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phive vs Khaos_daRenegade
Battle Rules:
6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting verse due in 45 min Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 01-30-05 at 07:43 PM Must drop verse in 45 minutes after check in. |
Khaos_daRenegade has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-30-05 07:13 PM.
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phive has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-30-05 07:17 PM.
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the battle rules are what keep lyric masters like me away from fools, im gonna werk you like im using tools,// im rippin you apart like a rabid dog, makin you so wet the condensation leaves ya brain lost in tha fog,// i rip attack you, and smash you like a cashew, peircing ya skin and rippin half through, so what the fuck ya gonna do// da renagade left cut up cuz phive regenerate, kid you cant even pull ya own weight, better than #1 cuz im in phive state// yo this kids beggin for the end of my rap apocalypse, breakin ya nose and crackin ya hips, im givin fat lips, ta bad kids, imma make an example of you, cuz you rap shit//
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i did this shit in phive minutes dawg wheres yours fucking slow poke whats up get faster man
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im ready, lets go
ayo i dont really wanna school dis cat.... took a look at ya battles and they just prove u wack... and i know alotta yall gone cock block... but if dis cat spilled boilin water he still wont drop hot... stop sleepin on dis open ya eyes lil dude... and see dat u couldnt win, not even wit phive of u... and know i got dem beams on aim... like da special olympics dawg ya whole team is lame... so u better get ya crew to protect ya.. and put some shades on, my wrist shine just like a movie projector.. and hey chef i need some toast,some sausage, some bacon and eggs..* and make it "snappy" or ima be "breakin" ya legs... *in his profile he says dat he likes to cook... i just fuck his bitch an leave while he wife da puss.. pussyyyyyyyy i killed this cat lets get the votes in |
yo man you are so fucked what the fuck was that man that was the worst display of a rapping scheme i have ever seen man you suck
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yo man you are so fucked what the fuck was that man that was the worst display of a rapping scheme i have ever seen man you suck learn to rap and then battle me man
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yo uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
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upppinnnnnnnnnn dis shittttttttttttttt......................
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upppinnnnnnnnnn dis shittttttttttttttt...................... can some fuckin body vote stop sleepin
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This was feedback posted for phive
Very Impressive~ Even tho i can't vote very because i have a battle wit Khaos but very i'm pressive to Phive. No hate to Khaos i just wansn't feelin it that much.
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uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^dis shit some mutha fucka drop some votes
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vote somebody drop a fuckin vote as many fuckin battles i vote for nobody can return the favor
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Voted For: Khaos_daRenegade
Yea my vote goes to khaos, it goes to him because his punches were harder and he his verse overall was better. flow was betta and punches was visible.................Khaos |
Voted For: Khaos_daRenegade
pers-none punch-ren mets-none vocab-ren wordplay-none ren cmae a little bit hard close battle both came weak and need to elevate but ren win this battle came a little hard with the punches |
Voted For: phive
Phive:my goes to you,for better creativity,yo give you a trick...make lines like this: xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx.....not like this: xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx x.....iight lol so like that you have more chance winning,iight this was your best battle that i saw so far,we maybe had beef but true.. Khaos_daRenegade:your structure was lil bit off...dunno i wsint feeling really your verse,but still,dats why your here...to elevate...dont say shit like "im ready,lets go" lol sounds gay nuff said,my vote goes to : Phive |
yo dame dat vote wasnt explained worth shit u need to do more or it doesnt count
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This was feedback posted for phive
you'd better keep your lines not going on
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Voted For: Khaos_daRenegade
V/Khaos_DaRenegade........he gets my vote cause of his use of punchs an personals wit better structure.....phive u did elavate from other times i read ur stuff u had sum good lines in this verse but u need to work on ur structure an work on being consistent an creative wit ur diss's.....no hate ....jus elavate...... punchs=Khaos vocab=khaos structure=khaos opener=khaos closer=khaos overall=khaos_daRenegade *RETURN THE FAVOR* |
thanx freeze yoooooooo uppin dis shit for more vote just two more and i win lets go peeps i will return the favor if u need votes drop a link
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Voted For: phive
yo im going to have to go wit phive on dis one...he had good multis...more than chaos and he had punches that hit ok but they weren't hard...but they still did the job...his structure was not good...yo man u should put ur rhymes in bars trust me,it will help the reader damn!...and he had better vocabulary... chaos had the structure...and some ok punches, also he had a personal in there...but phive took it yo!! |
uppin this shit we need more votes^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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This was feedback posted for Khaos_daRenegade
checkin pollz............................................. ........
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uppin dis shit for more votes^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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can yall return da favor.....................thanks.
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uppinnnnnnnnnnnnn this shit we need more votes come on peeps i killed him lets just get it ova with
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uppin fo some votes playas ill retutn tha favour
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uppin ill return tha favour............................................ .......
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uppin fo some votes people ill return tha favour
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this fool is wack he doesnt even know rap i ripped his shit uppin fo votes playas so we can close the polls
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uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nnnnn
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uppin for some votes playas ill return tha favour
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yo uppin fo some honest votes playas ill return the favour
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uppin fo some votes niggaz ill return the favour aight
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This was feedback posted for phive
i just wanna check da polls mayne
if i had more postz i would say phive took dis shit though :shoot: |
uppin fo some votes ill return the favour my niggaz
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uppin fo some votes ill return the favour aight niggaz
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yo uppin fo some votes gs ill returnt ha favour
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uppin fo some mutha fucking votes
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