The Dex vs Emblem
 

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Dex has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-29-05 10:59 AM.

Alien has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-29-05 04:45 PM.

His verses look like they were written on smack
Aint difficult winning this, he admits hes whack

He couldn’t hit a "hot bar" in Las Vegas nightspots
Im burning the screen, your not even quite hot

coming at you with talents of mean proportions
I don’t just own you, this is complete extortion

Alien in a UFO where he likes to soar
How can he fly wen he cant leave the floor?

Chasing fame but the only way you'll fold paper
Is in the toilet when your doubling up the layers

We shall see if Alien brought the correct protection
Cos after this battle wont be an Alien Resurrection

At times of hurricanes, Alien don’t run or duck
Cos thats the only time he gets a blow or a suck

Should have run for cover and listened to your mother
Your brothers my son cos I fucked her without a rubber

Cant be fussy with choosing his type of persuasion
Was told they were easy, so just looks for asians

Hes the opposite of a mailman with nothing to boast
Talks so much shit wants to delete his own posts

First Of All, I just like to say I'm a kid from Taiwan, This link proves it .(Read Socrate's verse)

The rest is self explainitory, dont get the punches don't vote!

Dex ain't what you expect...his winning chance is slim
his skills are so ugly...even aliens takes pictures of him
despite all the times I hook him...dex still won't be star
I mean really...who still leave spaces between each bar?
the god made mistakes...now he wishes to start off new
the kid so wack...I even have to wait in line to hate you
everyone wants you dead...I can't visit though, quit kid!
noone wants to come to europe...UK may become Madrid
& I wouldn't come to your funeral...I think it's full of shit
but I did send a telegraph...saying that I approved of it
& I think this is the turning point now...Alien is dominant
I'm not in a crew...at least I'm not in Twisted Government
damn newbs these days...they're just wacker than wack
Dex's 'X' marks the spot...and it's how RV 'kissed his ass'
dex is that wack...don't even mention twisted Government
of course I'd call them tw...Alien pretty much own the crew
the Alien remains confident...and I'd even feel dex's pain
Dex been downhill...since he removed the 'W' in his name
really Dex...you wack and I don't know if it was intended
how could you be dexterous? 70% of humans are all right handed!!!

Voted For: Emblem

the god made mistakes...now he wishes to start off new
the kid so wack...I even have to wait in line to hate you
& I think this is the turning point now...Alien is dominant
I'm not in a crew...at least I'm not in Twisted Government

vs.

Hes the opposite of a mailman with nothing to boast
Talks so much shit wants to delete his own posts

Even thought the bars don't lok like it, Alien completely owned dex. I think Alien needs to stop being scared of having "bad" structure and start focusing more on his punches, because they are pretty cool at times. But sometimes, it is also very bland "You're whack!" type shit, dig? Dex needs to stop putting spaces b/w his bars, needs to stop using all the links, and needs to learn what a punch is.

"I don’t just own you, this is complete extortion"

^^Thats not a punch. Thats like...not even filler. Diss him dummy, don't just say shit. Anyways...

v-Alien

Voted For: The Dex

Dex- Your bars fairly basic- but it really dont hurt from it, cuz you through a couple effective personals in there, a couple decent punches... good flow-- all in all not bad....
Emblem- Your verse started o.k- the bar w/ the link of him doing exactly what he did in this battle was good... but your punches weren't very strong... keep droppin em though... 1 vote The Dex.

should have upped my game more on this one.

Didnt realise it was elevated front lines until id posted but its cool

This was feedback posted for The Dex
 

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This was feedback posted for Emblem
 

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Voted For: The Dex

ok kid whos name i cant read your punches and personals were either very weak or played here and that made your verse wack struture and flow was good though but weak ass punches will kill you everytime.
dex this wasnt great but punches were pretty decent they sruck hard in some places personals and links were dope as shit good research there nice struture and flow also good vocab.
ok punches and personals win battles and dex led in them 1000% cuz guy with the name i cant read aint have not one good punch or diss i liked.

Voted For: Emblem

His verses look like they were written on smack
Aint difficult winning this, he admits hes whack
nice persona…decent punch
He couldn’t hit a "hot bar" in Las Vegas nightspots
Im burning the screen, your not even quite hot
flow was choopy, weak punch
coming at you with talents of mean proportions
I don’t just own you, this is complete extortion
eh, decent punch, hardly feelin it
Alien in a UFO where he likes to soar
How can he fly wen he cant leave the floor?
weak punch…1st line cost is for you
Chasing fame but the only way you'll fold paper
Is in the toilet when your doubling up the layers
pretty decent punch
We shall see if Alien brought the correct protection
Cos after this battle wont be an Alien Resurrection
seems kinda played here, an okay punch
At times of hurricanes, Alien don’t run or duck
Cos thats the only time he gets a blow or a suck
pretty good…punch landed here
Should have run for cover and listened to your mother
Your brothers my son cos I fucked her without a rubber
nice multi’s…decent punch
Cant be fussy with choosing his type of persuasion
Was told they were easy, so just looks for asians
nice persona here…punch was okay
Hes the opposite of a mailman with nothing to boast
Talks so much shit wants to delete his own posts
decent persona here…pretty decent punch

