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Premanition vs d.j em sce
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1-2 No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 01-31-05 at 02:34 PM Must drop verse in 5760 minutes after check in. Dq'ed for PMing for votes Quote:
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Premanition has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-28-05 04:32 PM.
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d.j em sce has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-30-05 03:26 AM.
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sorry it is taking so long but i jst now finished my shit with konflictz....so iwill have this verse up by monday
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im finished ..i will post my verse in like 2 hours...becuase i got to wait till i have for it to upload my song to soundclick
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http://www.soundclick.com/djemsce
the verse is called preme battle.......... i dont have an intro becuase this is a battle about who is the best lyricist not a battle about who can talk shit about the person b4 and after you spit......lol |
o.k nice battle.....................
uppin pz |
Voted For: Premanition
VOte: prem DJ em scee: your shit sounds dope overall man...im likin ur voice and mic prescence.,..quality was aiight - cud've been better........u had punches but none of them really hit hard or as hard as prems did...u had some coo vocab aswell :thumbup: overall - 7.5/10 Prem: beat was raw, entire track was raw n underground feelin...it was all hard and was completely battle focused...ur mic prescence aint as gd as emscee but u came through..some nice punches on dis dat really hit hard...some gd lyrics aswell :thumbup: overall - 8/10 close battle not much seperated you in truth, but prem came through...Peace...no h8...DJ im lookin fwd 2 our collab if u still wanna do it sometime.. ~1~ |
Voted For: Premanition
aight this battle was weak............basically it came down to punches because i thought both yalls flow was a little of but basically bewtween the shortness and echo of dj and the accent of prems it was a tough decision, but ima give it to prem cause i thought he had like one or two lines that stood out more, no hate to both but this battle was weak v/ prem for a lil betta verse |
Voted For: d.j em sce
Dj- i like that make us wait before you spit...real audible verse... some of your words kinda fight for presence in a verse-- its hard to explain-- but work on making your bars more fluid... punches were pretty good, verse was a little short, but not bad... could have faded it out at the end or something... not bad-- Prem- I think you came on real solid- you really improved in the delivery department-- presence could still use building- your lines were pretty good- only thing is you really had to listen to your verse cuz of your pronounciation of certain words.... carryin on at the end...lol ive done it, but its reccommended u dont...lol not a bad joint either... this is a hard battle to vote on. yo.. i just cant do it... this shit was dope... I could give it prem for makin it more of a complete track... or dj for really just buildin a little drama-- hittin him hard and then peace.... arright.. i decided Ive listened to each track like 6 times... and Im givin it to Dj-- his verse is just alot easier to hear, and break down- a little too much self glorification- but prems jumped off real hard and kinda got stagnant... keep doin ur thang both of you-- hot shit here....vote dj emscee |
Battle Rules:
1-2 No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 01-31-05 at 02:34 PM Must drop verse in 5760 minutes after check in. |
Voted For: d.j em sce
yo i give it to dj cuz he had push but that was not the right beat to pic for a battle prem your shit sound like a song not a battle the first part i like then ur vose fuck up Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Premanition
good battle props... premanition-i liked dj em sces beat more but this was good too, your flow was good and you stayed on track good throughout the whole thing which i liked and you had harder punches with it...dope piece and i thought you had better quality dj em sce- the beat was doper then prems imo, the flow was good as well both did good here but the quality was less in my opinion...that echo shit was bad...no hate but it just fucks up the song theres no need for it you had good punches too but it messed up the quality good battle no hate good luck to both but in the end prem gets my vote for better quality and punches... peace |
Voted For: Premanition
d.j em sce: I was feeling your beat somewhat, lyrics were straight. Flaw here was your flow. Through most of it you were on point, but at times your words came out a little rushed, and I could hear you used another voice track to start the next line before you finished the one you were on. Premanition: I was feeling your shit the whole way through, good lyrical content overall. Your flow was on point, didn't notice it slipping anywhere, but once or twice your voice traveled off just a little bit like you were running out of breath. Other than that it was good. That's all, you both know I know what I'm talking about, so I don't need to explain my vote anymore... |
Voted For: Premanition
Aiight Prem got this. Both verses were nice, but emsce you went a bit overboard with the echo's.... Good Vocab, nice diis and nice beat, all make a great verse. Nice drop from both y'all, but prem took it. 1 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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