Dominate vs Gutter Shad
 

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6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

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Check in by: 02-02-05 at 12:48 PM

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Gutter Shad has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-30-05 12:49 PM.

My flowing style is nasty just like your face. Have you on the floor not breathing but shaking like mase./
I might catch case cause I'm ah dominate you. Send shocks to your body like my name Pikachu./
My plan is to disrespect you and your mother. You wear a strap but it has a cup size and assorted colors./
And you claim you a thug but you running with chumps. And your girl gettin bust like pubertity bumps./
You just another one of these punk pussy type cats.
Paw Paw from the mack bitch Dominate that./

Dominate has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-30-05 12:58 PM.

the crowd isn't rocking, they're doubting your hot shit
a true emcee can move the crowd, but not out of the concert
now ya in hysterics. confused and abused from comments
and i have shook the 'fuck outta ya' like reusable condoms
i can see it in your eyes that u dont want drama
but battlin me, i'm gonna start ya off with two l's like llamas.
Gutter vs Dominate, i guess brawl is certain
but u know ur ass is unsafe like prison without walls or curtains
You’re straight wack, that’s what you’re rapping to say
And I’ll remove your verse, so don’t get carried away
this hoe kat, i'm killing you with rymes you know that
i'll put more bullets to ur chest than the Wizards throwback
your verse serrated in dirt, how come u wasted ur words
shoulda been like E-40's Bentley and 'weighted your turn'

Alright we uppin for some votes ! so vote peeps

Voted For: Dominate

Dominate-Ok flow was kinda chopped up, but still good. Punches was VERY much effective. Wordplay's was nice fam, you good with that. All you have to do is add some multi'z in your verses. Dont stretch your lines that much.....Punches was very much creative.




Gutter shad-

My flowing style is nasty just like your face. Have you on the floor not breathing but shaking like mase./
I might catch case cause I'm ah dominate you. Send shocks to your body like my name Pikachu./

^^^ GOT ME ROLLING, NICE





Alright nice punches, still like in your last battle, the flow is fucked. Fix the structure. Wordplay's was good. Punches was good very effective, if you'd wrote more, and have a very good structure, then you'll 8/10 will win a battle.




Overall=One-sided battle, Gutter shad nice lil punches. Fix the flow, meaning the structure. Wotrdplays was nice, you need to write more fam......Dominate- nice punches with some good wordplays...Very effective. I have to give this to dominate, overall he had more punches and good flow. Gutter shad, write more fam....Good punches but i felt dominate came harder..

Seriously few more lines and good structure from gutter shad, then this battle would been HANDS down to gutta, wun

Thanks man I'm working on all that. Before you know it I'm ah be the best.

Alright...coo

Return a fav dominate or gutta shad

Honest vote


http://community.rapverse.com/showb...90&page=2&pp=15

wun

Voted For: Dominate

u[]Dominate[/u]
the crowd isn't rocking, they're doubting your hot shit
a true emcee can move the crowd, but not out of the concert
now ya in hysterics. confused and abused from comments
and i have shook the 'fuck outta ya' like reusable condoms
i can see it in your eyes that u dont want drama
but battlin me, i'm gonna start ya off with two l's like llamas.
Gutter vs Dominate, i guess brawl is certain
but u know ur ass is unsafe like prison without walls or curtains
You’re straight wack, that’s what you’re rapping to say
And I’ll remove your verse, so don’t get carried away
this hoe kat, i'm killing you with rymes you know that
i'll put more bullets to ur chest than the Wizards throwback
your verse serrated in dirt, how come u wasted ur words
shoulda been like E-40's Bentley and 'weighted your turn'

nice flow...some good punches...vocab was a little basic but coo...overall...pretty good verse...7/10

Gutter Shad
My flowing style is nasty just like your face. Have you on the floor not breathing but shaking like mase./
I might catch case cause I'm ah dominate you. Send shocks to your body like my name Pikachu./
My plan is to disrespect you and your mother. You wear a strap but it has a cup size and assorted colors./
And you claim you a thug but you running with chumps. And your girl gettin bust like pubertity bumps./
You just another one of these punk pussy type cats.
Paw Paw from the mack bitch Dominate that./

alright verse...a little basic tho...flow was a little off to me...u had a couple punches i liked tho...overall...verse wasn't all that bad but it wasn't that good either...5/10

