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headgames 01-29-05 07:46 PM

hotshh! vs headgames
 
Battle Rules:

8 Lines like you wanted
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
3-0 = k.o.
If you actually accept THANK YOU... no one else is fucking battling me :(



Minimum posts to vote: 1000

Check in by: 02-01-05 at 07:46 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Win by 3-0 KO

System 01-30-05 12:07 PM

hotshh! has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-30-05 12:07 PM.

N.Tavarez 01-30-05 12:22 PM

OK,
Look, I dont need to make dick jokes on ya name to Dead Lames
But ill kick ya brain thru a field goal post....and play Headgames!
Nobody would want to Son you... your disowned, now Disappear
Keep dropping that trash and you gonna be 'Killing ya own Career'
Dont call me out cuz in the Tourney I did good and U watched me
You on my Dick... Head games?... I'm renaming You 'Cock Tease'
If I chopped and threw your dome...you'll get ahead of me Crazy
Da Council should Drop em faster than Mothers with Heavy Babies
.................................................. ......................and Im out




no crew votes

N.Tavarez 01-30-05 12:23 PM

OK,
Look, I dont need to make dick jokes on ya name to Dead Lames
But ill kick ya brain thru a field goal post....and play Headgames!
Nobody would want to Son you... your disowned, now Disappear
Keep dropping that trash and you gonna be 'Killing ya own Career'
Dont call me out cuz in the Tourney I did good and U watched me
You on my Dick... Head games?... I'm renaming You 'Cock Tease'
If I chopped and threw your dome...you'll get ahead of me Crazy
Da Council should Drop em faster than Mothers with Heavy Babies
.................................................. ......................and Im out

System 01-30-05 02:01 PM

headgames has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-30-05 02:01 PM.

headgames 01-30-05 02:36 PM

Just take off like "race cars," this kid aint pure
Hot shit? so this faggot really does "burn rubber"
Like tight clits with big dicks, kid, just fucking "split"
And when talking bout skills, hotshh! aint got "it"
And ya rhymes suck, your shit man, shouldn't be proud
I provide chears... hot"shh" just silences the crowd
Rob banks, but "shooting blanks," likes when mens backs bend
And your dick is just like abandoned fishing ships, no "sea-men"

1st bar: Rubber = condom... you should get it now...
If you don't get a line in our verses, don't be shy to pm me or hotshh! for a full explanation of our verses, other wise don't vote... thank you

headgames 01-30-05 02:36 PM

Just take off like "race cars," this kid aint pure
Hot shit? so this faggot really does "burn rubber"
Like tight clits with big dicks, kid, just fucking "split"
And when talking bout skills, hotshh! aint got "it"
And ya rhymes suck, your shit man, shouldn't be proud
I provide chears... hot"shh" just silences the crowd
Rob banks, but "shooting blanks," likes when mens backs bend
And your dick is just like abandoned fishing ships, no "sea-men"


1st bar: Rubber = condom... you should get it now...
If you don't get a line in our verses, don't be shy to pm me or hotshh! for a full explanation of our verses, other wise don't vote... thank you

headgames 01-30-05 02:37 PM

^^ umm that was fucking wierd but wt/v, anyways nice drop hot...

....Gone.... 01-30-05 02:47 PM

This was feedback posted for headgames
 
Hotshh~!-Nice shit fam, good punches. Wordplays was good. Best line from you was-

Look, I dont need to make dick jokes on ya name to Dead Lames
But ill kick ya brain thru a field goal post....and play Headgames

^^ nice punch with a wordplay's




HeadGames- Alright nice shit. Good with them multi'z. Punches was nice and effective, wordplays was good too. Best line from your verse-

Rob banks, but "shooting blanks," likes when mens backs bend
And your dick is just like abandoned fishing ships, no "sea-men"

^^ nice punch.





Overall=Close fucking battle fo sho. Hotshh had some good punches, flow was nice. Wordplays was officially decent. The only thing that stood out in your verse was punches and wordplays. nice fam. Headgames you had some good punches much very effective, flow was nice with them multi'z, Wordplay's was decent also. My vote have to go to Headgames, he had some good punches with them multi'z and wordplay's. Hotshh, no hate fam, your punches was decent and nice fam. flow was good. wordplays was decent. I just felted HeadGames punches hit a little harder.