Dex ain't what you expect...his winning chance is slim
his skills are so ugly...even aliens takes pictures of him
good opener…punch landed here
despite all the times I hook him...dex still won't be star
I mean really...who still leave spaces between each bar?
good persona…nice punch here
the god made mistakes...now he wishes to start off new
the kid so wack...I even have to wait in line to hate you
punch was okay here though
everyone wants you dead...I can't visit though, quit kid!
noone wants to come to europe...UK may become Madrid
decent punch here…
& I wouldn't come to your funeral...I think it's full of shit
but I did send a telegraph...saying that I approved of it
pretty decent punch here could’ve been harder tho
& I think this is the turning point now...Alien is dominant
I'm not in a crew...at least I'm not in Twisted Government
decent persona…could’ve switched the punch to make it harder
damn newbs these days...they're just wacker than wack
Dex's 'X' marks the spot...and it's how RV 'kissed his ass'
decent punch…wasn’t really hard hitting
dex is that wack...don't even mention twisted Government
of course I'd call them tw...Alien pretty much own the crew
don’t think it really rhymes here
the Alien remains confident...and I'd even feel dex's pain
Dex been downhill...since he removed the 'W' in his name
nice punch here…it landed
really Dex...you wack and I don't know if it was intended
how could you be dexterous? 70% of humans are all right handed!!!
[b]pretty good closer

Overall both drops were good but Alien came harder than Dex here
Punches were a little harder, had a couple of persona’s in there and
The structure + flow was good…no hate to both though

Voted For: The Dex

hahahahaha good battle both of you... i really enjoyed this battle....

alien...

Dex ain't what you expect...his winning chance is slim
his skills are so ugly...even aliens takes pictures of him
^^ lol good opener and decent punch 7/10
despite all the times I hook him...dex still won't be star
I mean really...who still leave spaces between each bar?
^^ good punch, alryyt personal 6/10
the god made mistakes...now he wishes to start off new
the kid so wack...I even have to wait in line to hate you
^^ ooooo good punch i was laffin... 7.5/10
everyone wants you dead...I can't visit though, quit kid!
noone wants to come to europe...UK may become Madrid
^^ not feelin it... 5/10
& I wouldn't come to your funeral...I think it's full of shit
but I did send a telegraph...saying that I approved of it
^^ you fell off on this line... 5/10
& I think this is the turning point now...Alien is dominant
I'm not in a crew...at least I'm not in Twisted Government
^^ any crew is better than none... 4/10
damn newbs these days...they're just wacker than wack
Dex's 'X' marks the spot...and it's how RV 'kissed his ass'
^^ alryyt punch 6/10
dex is that wack...don't even mention twisted Government
of course I'd call them tw...Alien pretty much own the crew
^^ didnt rhyme and u use wack too many times 5/10
the Alien remains confident...and I'd even feel dex's pain
Dex been downhill...since he removed the 'W' in his name
^^ decent personal... 6.5/10
really Dex...you wack and I don't know if it was intended
how could you be dexterous? 70% of humans are all right handed!!!
^^ decent closure and decnt perosnal 6/10

overall i give you... 58/100 i thought your first few lines were decent but then you fell off on the second half of your verse... you had some decent punches and some funny personals, your vocab was aight and your structure was on point... you need to stay on the subject of battling then u will win more aight good verse... stay up!!!

dex....

His verses look like they were written on smack
Aint difficult winning this, he admits hes whack
^^ nice opener and decnt personal... 7.5/10
He couldn’t hit a "hot bar" in Las Vegas nightspots
Im burning the screen, your not even quite hot
nice punch and decent meta 7/10
coming at you with talents of mean proportions
I don’t just own you, this is complete extortion
^^nice punch again... 7/10
Alien in a UFO where he likes to soar
How can he fly wen he cant leave the floor?
^^ haha good personal very humurous... 8/10
Chasing fame but the only way you'll fold paper
Is in the toilet when your doubling up the layers
^^ and good punch... 7/10
We shall see if Alien brought the correct protection
Cos after this battle wont be an Alien Resurrection
^^ another nice personal.. 7/10
At times of hurricanes, Alien don’t run or duck
Cos thats the only time he gets a blow or a suck
^^ alryyt but i thought it was kinda played... 6/10
Should have run for cover and listened to your mother
Your brothers my son cos I fucked her without a rubber
^^ lol funny but played again.. 6/10
Cant be fussy with choosing his type of persuasion
Was told they were easy, so just looks for asians
hahaha... decent personal 8/10
Hes the opposite of a mailman with nothing to boast
Talks so much shit wants to delete his own posts
^ decent personal and good closure 8/10

overall i give you... 69.5/100, i thought your verse was really funny you had more personals and your flow was better... you used better vocab and your structure was good... the only lines i thought were played were the mother line and the one above it. good job though...

imma give this to dex becuz of his personals and better punches... hope that explaines it all pz.

Wow.............nice battle, keep this ish up man.................

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uppin this to the sky peeps.

wanna end this sooners

This was feedback posted for The Dex
 

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Voted For: The Dex

Dex
structure is good.. flow is pretty good.. no multis.. wordplay was alright.. a few of your punches connected.. you had decent personals.. try to avoid links though, they're getting played out..

Alien
structure is good.. flow is pretty good as well.. no multis.. wordplay is pretty good.. you didnt have very many punches.. a lot of your shit was just statements.. attempted personals, but they didnt connect very hard..

Overall
Alien had better wordplay.. both had a good structure.. both had a good flow.. neither had multis.. Dex had more connecting punches.. and better personals.. so basing off of that.. Dex gets my vote..

VOTE - DEX

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Voted For: The Dex

heres what i see....

dex....thought your punches hit harder, and you had better personals, you had both, and thats why you get my vote, simple as that, this was a pretty close battle, you both had good structure, flow was good in both, but you kept a nice consistency of dissin your opponent and it ended up being the better verse...good job

alien....alot of your shit seemed like fillers, had some weak ass stuff that kinda ruined the tone of your verse...although you had some nice, hard punches, like i said, you didn/t keep a consistency of good punches which led to dex getting my vote, but its was a good battle, keep it up the both of you...

v/dex, for harder hitting punches/personals...yep

rtf....with honest, explained votes in any of my battles, thnx