.Epic. vs Kesse
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-30-05 at 01:00 AM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

.Epic. has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-29-05 03:02 PM.

Kesse has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-29-05 03:06 PM.

no idea what you got yourself into
gunna take you out as my Rapverse debut
but don't worry, not just a loss, but a new education
and you might wanna look for a new god for salvation
as your reading these lines i pray your not epileptic
cause my shits even got the votes of all the skeptics
you spit like a little boy singing in choir
my words will hit so hard it'll be time to retire
your a disgrace to this site, a homosexual fright
i just lit the fuse and your about to ignite
just cause i'm, you think you've already won
but the only thing your getting is the lead from my gun

thanks yo, your was pretty dope too, i liked the shoe line

This was feedback posted for .Epic.
 

sup Epic, thats a heavy verse. Totally took this battle. No hate Kesse, but Epic above your level.

actually, about the feet line, "the only way i'll smell defeat if both my shoes come off"???

this sounds like your saying, if i keep my shoes on, i'll win no problem, cause then i wont smell defeat

uppppppin, uppppppin, up .... UPPPPP, cmon peeps, uppppit

cmaaaan, UPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPin, upppin peeps

uppin for some votes, cmon ebody, upppin, dont be sleepin

neeed some upppin, cman, spread the loving, uppppin this shit

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Voted For: .Epic.

Kesse-Self glorification was in your verse, made it not readable. Punches was ok..weak though.elevate......FLow was ok nice.........Use personals, and multi'z......All you had in this verse was flow and punches.....wordplay was good the "god salvation" line was creative.....good punch, elevate though.......



Epic-Nice verse, nothing to say here. Flow was nice..good punches much very effective.....Wordplays was creative and decent....add multi'z.......Put personals in your verse.......Flow and punches came through in this battle nice job.




overall=Hands down to epic, he had some good flow with some creative decent wordplays. Punches were very much effective.....Kesse, you had punches but the "self glorification" part just weakened your verse...dont talk about your self aim at your opponent........ok punches, need elevation though.....wordplay needs help too. I vote for epic cause of harder punches and decent wordplays.....peace

Voted For: Kesse

Kesse - You came allright on this battle. I can tell that it is your first. For your first drop you had some pretty damn good vocab, you had some decent structure and your punches gave me some laughter. My favourtie one was the epileptic line. Good drop. 7/10

.Epic. - You came allright. You have some streched lines through-out the verse....well most of them. The flow wasn't near as good as Kesse's verse. You had some good punches in there, but none that really connected to hard. I didn't really get your closer, it was kinda stupid to tell you the truth. But you know what they say....keep on elevating. 6/10

Structure - Kesse
Punches - Kesse
Personals - .Epic.
Flow - Kesse
Vocab - Kesse

Pretty one sided battle. But good job I guess.

Vote: Kesse

Voted For: Kesse

OK kesse u got good punch lines but u need to sort out the lay out of your verse coz its abit hard to under stand and its messy.

.epic. was alright but kesse had better lyrics and punch lines, but both werew pritty good

good luck for ya next battles.

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Voted For: .Epic.

epic gets my vote for creativity and punches he just was way more creative and he had better punches than kesse he had a better flow his shit sounded better than kesses did he also had a way better vocab and multi's his personals were also better and he also had a nice structure kesse had a nice structure but with no punches or multi's or metas or personals that were effective vocab was pretty simple but i dont even judge on vocab cause its a bullshit catagory my vote goes on punches and effectiveness of the verse and i feel like epic did more damage retrun the favhttp://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=175856

oh man khaos, your a bitch, this is such a hate vote, just cause i voted for golden shellz....whatever thou..........uppppin

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Voted For: .Epic.

the only thing kesse did better in this battle was vocab

epic took everything else, no hate but its true
epic had an alright flow but it fell off at times but then came right back
only a few lines were stretched, decent closer, decent punches, decent wordplay

kesse bad structure not a good flow terrible closer, i've seen better from you

rtf.....link in sig hit up either one or both

v/.epic.

not hatin at all, first drop, im not really proud of it....wird....uppppin

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This was feedback posted for .Epic.
 

chicking the poll on my man..........................................

Voted For: .Epic.

haha ur shit makes me laugh i was feelin it major man nice word play lol kesse wasnt even on his level . good wordplay on both sides but it was really onesided

kesse- u rhymed ight but u were jus sorta blabb'n while epic kept his flow up

personals:ep
wordplay:ep
structure:kesse
appeal:ep
punches:ep
funny factor:ep

vote //Epic

nice battle no hate

~1~

This was feedback posted for .Epic.
 

checkin dem pollz..hmm...

Voted For: .Epic.

yo epic murdered this kid
nice opener nice vocab flow and structre were cool metaphores were good punches hit hard all around this verse gets a 7.5/10
best line- I Got This Kid's Shaking Like Bill Cosby Dancing A Jello Commercial
He Aint Even Out Of His Shell Yet, So How I'm Going To Battle This Turtle

kesse ure verse was lil chppy no good punches vocab was ight up it not a very good opener and not a very good closer all aroung ure verse gets 3/10
dont worry every one loses there first battle