Sand vs C-Bo
 

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No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 30

Check in by: 01-31-05 at 01:52 PM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

Sand has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-30-05 01:53 PM.

Your jot is distant... I guess you ain't the winning sort
C-Bo will go at any length's to beat me...yet he still come's up short.
I didn't want to try in this bout, & still this fag would forfeit.
& I'd tell him I didn't give a fuck, but he'd prolly ask me for it.
I'd give C-Bo prop's cuz he's eating me...but not with a pen
Cos I recognized he's a cannibal emcee...with a taste for men!
I'll kick up heat, discard C-Bo, & watch the votes settle.
I mean, I told you to step up..But there's no door on my level.

Quick...

C-Bo has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-30-05 02:10 PM.

here goes tha facts..add up my votes since ur a pro in math...
ur hoe in class..n left school cus they pointed at ur clothes-n-laughed...
guns ur cockin em right..i dont see it like preists rockin some ice...
they say sex is a weapon..somthin you have never shot in ya life...
i know it really hurts when i slay..and here's a hearst for ya gay...
...and if i am what i eat?..i guess i'll be ya fuckin verse for a day...
you suck along with your crew...and I'm passed yall threats...
ur battles are interestin..cuz we see how you'll get crappe on next..

This was feedback posted for Sand
 

ok nice battle......you got this shit becuase you had some nice wordplay.........just looking for the polls...

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Voted For: C-Bo

yooooooooo my vote is for C-bo, nice verse son..........i like da multis and you had sum personals and punches that effected da battle in many ways..............Dialect, your verse was alright buh it was kinda like you didnt take time to actually DISS him.........u had sum good punches buh overall C-bo got my vote............................................Re turn da favor http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=174612

Voted For: C-Bo

my vote goes to C-Bo
-Dialect, you had some nice punches in there, liked the finisher and forfeit one, opener was decent, nice flow, good structure, maybe get some multis in there next time, plus you just didnt come as hard as C-Bo, and your punches didnt hit as hard, nice drop all-in-all though
-C-Bo, sweet spit, came out much harder than dialect, punches hit and were original, flow could be better, but it wasnt bad...loved the 'am what i eat' line, ahha, personals were way better and stayed on track the whole way, keep on elevatin man

-nice drop by both, but C-Bo takes 'er for harder punches/personals, flat out came harder

Lmao.
There were NO personals.
Dickheads...
Pricks.

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Voted For: C-Bo

punches- cbo
persnals- cbo
metals-- none
vocab-- none
wordplay cbo

cbo came hard he had harder punches and persnals had ok stuckture and thing niuce verse alround keep doing ya shit KB came ok little weak but had some nice stuff didnt hiit hard enough though just elevate some more and u might get to beat him both was good

v/c-bo

thanx for votin....uppin...........................

Voted For: C-Bo

i think c-bo won because he had good vocab
really hard hittin punches good structure
good multis and a great opener
karmabarz u had good structure
u need a lil work on ur vocab
u had a pretty good opener
u had some good punches
overall both battles were alright
c-bo's faorite lines:
here goes tha facts..add up my votes since ur a pro in math...
ur hoe in class..n left school cus they pointed at ur clothes-n-laughed...
guns ur cockin em right..i dont see it like preists rockin some ice...
they say sex is a weapon..somthin you have never shot in ya life...
karmabarz favorite lines:
I didn't want to try in this bout, & still this fag would forfeit.
& I'd tell him I didn't give a fuck, but he'd prolly ask me for it.
I'd give C-Bo prop's cuz he's eating me...but not with a pen
Cos I recognized he's a cannibal emcee...with a taste for men!

Voted For: C-Bo

Voted for C-Bo

C-Bo got dis cuz his verse was alot tighter

Punches went to C-bo he came harder n more to the point
Flow both had good flow n all so that was pretty much all knotted up
C-bo really took hard jabs at u sand his punches were so much more intense then yours

C-Bo best line
i know it really hurts when i slay..and here's a hearst for ya gay...
...and if i am what i eat?..i guess i'll be ya fuckin verse for a day...
(Tight, Smacked him up)

Sand ya had alright punches some were good n hard the others were softer n didnt really fit ur verse

Sand good line:

I'd give C-Bo prop's cuz he's eating me...but not with a pen
Cos I recognized he's a cannibal emcee...with a taste for men!
(I was feelin that u needed more of those in ur verse)

everything was tied up so it came down to punches n C-Bo had better so C-Bo gets the vote

good battle fams

Not Hatin, Jus votin
holla