Aim Ya Guns
 

Aim for the head when you see em go get em nicca :shoot:
Aim for the head when you see em go get em nicca
Aim for the head when you see em go get em nicca
YO String let them lames know you aint playin wit em

......yeah holla at me....String is back

yall wanna pop heat, mayn these thugs neva had it
but String squeeze arms like blood pressure gadgets
yea i know i aint been on in a minute
but now im droppin jaws like its a yawn epidemic
they say Top 5 is self-glorification
ok..FUCK YALL im Top 4 in the nation
u get leg sprains, ya head grazed, when the lead blaze
only hits u ever got was off ya web-page
i take out a chunk of Mc's wit every bite
the steel, like Teddy bears, it gets squeezed every night
niggas will pay money, just to see me flow
i'll put ya in full cast, n i aint talkin bout no TV show

Aim for the head when you see em go get em nicca :shoot:
Aim for the head when you see em go get em nicca
Aim for the head when you see em go get em nicca
YO String let them lames know you aint playin wit em

its gonna b a problem yall

uhh, ya flows like stale bread, they day old dude
im about to drop, n sell more in 24 hours than Halo 2
yall niggas can get halos too
cuz u talk all that shit, n neva spray those tools
u drop shit, i pop lids like tupperware
dont like what im sayin, then we can let the knuckles bare
a couple glares, i got nothin but troubled stares
for niggas who act hard, n is softer than the Snuggle bear
i'll blow up ya block, so u can see the rubble there
yall cant fill my shoes, like u put on ya big brothas Airs
hatin on me is like givin Ivory to an elephant
i really dont need it, so why u try sellin it?
pretty much all that bullshit u yappin is irrelevant
nigga, i aint nice wit the flows IM BENEVOLENT......holla

If you wanna go to war then pop somethin :shoot:
If you wanna go to war then pop somethin
If you wanna go to war then pop somethin
eh YO STRING tell them lames you aint playin wit em......

THIS HAS BEEN A PSA

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was feelin this................would sound ope in audio.....drop a link to this or sumin u got that might be better in The Jury forum :thumbup:

thanks for the feed acuity, uppin for more holla at me

yo man, nice shit nice shit, i liked everything excellent vocab, alright structure only thing i saw wrong was some of ur lines were i feel cut short and didnt express 100% of ur talent, but some how u rejuvenated ur rhyme with 8/10 and if you aint in a crew, go sign up fo tha mafia we lookin for new talent boy do it up

thanks for the feed mafia, uppin for more, holla at me...1

thanks for the feed mafia, uppin for more, holla at me...1

thanks for the feed mafia, uppin for more, holla at me...1

You've convince me, you've much elevated homie. Try out for our crew.

-The Jury

thanks for the feed MA, uppin for more hto holla at me.............

never disapointed by shit from string... and that one dude is right, that shit would be sick on audio, you need to start audio and shit... punches, flow and eeverything was good... im always downf or syain fuck structure, lol holla

thanks for the feed, one step beyond, uppin for more .....holla at me peeps.....1

im feelin this shit man
its pretty tight
good vocab
good structure
dont cut ur lines short
overall ill give it an 8/10
Return the favor

thanks for the feed godfather, uppin for more feed back, holla at me peeps

uppin for more feedback, holla at me wit some honest opinions, leave links n the favor will b returned

uppin for more feedback, holla at me wit some honest opinions, leave links n the favor will b returned

^^^^u need to drop links on other peoples battles n then u can ge tsome feed....1...

yea...this would sound hella good on audio...i liked the flow...and the pace of it...structure was tite...and the metas were killer...8/10...~1~...

thanks for the feed back ghoste uppin for more get at me ==========

yo string, this shit was hot son. would sound dope if u spit it on a mic, ya feel me. nice multies n some sick punches. keep tryin to come up wit those hot ones. im up for a collab if u ever want to get up on it...*1*

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