. Kamikazee, not that great of flow. Fell off too many times.

Word Play-MaRVJay1009, you had some.

MaRVJay1009, aight drop. Work on more personals and better wordplay.

Kamikazee, work on punches. Most of your "punches" were self glorification. Try some personals as well.

No Hate Just An Honest Voter (Return the Favor, Please)

v/MaRVJay1009

One Vote. One Battle. One Win

......................................uppin....... ............................yea i do have to much self glory i need to work on it thanks for da information fam

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uppin 4 some fukkin votes

uppin vote muthafukkaz

..................................uppin........... ................

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

Voted for MarvJay1009

OHHHHH tight shyt all Marv

Punches went to Mar he came much harder and much more personal.

Marv Bes Line:
he had da pre write last nite...dis BiTCH iS WILDiN.......
if "kamikazee went platinum" they talkin bout "twista album"*

my bars each-vet respect it...not u ya weak text neglected....
lose 6 in a row and you were 3-11 be4 u reset ya record.....



(Awesome took his face off wit those)

Flow went to Marv everything went in tune and I had no problem gettin with his beat

Kama you were way to self centered about urself, ya gotta diss him man not self gloat about you man this is battlin not "Its your Life Kamikazee"

Ya flow was off n on work a lil on that
Punches once again u were gloating

Kama gloat Lines:

Yo dis kid think he scares me wit dat record wit a name like MaRVJay1009,
Some say he is ill, i dont see it cant rap at all, ur rhyme will neva be as syck as mine

(Not feelin it)

They call me da one hit wounder, cause wit one punch ill have your ass KO'd,
Tryin to win against me is stupid, wrong way ur goin down tha damn merk road

( Nah not feelin it at all)

uppin 4 more votes ppl

uuuuuuuuuuupiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnn

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

marv took this one...kamikazee came off kinda simple and weak in thsi shit...

marv-u had a nice opener...yo flows tied together with ur verse thruout this whole battle. i like how u came consistent thru ur whole verse and never felll off. u started off nice and finished nice. u had tha personals and punches...not too many personals tho. i was lovin tha metas and creativenesss in this shit...good drop
kamikazee-u had a dope drop too, but i think u came too soft for this shit. yo punches landed, but only in certain area. yo personals werent that hot. yo opener was wack...but i think u picked it up l8r in tha flow, but u had already lost tha battle, cuase marv came wayy too hard for u...
overall-this battle was nice. i was feeling it, but i think marv took this one. he had harder punches and harder mettas. good shit...

yall RTF on battles in sig....cause i took tha time out to vote on this shit...NO HATE, just HONEST VOTE...rtf tho people....
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

just look at how i go thru rounds,but fam but suppose u drown
i'll do like dat "alchemist song" put ya face in a pool & "hold u down"
u'll be in a gown "holdin a pole like stripper's" but its gon be a "iv"
ya girl gave me her "address" now her face is where "i-pee"

vs.

Seeing your raps make me wounder, dat the esablishment got no talent,
Herbish crew or Vet crew?, kind of a herbish crew check da scale they off balance*

2 bars to 1...Kazee didnt come nice, I thought your verse wasn't gonna be good at all till the closer, which was iight...

v/Marv...

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

V/marvjay1009.....he gets my vote cause of his creative punchs an his vocab his verse was consistently dissin u ...kamikazee....u had sum good lines in ur verse u improved from the last time i read u stuff but u need to make more creative punchs ur to basic wit them u didnt have much vocab either....no hate juss elavate.....
punchs=marv
multi's=tie(none really)
structure=tie
vocab=marv
opener=marv
closer=marv
overall=Marvjay1009
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