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.Wicked One. vs Intensify effect
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intensify effect has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-28-05 03:02 PM.
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.Wicked One. has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-28-05 03:05 PM.
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Fast dissensions made after the honest criticism was laid...
Hitting me back is like hitting a bitch with aids... Your crew goes out to fight while you run and hide... Mite as well commit suicide heres a written homicide... I'm ill, there's no doubts, so how can u expect to hurt me?... When it's like aids laid down and had a child with herpes... Let it sink in, I ain't playing with kid, just cry coward... Beat him to death, I'm stern with the words like I was Howard... And I ain't wasting anymore lines, or anymore time... On a kid, thats been playing with it so long, he was born blind... I'm kinda like Vince Carter cause I'm half man half amazin... Please kid u got 32 Losses, got me thinkin that u rap as bad as an raisan... I'm contagious like a case of Sars... I'll start clappin your ass and have you seein stars... Just like Def Jam Vendetta my game is blazin... Yet you still have no idea who you facin... |
i hate unlimited battles so i hope u aint O.D with ya verse dogs 4-real so imma keep mines at a 7 to 8 bars max....
cuz anything ova is to long of a read..... AIGHT LETS DO THIS..... this match'll make wickedone resemble a newpart enflamed.... cuz im'a beat hes ass worse then noticing ya B's are Ds like report card u changed.... *think when moms find out* N i aint need to take notes to prepare for this mess.. cuz im sick wit the flow... its like my lines havin insest... and to confess, i can see u'r stress and ya style im blaming-son... This kid Untouchable? Yea right, and so is Jenna Jameason... ya spit like a pistol jam'in-son, u'll lose even if u mastered this course... cuz u couldnt burn a track... if u set flames to a race-course... so why do this?, like a cripple with a cane u make no sense stupid.... tryin to prefect ya flow in text?, why don't u try reverse'in time?so never heard of music.. *HA* u talk about a W's but flow lacks a WIN-FACT, so i'll rip-facts IN brawl's... so quit rap, cuz my punches push'in u back like straps on bras..... pause..... befor u re-laps in ya tracks... and make ya weak heart collaps.... cuz its like u AIM but shot-shit, and 2 dices aint have no parts in ya CRAP... BITCH!!! *craps dice game * hope u came with heat cuz i aint put my full effort in this battle dog 4-real.... |
Voted For: .Wicked One.
aight this was an aight battle... nothing spectacular but here is my break down: Wicked- ya shit was pretty good, straight opener... structure needs a little work, some of it was stretched... flow wasnt hurt to bad by this, it was aight... punches hit well and personals i thought were pretty dope, especialy your second bar about his crew, i liked that... vocab was actualy pretty good as was creativity and metas... overall not a bad verse... 7/10 IE- ya shit was also aight... just like his your structure needs work... flow was aight but could have been better seeing as how some of ya lines were pretty stretched... punches were good, i really liked the jenna jameson line... personals were hit and miss... vocab was aight as were mettas... overall 6/10 no hate at all to IE you did your thing and i respect that, i was just feeling Wickeds verse a little more... both of you need to up on ya structure and that will even out your flow.. good battle by both of you.... VOTE- WICKEDONE............... |
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both ya'll suck
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Lol.......i went weak ........ayo ......i aint gonna get in this......How bout you shut up and battle me then....then WE'LL SEE WHO SUCKS........
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but aint never had the balls to call me out??? :huh: da talk if tuff but its sad its coming from someone whos a weak pussy like u.... see me when u think u finally ready.... and i said fromt he jump i came weak right after i posted my verse i aint say it after a couple of days later or anything i knew from jump i came weak but still probley good enough to win.... upp'in for more HONEST VOTES.... |
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Voted For: intensify effect
this was a decent battle, but my vote goes to effect for harder hitting punches, both verses flowed fine, but both of you should start dissing your opponent instead of glorifying yourself Let it sink in, I ain't playing with kid, just cry coward... Beat him to death, I'm stern with the words like I was Howard... N i aint need to take notes to prepare for this mess.. cuz im sick wit the flow... its like my lines havin insest... Where do you go with both these lines? but I voted for IE, he edged out this battle and came a bit harder than Wicked 1. Please return the favor plz thank you. http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=174170 |
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Voted For: .Wicked One.