ALTHOUGH I CANT VOTE, I'MA HAVE TO PUT THIS A FEEDBACK

headgames 01-30-05 02:53 PM

*slaps himself in the face for making 1000 posts minumum*

N.Tavarez 01-30-05 02:55 PM

well good thing thats just feedback...no, good shit headgames..
and miss? i like the multis too so im saving em for the multi league...
didnt really care bout this...did it for headgames..just straight personals on this one

Karmabarz 01-30-05 02:58 PM

This was feedback posted for hotshh!
 
I can't vote..but hotshh! took this easy.
Headgames enough with the gay punches, they ain't effective.
hotssh! that was nice, but you fell off on the last bar. But still, was enough to beat HG.

headgames 01-30-05 07:05 PM

^^^^that's why I made it 1000 minumum posts lol :thumbup: and ya thnx again hot, coo drop

headgames 01-31-05 03:32 PM

hotshh! can you honestly say that you actually tried in this battle? Or did you purposly come weak... be honest

N.Tavarez 01-31-05 07:21 PM

look honestly....i never duck....plus i remember you...so i dropped something for this...not my best..but pretty good....good drop you too...i would only say to drop the "'s (i did that too) ...and even ya lines out..and you good! :thumbup:

headgames 01-31-05 09:16 PM

good, no cuz I was just checking, I didnt want you to go super easy on me... so I was just checking... good drop though... hopefully we get votes soon...

headgames 02-01-05 03:46 PM

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headgames 02-01-05 08:16 PM

........................ I got a plan to make peeps stop sleeping on this battle ;)

Kyleon 02-01-05 08:37 PM

This was feedback posted for headgames
 
I dont have 100 post fam but this is my breakdown..

Hotshh! had good structure and flow was at his tip top point..Clean opener..Vocab was used well in his drop..Punches came pretty hard and personals were decent as well..Multis lack a little bit in his verse though..Something i expected him to be well at...Metas came strong his drop..overall good job.

Headgames...You had good structure also..Punches came OK..hit pretty decent not bad..Vocab wasnt lackin in ya verse like his..so yall are pretty close so far..Flow came solid and could understand everything you wre tryin to spit...Metas were aight in ya verse dis time..Multis were Good...personals were used not as much as i thought they would...overall Pretty Decent drop..coulda done betta

if i could v/Hotshh!...im tellin da truth fam..headgames coulda won but he didnt drop alot of personals..and his opener was weak...just what im thinking hommie..no hate..~1~

headgames 02-02-05 03:02 PM

.......... hotshh! wanna pm strobe to close this battle, and we can reopen another one, and drop the same verses but this time... i'll make it 600 posts to vote........

N.Tavarez 02-02-05 06:53 PM

guess so...............this is why i dont text anymore....actually this is my 1st text battle in 4 months

50Cal. 02-02-05 08:41 PM

This was feedback posted for hotshh!
 
looking hotshh! owned him but headgames will scream hate vote cuz hes a fag

N.Tavarez 02-03-05 07:58 PM

well shit, this is looking like a pointless waste of time now

headgames 02-03-05 08:38 PM

........ ok C.A.L.I lmao.... damn I really gotta herb that guy.... hotshh! be sure to vote on me and C.A.L.I's battle wehn it's done ;) fucking hating fag

Master Minded 02-03-05 09:31 PM

This was feedback posted for headgames
 
Yo hotshh!, headgames here, listen man, we gotta pm strobe, i'll pm him, ask if he can get into this batle and change the post count, otherwise man, we might have to get it closed and then re-open set a lower post count and then re-drop our SAME verse... peep my. battle vs. empire a.k.a C.A.L.I aight coo i'll hit up strobe tomorow peace

N.Tavarez 02-04-05 06:53 PM

do that.............................................. ...

50Cal. 02-04-05 07:16 PM

That Is Illegal To Tell People To Vote On Your Battle I Know Hotshh! Aint No Cheater But Its Still Illegal Dont Do That Again Fagboy

New Meth0d 02-04-05 07:17 PM

This was feedback posted for headgames
 
.............peepin polls.................................

Epical 02-04-05 07:56 PM

Voted For: hotshh!


