Kesse vs Crisis
 

Battle Rules:
10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-31-05 at 01:09 AM

Must drop verse in 1600 minutes after check in.

Kesse has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-29-05 10:30 PM.

you challenging me, now there's a crisis to behold
i'll take you to school, no doubt, just as king mitas made gold
just some wannabe punk looking for some success to aquire
but you'd have more luck trying to turn water to fire
and whats with the name, you in some kind of struggle
or maybe its because you got no balls to juggle
whatever it is, your not up to my level
i suggest looking somewhere else, maybe make a deal with the devil
'cause you got nothing to work with, your whack, a joke
you better check your chest, because i smell gun smoke

there, not quite midnight, my clock is messed, but go nuts, peace

i haven't bin on dis site in a minute
so i dont know how ya'll do things
i'll post my monday midnite

kesse u go first. imma go after u.
good luck

aight man, but just to let you know, gotta be by tonight midnight (sunday), or 1:00 monday, i guess, just dont miss it

i already did go man, you gotta click "accept" and then post your verse

Crisis has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-30-05 02:06 PM.

Kesse lyrics is messe cuz he takes da pill wit da E
Rappin aint for feeble minds, my verse is lyrical light he will soon see
when i'm done wit dis nigga, u'll see him on Bio, tellin his story
He's a queer from under his boyfriends dick, not purgatory
I'm verbally sharper den glass wit slick words, call me fast
i'll leave K not O K, with other dead bodies like a tsunami passed
Equiped like Scarface, i'll call da ambulance ahead, then enter ya door
but it wont matter cuz ur soul will be out fore ya body hits da floor.
i had dis battle from da beginning da logical choice would have bin to forfeit
its like buying a hamster and naming it Virginity, when u know u already lost it

Voted For: Crisis

o shit yo dis was one-sided yo....
neva underestimate a newbie people

punches- lol.....crisis had the punches flowin although they weren't that great!

personals- Kesse had personals...god way to adress his name Kesse

multis- none of yall.....work on dat shit

closing- crisis had the closer, Kesse ur closer seemed like a filler, work on dat homie fo real....

vote/crisis.......good job but elevate

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Voted For: Crisis

wow this battle is freakin' funny doggs.

i give it to mans crisis:lemme break it down

crisis
iight wordplay wasnt nuthin special
multiz i seen him try to use a couple and they connected for the most part
flow and structure was iight too

kesse
flow and structure was cool
punches were very weak and that fucked everything up
but the punches that were good seemed ok
multiz really not any

Voted For: Kesse

Kesse-Nice, you've much elevated. Ok, punches was good, effective. Flow was alright, dont stretch your lines that much kesse. Add some personals....Wordplays was good, still elevate on that........overall ok verse still need elevation in structure and wordplays....punches also........



Crisis-Got potential. Punches was ok, elevate...Use personals with them punches.......Wordplay's was kinda weak.......Flow was eh ok..........need help with using personals and multi'z...Punches also........In ya verse you had ok punches effective.......wordplay's was ok not good but ok......





overall=In my eyes (opinion) I think kesse got this battle, either though that crises and kesse hit at the same level, Kesse came a little better than crisis.....Punches was ok on crises, effective.......Kesse came a little harder and more creative with his punches.......Wordplay was also harder........Crisis good verse got potential keep it up...but i gots to vote for kesse basically with harder punches and wordplays

feedback is good, thanks dogs, more upppppinnn thou..../..

Voted For: Kesse

v/kesse.......he gets my vote cause he came harder wit punchs an vocab his diss's were original.....not played......crisis...u had sum good lines but ur verse wasn't hard hittin or consistent in diss's......no hate....jus elavate.....
punchs=kesse
vocab=kesse
structure=kesse
opener=kesse
closer=kesse
overall=Kesse
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Voted For: Kesse

this was a weak battle but here's my opinion of it:
opener: kesse
vocab: both
multis: n/a
structure: kesse
closer: crisis
kesse wins my vote cuz he came harder then crisis & hit wit more punches thru out; both of y'all need 2 elevate in ur rhymes & crisis try not 2 stretch out ur rhymes next time
make sure 2 return the favor

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tHIS WAS A GOOD BATTLE, BIGZ TO BOTH,

just some wannabe punk looking for some success to aquire
but you'd have more luck trying to turn water to fire


THAT WAS A NICE LINE MAN, YOU GUYS HAD SOME CHOPPY FLOW THO, BOTH OF U, BUT IN THE END I WENT WITH KESSE

Voted For: Kesse

jea kesse gets this easily....

won by better punches...and better personals...could wordplay with his name..shit was decent..........bad structure though...and ok flow...

crisis: better structure..attempted at multi's but it didnt work..LMFAO..you need to elevate...the punches was weak...and the personals..there was none

vote: kesse

Voted For: Kesse

Kesse - Good drop here...the structure could use a bit of work as not all the lines are the same length. But for what you used if flowed nicely. Good use of differnt vocabulary than most people on this site. You had some good punches in here that connected pretty good. My favourtie line was probably...

and whats with the name, you in some kind of struggle
or maybe its because you got no balls to juggle

Good drop. 7/10.


Crisis - Nothing to special here. Your verse was pretty played. I have seen all your punches thrown before in other verses. Your structure was a off as well...but instead your flow was kind of choppy. Just wasn't really feeling your verse. To elevate fix your structure and flow and work on better non-played out punches. 5/10

Vote: Kesse.