Voted For: Dominate

.............................. you both suck... words and turn dont rhyme

Genius you didn't explain your vote. Pussy ass coming on peoples battle just to talk shit. Its takes a punk ass nigga to do that!

yeah, he didn't explain his vote though, and i ain't wack dawg. you battle then if i'm wack Genius, fuckin pussy....uppin this

uppin----------------------------------------------

Voted For: Dominate

this hoe kat, i'm killing you with rymes you know that
i'll put more bullets to ur chest than the Wizards throwback
your verse serrated in dirt, how come u wasted ur words
shoulda been like E-40's Bentley and 'weighted your turn'
the crowd isn't rocking, they're doubting your hot shit
a true emcee can move the crowd, but not out of the concert
now ya in hysterics. confused and abused from comments
and i have shook the 'fuck outta ya' like reusable condoms
i can see it in your eyes that u dont want drama
but battlin me, i'm gonna start ya off with two l's like llamas.

vs.

nothing

Dominate, like, damn, that verse was the best I have EVER read in FL. Seriously, you have to be alias. If you're not, then God damn you're a good newb. Dominate, dominated, seriously. Wasn't even close. Those bars I quoted were NICE. Fuck, i'm very im pressed. Gutter, work on everything. Structure, punches, wordplay, just everything. Dominate, just keep it up and you could be comin for my crown soon.

v-Dominate

thanks for voting man, and i'm no alias, uppin for more votes.

uppin.............................................

jus checkin tha polls cuz..........................

seriosly I didnt even read the verses, so dont get mad, I just needed battle credits to open a battle quick, but I voted for you, so dont got so defensive

Voted For: Gutter Shad

dis was a weak battle but i give it to gutter shad for actually rhyming.....dominate u aint start rhyming untill like halfway in ur verse...i liked gutters closer also....
but shit and concert dont rhyme and
comments and condoms dont rhyme eitha....
v/gutter shad..
return da fuckin favor please...link below.....
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=175096

yo my computer must be messed up or something....cuz ur whole verse didnt show up....ther was only like the first 4 lines.....i still cant see it but if thats ur verse dat socrates quoted den u won....i dunno what 2 do bout this....but yall cand dq i guess if u want 2

yeah that's my verse Socrates quoted, my whole verse, your comp really must be fucked up, cuz i was finna say this was an herd vote..lol

yeh my bad yo..do what eva u want wit dat vote..dunno what 2 tell ya...

Voted For: Dominate

the crowd isn't rocking, they're doubting your hot shit
a true emcee can move the crowd, but not out of the concert
^^LMFAO ha nice opener too sic..
now ya in hysterics. confused and abused from comments
and i have shook the 'fuck outta ya' like reusable condoms
^^nice meta, good punch lol
i can see it in your eyes that u dont want drama
but battlin me, i'm gonna start ya off with two l's like llamas.
^^not too hot the last line was kinda wack...
Gutter vs Dominate, i guess brawl is certain
but u know ur ass is unsafe like prison without walls or curtains
^^another good punch has arrived.. this was nice..
your verse serrated in dirt, how come u wasted ur words
shoulda been like E-40's Bentley and 'weighted your turn'
^^nice closer... dayum nice punch and meta.
Those were the favorites in your verse.

Gutter there wasn't much to critique... you had some nice lines but the way you set them up were odd..
My plan is to disrespect you and your mother. You wear a strap but it has a cup size and assorted colors./
^^i thought this was kinda funny, u coulda made an ill punch with it tho..
And you claim you a thug but you running with chumps. And your girl gettin bust like pubertity bumps./
^^^second half decent, first half aight..
Your closer wasn't hot you need to work on those more than anything.. You need to end the battle with a bang, Dominate had some witty ass punches and metaphors was sic.. good combination.. he took this by a landslide.. my vote/ Dominate..
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