Aiight look.. I dont wanna sound like an asshole, but both of you need to elevate a lot in text battling.. A lot of the wordplay you were both trying to use didnt help any disses at all.. Some of your bars were just useless filler.. WAY too much self glorification.. Intensify you need to seriously work on your structure.. And both of you need to work on multi syllable rhyming.. I'm gonna give this vote to Wicked One mainly because I had less trouble catching his flow.. But seriously man, you need BIG work on punchlines.. And personals.. And basically everything else on text battling.. No hate at all.. It just really wasnt vet material from either.. |
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Voted For: .Wicked One.
Aiight, decent battle from y'all, both came pretty strong Wicked ya flow was right on point, personals n punches connected, lines were stretched here n there an had some needles words that could have improved the structure, but ya came with alot more creativity within your lines Good shit I.E, flow was a little choppy in most places, had some witty stuff, but some of ya rhymes seemed a little forced, like you had ta put themm in there just ta make the personal or punch hit, an that made the effect of ya punch or personal alot less than it could have been, ya feel me? still a decent battle but wicked got my vote Return the fave in any of my battles ya see floatin around Peace |
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Voted For: intensify effect
all beef aside this is an honest vote....ie got this one, i felt ie-good:liked some of the punches ansl liked the few multies that were in there bad:some of the punches were played, also a lot of the lines were stretched, so that also threw off the structure...didnt really like the opener or closer id rate this verse...5.5/10 wicked one-good: to tell the truth, i felt like this was one of your worst battle verses ive seen, you coodve came a lot harder, the only thing i really liked was that your vocab was better than ie's sry mang bad:i felt like your punches were weak and all played, your structure was pretty badd too, you coodve used multies in their and some more werdplay, sry homie, but this verse wood be rated a 3.5/10 in my bookz.. both-work on ya'lls vocab...the things i thoguht needed the most work was structure and openers and closers multies-IE vocab-W1 werdplay-IE punches-IE flow-W1 my vote goes to IE rtf.........link in sig v/intensify effect |
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Voted For: .Wicked One.
intensify effect~ok opener, it could have been worded better,i didnt like the jenna jameson line,it was like you were sayin wicked one was untouchable, thats the way it looks, but i see where you were trying to go here with that concept,some of your lines were stretched as well, but its ok,you're last 2 bars were the best punches you had, i didnt see any real personals here either,this overall was ok form you,i've seen better from you before, but overall not bad..1 wicked one~good opener,this set the tone of the battle nicelyyour vocabulary was overall creative here and structure was good, i liked the line"when its like aids laid down and had a child with herpes".lol, nice wordplay with howard stern name,and nice vince carter line, you had some decent personals, and your closer was good, not that strong,but ok, overall, i think you had the better verse here,it was well put together and the vocab was prominent, good job..1 |
Voted For: intensify effect
Wicked One: Fast dissensions made after the honest criticism was laid... Hitting me back is like hitting a bitch with aids... ^^no 2/10 Your crew goes out to fight while you run and hide... Mite as well commit suicide heres a written homicide... ^^no 2/10 I'm ill, there's no doubts, so how can u expect to hurt me?... When it's like aids laid down and had a child with herpes... ^^lol good 6/10 Let it sink in, I ain't playing with kid, just cry coward... Beat him to death, I'm stern with the words like I was Howard... ^^good meta 6/10 And I ain't wasting anymore lines, or anymore time... On a kid, thats been playing with it so long, he was born blind... ^^lol good 5/10 I'm kinda like Vince Carter cause I'm half man half amazin... Please kid u got 32 Losses, got me thinkin that u rap as bad as an raisan... ^^wtf 2/10 I'm contagious like a case of Sars... I'll start clappin your ass and have you seein stars... ^^no 