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Diss To The Bitch Acuity!!!!!!!!! Peep
Verse 1:
M.A.F.I.A My first line on this thread is the best that's been written Ya bullshittin' with dry mouths, please stop spitting And I ain't hatin, I just know I'm nice on the mic device Think about being better than me? Think twice And if you come up with the same answer, step into my cipher And I'll ignite that ass up without the need of a lighter Cause my words go up to degrees not yet attained To incinerate the membrane and cripple further the lame I'm just saying, I got girls on they knees without praying Parlaying, don't get dick hurt, y'all, I'm just playing Because I'm the guy niggas hate, and they girls adore You can't step to me like Chicken George Get it on the floor like DMX, who's next to try and test I'm fabulous at this, just a word 2 u, save you breath... Acuity u done it, u done touched a nerve/ Im a lyrical monster so ur ass is about ta get served/ Not ready for battle, ur constantly laying down ur guard/ Well now im here bout to send u up to god/ Verse 2: Blac-Out This diss is "aimin" just for Acuity, "direct hit" check da accuracy// and i kno this niggas mad to see, im on da crew, now im blastin heat// he recorded a little audio diss, and nobody told us// had it on his sig, playin hard, actin coo like nobody noticed// buh naw, im sumptin different, if theirs beef, then ima chew it// got da heat, and ima use it, murk this nigga, fuck da music// this nigga betta cool it, betta not fuck wit da kid// got slugs to fuck up his wig, quit rappin, touch up da sigs// this nigga in our forums like he a part of the crew// ill give him a part of the tool in his eyes so its harder to view// ima slaughter this dude, and his crew if they try to step again// this time we bringin them weapons in, dont fuck wit us i recommend// i stay wit reckless men, yall kno that dats the mafia// us niggas, we too hard for ya, its simple to departure ya// i'll leave a part of ya chest open and wide// have da blade, poking inside, now i kno ur hoping to die// and if you open to lie, go head and say dat you dope// ill insert da blade to throat, till ya choke, and say it was a joke// bitch!! now you like to diss, how you liking this// you said " no beef" buh, try to shake hands then ima slice ya wrist// who you kno is as nice as this? not you, or no1 in ya crew// talk lies like "he's not one hell of a dude'' then ima put da gun to ya crew// so next time i see a diss in a forum and its by Acuity// it betta not be about the mafia, and definitely not attacking me// YEA BITCH fuck you and keep our names out ya mouth!! THE Mafia BItch..............Get It Right And Keep It Right Nigga!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! * Oh yea to my nigga Judicial.....wen im aimin shit at ya crew, i aint talkin bout you cuz, i got luv 4 you but to everyone else: FUck YAll!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Mafia-urs was garbage, no hate but that was weak, didnt really hit hard Blac Out-damn i really liked ur part u might have pulled me out of Text Retirement, wanna collab, dat shit was tight mayn Mafia-4/10 Blac Out-8/10 Whole Collab-6/10 |
Ite im coo wit da neg/pos feedback. Thanks for da Honest feedback though. Yea son its wateva im down wit almost any collab-os just holla at me about that. BUt to everyone else
Uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Honest Feedback |
C'Mon People Can We Get Sum Feedback???
Uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Wow. Is this the talent here on RV?
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thanks a million blacout.........
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http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1926463
my bad, heres da link............ |
UPPIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! can we get sum feedback
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^^^ can u do me a favor and dont just write stuff like im not hate'in blah blah blah....
that link wont count... un-less u give a proper feed back... u must give pros and cons the good and bad things about it... unless u give deep detail which u aint do.... and u aint even say what part was bad or noting... exsample... ya flow was good i like how u rhymed blah blah with blah blah but u need help with creativeness i mean insted of thinking basic think out the box u know, up ya vocab that also help creativeness... ^^^ ECT.... thats how u give a proper feed back not what u drop... so if u can go back and change it, it would help my out alot thanks.... but as for now the 24 hour thing stays in effect.... |
first verse whoever it is, iskinda lame...truthfully not just hatin
second verse i took seriously cos it had sum mean multis, no personals tho...sum decent hittin punches aswell...whoever that is ima respond to him, fuck the first verse dis is gd 'all, what RV about, be ready for ma respnse will drop it on moday cos im busy now.... overall diss...verse 1-2/10, verse 2 - 8.5/10-------overall - 6/10 Peace :thumbup: oh......... :shoot:FUCK LYRICAL CATACLISM and all the BITCHES in it:shoot: lol |
^^^ plez dont drop this link as one of ya feed back u responded to when u open a new tread or respond to some noobs....
blacout is decent.... |
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weerd he got skills.........wonders y he in a non repsected punk crew....even his boy is in The Jury (jusicial) cough cough...can u c what im gettin @..u betta den all of dem sun... oh, im still gon diss you tho, lol |
^^^ u should be in CODE STEEL WORD......
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lol I feel yall..........buh um thanks for da feedback, and Acuity: i guess we just gonna go at it then............
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=174357 heres da link lol
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thats prefect fam thanks a million.....
upp'in this for blcout..... |
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