|
Spite vs phive
Battle Rules:
5 bars = 10 lines (DONT EXCEED THE LIMIT) No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 01-26-05 at 04:22 PM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
phive has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-26-05 03:53 PM.
|
Spite has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-26-05 03:53 PM.
|
im makin this fool happy cuz imma battle him, soon ya smile will wipe to a grim, call me fat boy slim, cuz imma funk show brotha about ta win,//
yo you cant be here to watch me ruin ya shit so ill write, my rapstyles tight, i say good night, cuz i laid ya out no de(spite)// yo kid you only wanted phive bars fo me ta spit, well imma give you full potential in this shit, imma leave ya hit, on the ground with a slit wrist// you cant pick up cuz yur a fag, cant fight ya way out of a wet paper bag, im droppin niggas like im playin tag, break ya leg, so dont brag, cuz ya rap style i made// time fo a closer on this fool, ya uncool, im werkin you like a tool, im drownin you like a three year old in a pool// |
check it.
I'll give you this loss cuz its not like im taking you of course, rather bringing you close but what bother's me the most, is how i ended your rap carreer with a POST! Now your ghost, i'll toast as i watch this guy choke, and i dont even need to pull a PHIVE JOKE Arrive smoked on rap verse im a savage to step cuz ur so wack, this win will damage my rep Barrage a vet ur heat is a flare to the best, i'll cum in ur lungs n watch the baby TEAR THROUGH UR CHEST Dare you to test but i'll beat you anyday, so take this loss in a friendly way cuz hey its the INTERNET ANYWAYZ! |
yo uppin fo some votes playasssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss sssssss
|
uppin fo some votes people s we can end this shit
|
Voted For: Spite
Phive's made absolutely no sense. Spite's verse was witty and hilarious. My fav line was the "this win will damage my rep." IT was so funny, i think this whole battle was pretty good. Good flow good punches and GREAT multies... V/ Spite return the favor http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=152706 |
ya right man i know i won this shit and yall should too if you think i lost you honestly dont know rap
|
Voted For: phive
Spite I'll give you this loss cuz its not like im taking you of course, rather bringing you close but what bother's me the most, is how i ended your rap carreer with a POST! ^nice opener Now your ghost, i'll toast as i watch this guy choke, and i dont even need to pull a PHIVE JOKE ^decent bar Arrive smoked on rap verse im a savage to step cuz ur so wack, this win will damage my rep ^hmmm,okay Barrage a vet ur heat is a flare to the best, i'll cum in ur lungs n watch the baby TEAR THROUGH UR CHEST ^good good Dare you to test but i'll beat you anyday, so take this loss in a friendly way cuz hey its the INTERNET ANYWAYZ! ^like closer Overall you had solid drop in fact,your opener was best part, good internal rhyming and nice punches...was definately feeling your flow,structure might need some improvement but you dropped some good stuff.Vocab could be slightly better but nothing too bad... phive im makin this fool happy cuz imma battle him, soon ya smile will wipe to a grim, call me fat boy slim, cuz imma funk show brotha about ta win,// ^bit self-glorification... yo you cant be here to watch me ruin ya shit so ill write, my rapstyles tight, i say good night, cuz i laid ya out no de(spite)// ^same as previous in fact... yo kid you only wanted phive bars fo me ta spit, well imma give you full potential in this shit, imma leave ya hit, on the ground with a slit wrist// ^uhm,still no punch... you cant pick up cuz yur a fag, cant fight ya way out of a wet paper bag, im droppin niggas like im playin tag, break ya leg, so dont brag, cuz ya rap style i made// ^decent i guess time fo a closer on this fool, ya uncool, im werkin you like a tool, im drownin you like a three year old in a pool// ^good closer You used a lot of self-glorification and some punches were sorta played,only one personal but most of your shit was better than Spite's...Flow was tight but you need to improve your structure to make it easier to read and maybe up your vocab a little to.Had some good wordplay here and there. |
lmao@ drama queen's vote, she explains mine to be better and votes for him. da fuck anyways uppin on this shit
|
yeah man you were just lucky to get a vote yo uppin this battleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
|
lol this battle for take more than 2 weeks to be voted on, yet there are like 200 people coming to this website everyday.
