Phive vs ~Sonofisis~
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 500

Check in by: 01-30-05 at 05:20 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

phive has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-30-05 04:56 PM.

~Sonofisis~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-30-05 04:58 PM.

yo undid unsaid is ya life sonofisis, how you gonna beat me you aint got tha potential to fight this// off tha top of my head kid i dont write this, rapstyle fucking you up like a pair of fake tits// unconcious and bleeding on tha grounds, phive crew all around, lyrically out weighing you with every pound, after all the emcees i downed, killin you silently without a sound// slammin you like vince carter, im tha rap bombarder, im hittin you harder, kncokin out emcees since i was a starter, you might go far but ill go farther// im spittin hard lyrics thats makin ya temple leak, raptyle sleek, leaving you weak, smashing ya beak, cuttin holes in ya cheek, givin ya scars to ya feet// the ending credits are bein played for ya sono, givin you free rap lessons like pro bono, rappin mono, dont fuck wit me homo, you cant beat me so phives ya promo//

This bitch is jus a Wise Guy Tryna HiSide
I just give em "Dopeness", Leavin U With a "High Phive"
Now Phive's High, Coz i have Metaphores to Adore
Long as Bush draft u, then i'll be in Support Of The War
I Noticed, he must be tryna Even The Score
Coz somebody with my same name Beat em Before
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=146829
Obviously u can't battle, this fool is a Damn Rascle
Wants to run a kingdom but couldn't make a Sand Castle
So after my merk fest, i should you a Tampon
Coz this coward couldn't test if he gave me a Scantron

nice battle man, good luck, 1..................................

yeah you too man winner goes to the best man nice shit dawg you know what i mean aight lyrics homie g

This was feedback posted for ~Sonofisis~
 

sorry for not voting but this was so onesided... Sonic, you should be ashamed of urself for merkin this cat... come on now, you knew you would win... have some class about urself...

what are you fuckin stupid man what are ya talking about you fuckind do continue on my cock

LOL, man, I was bored and No one would battle me....

whatever man you havent won yet so shut the fuck up id say this shits in my favour

yea right, haha, anyway, uppin.....................................

yo uppin fo some votes playasssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss

dude, you are fuckin crazy, i'd kill you in a second
thats no joke, if you wanna go right now we can do this. i dont take shit from nobody, i speak the truth and am not about to back down to some 2 dollar herb who think he got enough clout to talk shit... lets go man, you lost anyways you garbage hoe

i dont mean to freepost or nothin, but i'll get yall some votes since i got nothing to do... lemme get the link and viola... i'll have people return my votes over here...

Voted For: ~Sonofisis~

Now Phive's High, Coz i have Metaphores to Adore
Long as Bush draft u, then i'll be in Support Of The War
So after my merk fest, i should you a Tampon
Coz this coward couldn't test if he gave me a Scantron

vs.

nothing

Son clearly won. Phive needs to stop with paragraphs, backslashes, not having punches and overall suckiness. Sonic done fell off but he obviously has this one even though the "s need to be put to rest with July =/

v-sonofisis

Voted For: ~Sonofisis~

This bitch is jus a Wise Guy Tryna HiSide
I just give em "Dopeness", Leavin U With a "High Phive"
good closer
Now Phive's High, Coz i have Metaphores to Adore
Long as Bush draft u, then i'll be in Support Of The War
punch was okay here, it landed
I Noticed, he must be tryna Even The Score
Coz somebody with my same name Beat em Before
decent punch line here…it landed and it was hard


yo undid unsaid is ya life sonofisis, how you gonna beat me you aint got tha potential to fight this//
off tha top of my head kid i dont write this, rapstyle fucking you up like a pair of fake tits//
weak punch here…
unconcious and bleeding on tha grounds, phive crew all around, lyrically out weighing you with every pound, after all the emcees i downed, killin you silently without a sound//
slammin you like vince carter, im tha rap bombarder, im hittin you harder, kncokin out emcees since i was a starter, you might go far but ill go farther//
punch was aight but the flow was too long

^your drop was pretty decent but you should made it like ur opponents
and it would been better

but overall Sono took this one…punches were harder and had a better structure
overall phive elevate more on ur punches and work on ur structure too

Voted For: ~Sonofisis~

close battle but sonofisis took this one by a lil nice vocab punches were okay can use a lil work word play was nice the metas were good 7/10
best line-Now Phive's High, Coz i have Metaphores to Adore
Long as Bush draft u, then i'll be in Support Of The War

Voted For: ~Sonofisis~

sonof clearly takes this one.

phive, you had some nice shit in there........but im sorry, your verse seemed rushed and not too well thought out or planned. your structure was poor and some of your punches were so-so. if this were an actual verbal freestyle, you would get more love......but this is text homie. you got to fine tune your work. i didnt notice any personals.......and trust me, those really win battles. some of your lines didnt rhyme.......and your flow was off in some spots. try to work on building up some multies. well, keep up the good work......and please dont let my vote discourage you.

sonof, you stole this one easily. you had nice punches......a clean ass personal and good structure. your flow was also on point as well......nice. the bush bar (lines 2-4).....and the sandcastle bar (lines 7-8) were my favorites of the whole verse. if i could offer any advice......it'd be to incorporate some multies and more complex vocab. well, hold it down............and do the damn thing cutty.

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thank you......oner....


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