1/10 Just like Def Jam Vendetta my game is blazin... Yet you still have no idea who you facin... ^^no 2/10 overall: 26/80 (33%) Intensify Effect: this match'll make wickedone resemble a newpart enflamed.... cuz im'a beat hes ass worse then noticing ya B's are Ds like report card u changed.... ^^stretched as fuck and forced and wack 1/10 N i aint need to take notes to prepare for this mess.. cuz im sick wit the flow... its like my lines havin insest... ^^no 2/10 and to confess, i can see u'r stress and ya style im blaming-son... This kid Untouchable? Yea right, and so is Jenna Jameason... ^^dope shit 8/10 ya spit like a pistol jam'in-son, u'll lose even if u mastered this course... cuz u couldnt burn a track... if u set flames to a race-course... ^^no 3/10 so why do this?, like a cripple with a cane u make no sense stupid.... tryin to prefect ya flow in text?, why don't u try reverse'in time?so never heard of music.. ^^decent but stretched again 4/10 u talk about a W's but flow lacks a WIN-FACT, so i'll rip-facts IN brawl's... so quit rap, cuz my punches push'in u back like straps on bras..... ^^decent but played concept 4/10 pause..... befor u re-laps in ya tracks... and make ya weak heart collaps.... cuz its like u AIM but shot-shit, and 2 dices aint have no parts in ya CRAP... BITCH!!! ^^ehh OK 5/10 Overall: 27/70 (39%) You both came extremely wack..But I.E actually had 1 good punch while Wicked had only a decent one Vote: Intensify Effect Return the favor on a battle in my sig please |
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Voted For: .Wicked One.
wow...........old shit here Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Wicked One:
Fast dissensions made after the honest criticism was laid... Hitting me back is like hitting a bitch with aids... ^^no 2/10 Your crew goes out to fight while you run and hide... Mite as well commit suicide heres a written homicide... ^^no 2/10 I'm ill, there's no doubts, so how can u expect to hurt me?... When it's like aids laid down and had a child with herpes... ^^lol good 6/10 Let it sink in, I ain't playing with kid, just cry coward... Beat him to death, I'm stern with the words like I was Howard... ^^good meta 6/10 And I ain't wasting anymore lines, or anymore time... On a kid, thats been playing with it so long, he was born blind... ^^lol good 5/10 I'm kinda like Vince Carter cause I'm half man half amazin... Please kid u got 32 Losses, got me thinkin that u rap as bad as an raisan... ^^wtf 2/10 I'm contagious like a case of Sars... I'll start clappin your ass and have you seein stars... ^^no 1/10 Just like Def Jam Vendetta my game is blazin... Yet you still have no idea who you facin... ^^no 2/10 overall: 26/80 (33%) Intensify Effect: this match'll make wickedone resemble a newpart enflamed.... cuz im'a beat hes ass worse then noticing ya B's are Ds like report card u changed.... ^^stretched as fuck and forced and wack 1/10 N i aint need to take notes to prepare for this mess.. cuz im sick wit the flow... its like my lines havin insest... ^^no 2/10 and to confess, i can see u'r stress and ya style im blaming-son... This kid Untouchable? Yea right, and so is Jenna Jameason... ^^dope shit 8/10 ya spit like a pistol jam'in-son, u'll lose even if u mastered this course... cuz u couldnt burn a track... if u set flames to a race-course... ^^no 3/10 so why do this?, like a cripple with a cane u make no sense stupid.... tryin to prefect ya flow in text?, why don't u try reverse'in time?so never heard of music.. ^^decent but stretched again 4/10 u talk about a W's but flow lacks a WIN-FACT, so i'll rip-facts IN brawl's... so quit rap, cuz my punches push'in u back like straps on bras..... ^^decent but played concept 4/10 pause..... befor u re-laps in ya tracks... and make ya weak heart collaps.... cuz its like u AIM but shot-shit, and 2 dices aint have no parts in ya CRAP... BITCH!!! ^^ehh OK 5/10 Overall: 27/70 (39%) You both came extremely wack..But I.E actually had 1 good punch while Wicked had only a decent one Vote: Intensify Effect Return the favor on a battle in my sig please |
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we need a last vote for this shit to end come on ya dont sleep just one more vote.................
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this probley the oldest battle that has ever been upp'in...............
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