HeadGames
Kid What Happen I Saw You Do Way Better Before??? Anyway You Had Some Decent Punches In This Verse, Vocabulary Was Mostly Basic But Was Cool, Structure Was Decent, Need To Add Some Personals Into Here More Then What You Have, Also Multi's Would Of Helped You Out On This Verse, But You Didn't Have To Many, Meta's Would Of Made This Verse Better, But Your Body Of The Verse Was Decent Wasn't Feeling The Opener, But CLoser Was Good, I Liked The Last Line, Lol! Anyway OverAll........8.5/10

Hotshh!
By Far Your Verse Was Decent, I Mean Punches Was In Order, Came Out With A Few Personals But Must I Remind You That Some Are Played, Structure Was As Well As Good, Opener And Closer Was Neat, Enjoyed Reading This, The body Of Your Verse Was Also Decentm Vocabulary, Nice Shit Coz,
Third And Fourth Line Was Decent, Over All...8.8/10

Both Of You Came Hard, And Had Some Decent Punches But Hotshh! Came Harder By Two Points Over His Vocabulary And Punches, Personals Went To Both Of You, Coz It Was A Tie, Along With The Structure, Bot Of You Are Dope.....

Vote=Hotshh!

M-Eazy 02-04-05 08:57 PM

Voted For: hotshh!

hotshh! u still got it fam. u took this one with harder punches, and merked him in personals. structure was better too.
headgames-i think u came too soft for me to give u my vote..keep elevating tho...i think u got skillz, but i think ur punches were a bit sry, and ur personals werent interesting at all...but u came wit it in some lines...
overall- i think hotshh took this one, he had a better all around verse, and was more interesting
opener-hot
mettas-head
punches-hot
personals-hot
multies-hot
structure-hot
closer-head
v/hotshh!

plz return tha favor xplained, cause i took tha time out to vote on this...battle link is in sig..pick one, try to pick a crew battle....

DoContinue 02-04-05 09:15 PM

This was feedback posted for hotshh!
 
not nearly enuff posts to vote but this was a hot battle. hot came hard on just about every line.. i was impressed. except 4 the last line, that was kinda weird... best lines were "killin ya own career" and the cock tease... both classic... very nice

HG- i liked this spit. I'm glad you took the time to explain the 1st punch. usually i hate explanations, but that made the punch make so much more sense. i say bravo on that wordplay and such...to me, the last line was just really played cuz i heard that joke a million times... were you talkin about the matrix tho (when men;s backs bend)? my extra special favorite line was : I provide cheers... hot "shh" just silences the croud" that line was great... mucho aplauso...
good job both of you

N.Tavarez 02-05-05 02:43 PM

well good looking on the feedback and votes, uppin again

Sik Wit It 02-05-05 03:44 PM

Voted For: hotshh!

Look, I dont need to make dick jokes on ya name to Dead Lames
But ill kick ya brain thru a field goal post....and play Headgames!
nice opener, punch line was hard & connected
Nobody would want to Son you... your disowned, now Disappear
Keep dropping that trash and you gonna be 'Killing ya own Career'
…decent punch here, wasn’t as hard though
Dont call me out cuz in the Tourney I did good and U watched me
You on my Dick... Head games?... I'm renaming You 'Cock Tease'
pretty decent, nutting much here though
If I chopped and threw your dome...you'll get ahead of me Crazy
Da Council should Drop em faster than Mothers with Heavy Babies
pretty decent closer, punch landed

Overall you had a decent drop, punches were hard (well some of them)
And they landed, the structure was in place and the flow to it was good
Overall you had a decent drop………………………………………⠀¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦

Just take off like "race cars," this kid aint pure
Hot shit? so this faggot really does "burn rubber"
[b]hardly rhymed here, weak punch to it

Like tight clits with big dicks, kid, just fucking "split"
And when talking bout skills, hotshh! aint got "it"
decent I guess, punch wasn’t hard enuff though
And ya rhymes suck, your shit man, shouldn't be proud
I provide chears... hot"shh" just silences the crowd
okay…punch was weak here…
Rob banks, but "shooting blanks," likes when mens backs bend
And your dick is just like abandoned fishing ships, no "sea-men"
decent punch, prolly ur best…

Overall you had a decent drop, some of them punches were weak and
Hardly made any connects, flow was good and the structure to it was
Pretty decent…overall you could’ve came way harder……………………………

N.Tavarez 02-06-05 02:06 PM

good looking on those votes...maybe we can finish this battle today?

headgames 02-06-05 08:35 PM

Word it's done 3-0 = k.o. nice one Hot... still can't believe I lost to C.A.L.I though... shoulda seen that bull shit, I won that hands down


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