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Reneg@de vs ~Da_Illest~
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 01-30-05 at 09:31 PM Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in. |
Reneg@de has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-30-05 08:33 PM.
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~Da_Illest~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-30-05 08:37 PM.
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ur style of rap is made up like a book of fables//
i'll lyrically kill u like bacc in ancient times i'm caine ur abel// even if i had no feet i still won't lose a step against u// cuz my lines would roll ova u more den a woman's hairdo// there's no choice u can score, like u talkin 2 a nun// so i guess u must as well add 2 ur lost column by 1 |
check it
Yo I'm the god that'll smite ya crews.. You the muthafucka to pick a fight wit a dike n lose Reneg@de stay paid...lay in the shade Been rhymin for a lifetime, ya shits just minute maid Spit again me I come hard like wild boar Or a genius battlin an ~ILL~iterate retard Shotgun shells will turn this yellow belly white And I beat this superwoman with a kryptonite mic Or throw slugs like C Batteries and leave you Energiez Like Walla walla I got this W no need to be surprised |
uppin for some feedback on this one people, we need to declare a winner
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This was feedback posted for ~Da_Illest~
good job. Fix ya structure and work on ur punches.
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This was feedback posted for ~Da_Illest~
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Voted For: Reneg@de
yo i think renegade won because his punches are just way better than illest he had better structure and better overall verse it aint really hard to see that his shit was more complex and he had a nice nameplay in there and a couple of multi's and a decent vocab |
uppin again for some more votes on this battle here
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uppity uppin uppin for some more votes on this battle
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Voted For: ~Da_Illest~
i have seen alot betta battles but it was ok but both need 2 elevate in ur rhymes: opener: ill vocab: renegade punches: both personals: both structure: ill multis: n/a ender: ill diz was a very close battle in my opinion but ill just have a little bit more punches den renegade |
ight it'z tied up 1-1 uppin 4 more votes c'mon & vote people
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Voted For: Reneg@de
punches-Reneg@de persnals-none flow-~dI~ made sence-Reneg@de metals-none immma give my vote to Reneg@de both was weak but Reneg@de came a little harder on the punches ~DI~ had nice flopw on some part but some of his verse mad no sence at all thats y im giving my vote to Reneg@de 4 having harder punches and making sence |
Voted For: ~Da_Illest~
these 2 verses by both of y'all were not 2 it'z potential & need 2 be elevated more in your next battles: opener: ill vocab: both punches: both personals: both multis: nobody structure: ill closer: ill like i said b4 this battle was weak in my opinion & i hope u 2 step ur rhyming game up 2 par next time 1 |
Voted For: ~Da_Illest~
ur style of rap is made up like a book of fables// i'll lyrically kill u like bacc in ancient times i'm caine ur abel// decent punch even if i had no feet i still won't lose a step against u// cuz my lines would roll ova u more den a woman's hairdo// weak punch, shouldve switch’d it… there's no choice u can score, like u talkin 2 a nun// so i guess u must as well add 2 ur lost column by 1 punch was okay…not really hard hittin Yo I'm the god that'll smite ya crews.. You the muthafucka to pick a fight wit a dike n lose weak punch…didn’t really land Reneg@de stay paid...lay in the shade Been rhymin for a lifetime, ya shits just minute maid punch was okay, weak tho Spit again me I come hard like wild boar Or a genius battlin an ~ILL~iterate retard weak closer Overall da_illest took this one, came less weak in this battle And the structure was better too |
Voted For: Reneg@de
Renegade is my vote niether used personals Renegade had an undeniable flow wit medium punches his shit was just well rounded plus vocab was displayed Ill some of ya stuff was definetly forced with out a great flow and a small vocab |
Voted For: ~Da_Illest~
da illest...... ur style of rap is made up like a book of fables// i'll lyrically kill u like bacc in ancient times i'm caine ur abel// ehh ok opener....5/10 even if i had no feet i still won't lose a step against u// cuz my lines would roll ova u more den a woman's hairdo// ok attempt at wordplay here.....6/10 there's no choice u can score, like u talkin 2 a nun// so i guess u must as well add 2 ur lost column by 1 kinda played here.....4/10 overall...........15/30 renegade......... Yo I'm the god that'll smite ya crews.. You the muthafucka to pick a fight wit a dike n lose good multis....but thats all....4/10 Reneg@de stay paid...lay in the shade Been rhymin for a lifetime, ya shits just minute maid set up line is garbage...didnt hit....3/10 Spit again me I come hard like wild boar Or a genius battlin an ~ILL~iterate retard ehh not feelin it....4/10 Shotgun shells will turn this yellow belly white And I beat this superwoman with a kryptonite mic decent wordplay here....6/10 Or throw slugs like C Batteries and leave you Energiez Like Walla walla I got this W no need to be surprised good set up line....punch was weak...5/10 overall......22/50 i just felt that renegade didnt come with as hard of punches as illest did.....both had ok wordplay...both had bad structure....illests punches won this for him..... |
Voted For: Reneg@de
u got dis hands down fam.... Yo I'm the god that'll smite ya crews.. You the muthafucka to pick a fight wit a dike n lose ^^^okay opener nice lil flow rite there... Reneg@de stay paid...lay in the shade Been rhymin for a lifetime, ya shits just minute maid ^^^weak Spit again me I come hard like wild boar Or a genius battlin an ~ILL~iterate retard ^^^good personal with ILL shit... Shotgun shells will turn this yellow belly white And I beat this superwoman with a kryptonite mic ^^^NO.. Or throw slugs like C Batteries and leave you Energiez Like Walla walla I got this W no need to be surprised ^^^ HUH?? overall...renegade had a good verse some shit u just dont need da say in battle fam 4real ur style of rap is made up like a book of fables// i'll lyrically kill u like bacc in ancient times i'm caine ur abel// ^^OKAY OPENER... even if i had no feet i still won't lose a step against u// cuz my lines would roll ova u more den a woman's hairdo// ^^^WEAK AS FUKK there's no choice u can score, like u talkin 2 a nun// so i guess u must as well add 2 ur lost column by 1 ^^^U LOST..... plain and simp fam u had no punchlines,personals no creativity return da favor link in da sig |
Voted For: Reneg@de
Renegade, your flows were much better, your punches were much greater, and your vocab was killer Da ill, work on your flow man one sided battle |
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