|
Voted For: Spite
V/Spite.......close battle but i give my vote to him cause he had punchs an they were used consistently wit good vocab an sum personals...phive....u had sum decenet lines but ur structure needs work an u need to be more creative wit ur punchs not so basic...no hate juss elavate..... punchs=spite structure=spite vocab=spite opener=spite closer=spite overall=Spite *RETURN THE FAVOR* |
yo uppin for some fuckin votes yall playas neva vote
|
This was feedback posted for phive
Yo Man Tghis Is A-gam Eu Said My Shit Was Writtin By Someone Els I Swear It Wasent And If It Was From Who ??
|
lol uppin on this shit, fuckkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk voooote already netceessss
|
uppin playasssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss ssssssssssssssssssssss
|
another uppin, this site sucks god damn battles last for days around here and this is one of the biggest sites on the net, do people come here to socialise??
|
holy fuck this shit still aint got any votes, and im gonna have to still come here and up this shit mother fuck all of you
|
Voted For: Spite
k well you dropped harder, no real personels, but it was decent, some punches hit... but your not a vet...try to make your multi's more then 1 sylable, but otherwise nice... good flow, phive, look at some of this sites best, and try to learn off of them k, you'll both learn how to elevate, but I gotta give this ine to spite |
hmmmm uppin come on ppl lets get this going oh so it has to be atleast 50 characters wrong well shit
|
Voted For: Spite
phive: fix ya structure mayne... and try not to use so many self-glorification lines... you had some aight lines in your verse overall.. however Spite came harder with his lines, a better structure, both ya flow was pretty good.. but i wasn't feeling Spite's closer yours beat his barely... the best lines in this battle were: rather bringing you close but what bother's me the most, is how i ended your rap carreer with a POST! ^^those lines right there, was enuff to take the battle.. kinda funny but a nice punch, the only one that stood out even tho the lines are in separate bars, i think the way you worded them were nice.. Spite gets my vote on this one.. |
lol aight aight 2 weeks later, this battle is ALMOST done so yah uppin
|
Voted For: phive
winner- phive check it. I'll give you this loss cuz its not like im taking you of course, rather bringing you close but what bother's me the most, is how i ended your rap carreer with a POST! Now your ghost, i'll toast as i watch this guy choke, and i dont even need to pull a PHIVE JOKE Arrive smoked on rap verse im a savage to step cuz ur so wack, this win will damage my rep Barrage a vet ur heat is a flare to the best, i'll cum in ur lungs n watch the baby TEAR THROUGH UR CHEST Dare you to test but i'll beat you anyday, so take this loss in a friendly way cuz hey its the INTERNET ANYWAYZ! aight, u had decent punches(they need improvement though), your vocab needs to improve, u had some nice inner rhyming. im makin this fool happy cuz imma battle him, soon ya smile will wipe to a grim, call me fat boy slim, cuz imma funk show brotha about ta win,// yo you cant be here to watch me ruin ya shit so ill write, my rapstyles tight, i say good night, cuz i laid ya out no de(spite)// yo kid you only wanted phive bars fo me ta spit, well imma give you full potential in this shit, imma leave ya hit, on the ground with a slit wrist// you cant pick up cuz yur a fag, cant fight ya way out of a wet paper bag, im droppin niggas like im playin tag, break ya leg, so dont brag, cuz ya rap style i made// time fo a closer on this fool, ya uncool, im werkin you like a tool, im drownin you like a three year old in a pool// nice inner rhyming, punches were pretty good but need improvement, had a little bit of wordplay, not too bad overall you two are pretty evenly matched, so nice battle |
mmmm victory, i can almost see it, but will phive come back, nope not likely
|
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhhhhhh
|
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ daasa
|
lol this battle started last month, and people still havent finished voting on this lol must be a record or something
|
Voted For: Spite
Spite got this Not the strongest battl;e But spite has the much better structure, an a few punches that hit kinda hard, oth lacked consistancy, an phive the structure of your verse was all over the place, no real flow too it, so spite for the hard hittin lines in what has ta be said wasnt the strongest battle, but spite hands down won this battle No hate ta neither, an return the fave in any of my battles you see floatin around Peace |
| All times are GMT -4. The time now is 05:55 PM. |