Lil-Youngstah vs H-N-I-C
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-28-05 at 10:08 PM

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H-N-I-C has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-27-05 10:08 PM.

H-N-I-C has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-27-05 10:09 PM.

You a adolescent bitch suckin ya moms tits
Still suck similac out a bottle like it's a dick
Time for u to get ripped, ya lil young whippa snappa
5 and 0 k.o. turn ya lights out like the clappa
Keep ya fuckin mouth shut, Nigga mums the word
Cuz bitches like u...are to be seen not heard
If I see ya name in books it'll be a mystery
Cuz everybody knows only winners write history
U dissin me, Well listen B, what don't kill u makes u stronger
That's why ya headstone says "Couldn't battle Head Nigga no longer"

Lil-Youngstah has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-28-05 01:47 AM.

aight good luck to you mayne, may da best mc win...

I'm Finishin off this Foo... only 2 moves dat's all it take/
like we playin a Chess game it's Check to da "Check-Mate"...

As u Movin ya Pawns, Bishops, Knights and Queen up to da Field to Fight/
Ya Left ya King opened so i'm Comin as da *Lyrical Assasin* To kill ya with da "Mic"...

So it's like u Said i'm Poppin into Battles like a Big Dog/
Ready to bark an Bite i'm Rowdy so Don't run lika scared dog...

I smell ya Easily then a Trash-Can u Hidin Like a pussy behind/
Ya rhymes r as Easy to Smell as Cocaine cause ya Paper is "White"...

So homie Before frontin Grab-ya-self your Paper and Pen/
Start To Comprehend ya Flows Befo u Spit Them Again...

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Voted For: Lil-Youngstah

wow dis was a weak battle....ya'll

opener-lil...hnic ya shit was madd weak fam
structure-a tie
punchlines-lil
creativity-lil
multis-nun from both ya'll
wordplay-nun from both ya'll
personals-nun
finisher-lil
enjoyed-lil...nuff said


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Aight man uppin......................................

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^^^nigga vote on some fukkin battles....damm stop uppin dis shit

aight uppin this thread for battles...oh and marvjay i'll hit up one of ya battles

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don't let this battle get slept on this battle come on vote.....

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Voted For: Lil-Youngstah

lil youngstah won this battle easily. he had overall better verse all around
punches=Ly
flow=LY
personals=LY
vocab=LY
multies=none
HNIC ya verse was too basic homie, u need to make some punches that really diss the other guy. u had ight flow n structure but that wont win battles. its punches n multies so work on those n com eback harder next time..1
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aight still uppin votes on this battle............

uppin votes on da battle don't let this battle get slept on

This was feedback posted for H-N-I-C
 

Voted For: H-N-I-C

Voted for H-N-I-C

Easy vote for me

H came with alot more heavy punches they were striat to the point n strong

Flow went to H I kept wit his verse the wole tyme
WordPlay- both had good wordplay so a tie

H bes line:
Keep ya fuckin mouth shut, Nigga mums the word
Cuz bitches like u...are to be seen not heard
(tight dawg feelin that shyt)

Lil bes line:
I smell ya Easily then a Trash-Can u Hidin Like a pussy behind/
Ya rhymes r as Easy to Smell as Cocaine cause ya Paper is "White"...
(that was ur best n i didnt feel it all all)

Lil ya flow was tipsy, n i wasnt feelin ur punces yano with the whole chess approach nah fam that aint punchin in my mind I didnt see anything that hit H

Breakdown:
Punches- H-N-I-C
Flow- H-N-I-C
multies - neither
strucutre- H-N-I-C
wordplay- H-N-I-C
Personals- neither

clean sweep in dis battle
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Voted For: Lil-Youngstah

PRETTY WEAK ON BOTH SIDES BUT I DIDNT LIKE THE FIRST 5 LINES THAT HNIC SPIT SO THE BATTLE EASILY GOES TO YOUNGHSTA JUST TRY NOT TO RHYME THE SAME WORD TWICE DOG DOG

Voted For: H-N-I-C

I hav eto give this one to HNIC . It was close but HNIC's flows were much better and so was his vocabulary.LIL Y, no hate but you need to work on your flow and your structure

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Voted For: Lil-Youngstah

this was an interesting battle none of the less 2 view:
opener: n/a
vocab: lil-youngstah
multis: both
structure: lil-y
closer: lil-y
lil-y won my vote cuz he hit wit more punches in this battle & came harder in his rhymes; h-n-i-c u need 2 elevate in ur rhymes & work on ur wordplay
make sure 2 return the favor

np homie thanks for da vote.
uppin for votes one more to go.......

Voted For: H-N-I-C

i personally thought hnic took this one no hate to either side but both yall need to elevate. but i thought hnic took this because he kept his shit st8 and kept it rhym'n through out the thing. his punches in someplaces werent as strong but it had a better flow.

metas/lil youngstah
punches//hnic
personals//hnic
opener//lil youngsta
closer//hnic
overall//hnic

vote//hnic

no hate

Voted For: H-N-I-C

u got the vote cuz i got way more punchlines and not as wack but seriously both of u needed ta spice yours up a lil especially lil youngsta

yea it's no prob well uppin for da last vote of this battle......g'luck hnic

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Voted For: H-N-I-C

aight the battle was weak by both sides...no real punches were thrown...

HNIC had better flow...Lil Youngsta had better structure...but i couldnt understand Lil Youngstas lines..i saw some complexity building up...possible hard hitting puncher in the future...
HNIC had better flow enuff to edge the vote..his punches werent devasting but his flow was better, an saw some deceny...

Flow-HNIC
Wordplay-HNIC
PuncheS-HNIC