Armada Da 187 vs Shorty#1
 

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Shorty#1 has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-28-05 02:14 PM.

armada you were scared to battle me/
and now you called me out like you got beef/
well you are one of those people that dont know shit/
your baltimore ass has no chance with someone from the 916/
you are like a chihuahua and im a pitbull, bitch you'll get bit/
so log off and just quit/
armada da 187 i havent seen you win a battle/
you name yourself the army but not even your name can help you beat me, so just calm down and settle

Armada Da 187 has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-29-05 12:42 AM.

Im bust this niggas ead for think he is a gangsta!
!
Yo spit another verse n take ya time
cuz itll take 2 verses of yours to make one of mine
Im like a hornest Nest, Mess wit it n get stung
be like alien n come in ya lung
whatch a baby bust out the center of ya chest
thas what u get when messin wit the boats
Armada (A-R-M-A-D-A) fo sho
Shorty (H-O-M-O) HOMO!!
you cant compare to Armadas strait up rhyme flow
you beatin me is like "The Dex" banging J-LO
ITS NOT GONNA Happen, Armadas YA captain
so shut up in salute me, shorty ya retarded
shoulda stopped battlin me once u fuckin started
Ima snap ya head, put ya teeth on the curb
leave ya teeth flying from inner city to the suburbans
Shorty open ya mouth........ No its not a cock
gonna be the taste of cold steel from my glock
so much lead in you the Police solve it wit no hassel
"Yo diss fool musta challenged Armada to a rap battle"

errr Hornets****** fuckin typos errrr~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Voted For: Armada Da 187

um it was kinda ez to see who won dis
structure=niether
no rhyme schemes at all it was all basic
um punches=armada
personals=shorty,cuz army had none
well good job to both keep practicin'
mah vote=armada

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UP this shyt niggas vote on this shy6t i want it closed fast so i can battle another i wiped this fool off the RV rosters!!

This was feedback posted for Armada Da 187
 

You both suck.
Die.
Slow.
Or run with scissor's.

hahaha nice but herb dont try to get recognized by throwin shit at me son cuz u dead wrong ill leavin u hangin from the tree in ur backyard fool!

Voted For: Armada Da 187

this was a weak battle...i had to give it to Armada tho b-cuz well....he had better consistency and better structure...the couple lines short had were basic punches and werent consistent and became stretched towards the end

Voted For: Armada Da 187

Shorty#1- Alright, basic punches, meaning they're weak. Flow was kinda chopped up, elevate on that. Add some multi'z in your verses. Structure was wack. Wordplays was weak "pitbull" line was weak fam.




Armada-Armada (A-R-M-A-D-A) fo sho
Shorty (H-O-M-O) HOMO!!
^^ that aint even necessary, we can read...

Nice puncehs, elevate though. Basic. Nice flow. Wordplays was good still elevate on that. Add multi'z in your verse. Put personals in there too




overall=Wack battle, both heads need some serious elevation. Shorty, your punches was basic and weak, elevate. Flow was fucked. Structure was wack. Wordplays was weak. Armada, ok punches was basic, needs elevation. The punches was effective. Wordplays was good, still need elevation. Add personals and some multi'z. I gots to give this battle to armada basically because he had harder puncehs and flow. Elevate though. Shorty elevate on puncehs you lost this battle cause your punches was played and weak. wun

Voted For: Armada Da 187

you win for being better and having a longer diss nice battle, you both aren't good but wt/v thats ok, keep battling you'll elevate

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Voted For: Armada Da 187

aramada won. You were both terribly horrible but this bar...

Ima snap ya head, put ya teeth on the curb
leave ya teeth flying from inner city to the suburbans

Was good. Well, it wasnt actually good, but I know what you were sayign. Considering it was the only bar with any potential you get the win. Both seriously need to look at more battles and read tutorials. Because I noticed a lot of not-punching and not-rhyming that has to dissapeer......now. But

v-armada