Kamikazee vs Judicial
 

Battle Rules:

10- Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting



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Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 02-04-05 at 03:36 PM

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Kamikazee has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-01-05 03:38 PM.

Judicial has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-01-05 06:34 PM.

opener:
ima rip off ya skull cap and spit ill thoughts 2 ya brain
and let u drool at ya mouth,da only way u spit hot game

killer:
scorchin..lyrics.scratches ta holes with blood pourin
decapitate,gut lacerate, and donate dis faggots organs
verbally murder u but whisper so i wont get arrested
10/10 punches all conected n at da end left ya breathles

killer(again):
yo i heard how it is...dat insest in West Virgina
reppin da girl in ur avy...but kami is dat ur sista?
dis is bout "The Jury" fuck a Twisted leadership
we iz "revolutionury",think u hot,well i just spit meaner-shit

good verse cuzz and goodluck...........uppin dis shit

Voted For: Judicial

definite win for jud.....kamikazee used too much self glorification and not enuff personlas or punches, the punches that WERE there were pre school....jud had better vocab opener punchjes, everything....both people could have improved by having more multies....this was 1 sided the whole way.....

v/judicial

rtf
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pleez rtf

thanks uppin dis shit...yeh ur verse was good too....i was like damn when i saw it....

This was feedback posted for Judicial
 

Good drop from both head'z...good luck on the polls peace

Voted For: Kamikazee

Kamikazee
structure is ok.. some of ur lines are stretched though.. flow falls off a little due to the partial stretchness.. u had a few multis.. u attempted wordplay, but some of it didnt connected.. a few, at best, of ur punches connected.. u had one attempted personal..

Judicial
structure was good.. flow was on target.. no multis.. attempted wordplay, but it was all garbage.. none of ur punches connected.. no good personals..

Overall
Judicial had the better structure and flow.. neither had good personals.. Kamikazee had more multis.. better wordplay.. and more connecting punches.. so basing off of that, Kamikazee gets my vote..

VOTE - KAMIKAZEE

iight iight tied up.....uppin dis battle yalll....~1~drop a link for returned votes

Voted For: Kamikazee

Close Battle.If I Could Vote A Tie I Would Have But The Only Thing That Seperated The Verses Was Judicials' Style Sorta.He Had Some Creative Lines But He Jus Talked Throughout His Verse.Basically Running His Mouth But Not Really Saying Anything.Kami Stayed On Topic With His And Had Some Tight Personals.

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

^^^i dont see how u stay on topic when dis not even a topical battle yo...ne ways uppin

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Naw......the kid was talking about "topical battle". This ain't a "topical" battle, dq that vote.

UPPPPPPPPPPPPPIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNNNNNN...battle mad close......lets get some more votes for dis crew battle.........

uppin motha fuckas............damn lets get dis closed

yo uppin dis thread 4-real....dis is bein slept on....ill return da favor

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Uppin For My Nigga Judicial.......................

Voted For: Kamikazee

winner- kamikazee

ima rip off ya skull cap and spit ill thoughts 2 ya brain
and let u drool at ya mouth,da only way u spit hot game

nice punch

scorchin..lyrics.scratches ta holes with blood pourin
decapitate,gut lacerate, and donate dis faggots organs
verbally murder u but whisper so i wont get arrested
10/10 punches all conected n at da end left ya breathles

vocab was incredible, punches were concrete and strong
good job

yo i heard how it is...dat insest in West Virgina
reppin da girl in ur avy...but kami is dat ur sista?
dis is bout "The Jury" fuck a Twisted leadership
we iz "revolutionury",think u hot,well i just spit meaner-shit

i loved the sister line, punch was hot





U should get smacked first off for having a rap name like judicial,
Cuzz ur style is wack, yall aint never heard of it because its artificial
U got a slim chance of winning dis battle like whites at a black college,
Choked up are we? Your dumbass cant think because i froze ur knowledge

nice vocab, punch was hot, flow was right on

U got a slim chance of winning dis battle like whites at a black college,
Choked up are we? Your dumbass cant think because i froze ur knowledge

punch was strong,

You reppin one of da best crews, u aint good dont know how u got in the jury,
But after i get done wit u, i'll have ur hole crew feeling Twizted Government fury
Its jus our grand opening for T.G., and we already starting to dimolish ur career,
Nobody desided to volunteer, so i stood up and repped T.G. and made u disappear

really liked this line, good job


Got yall shook off da name kamikazee, dis verse will catch ur eye and hynotize,
Claiming yall da best, jus proved yall wrong and bout to send u home wit them lies

strong punch, nice finisher


this was a crazy close battle
the thing that made me pic kamikazee was the flow, it was more consistent.

O Alright Honest Vote......uppin For More Honest Votes......

uPPIN FOR HONEST VOTES................................

Voted For: Kamikazee

kamikazee wins this battle.
both had really good flow. but kami had better vocab n more creativity wit his punches, and they hit harder as well.
structure=kamikazee
flow=tied
vocab=kamikazee
multies=none
opener=kamikaze
closer=kamikaze
judicial just didnt diss the opponent enuff in this battle he aint come as hard as he could have and thats what cost him the win but ight battle overall
rtf..holla at me
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Voted For: Kamikazee

V/kamikazee.....this was a good battle but he gets my vote he came wit harder punchs an better vocab an structure he was creative wit the punchs.....jud u had sum good lines but ur structure needs work an u need to be consistent wit creative punchs an personals...no hate jus elavate.....
punchs=kam
structure=kam
vocab=kam
opener=kam
closer=kam
overall=kam
*RETURN THE FAVOR*

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This was feedback posted for Kamikazee
 

checking polls and uppin for my man.......................

This was feedback posted for Judicial
 

checkin polls....i seen that Kam was up 4-1 but i had no clue how...so i have to see these votes

damn i never seen Kamikazee come this hard at someone....props on your verse man....keep elevating

Voted For: Kamikazee

Battle was weak, but even though u had long as bars 8 ball u won this becuase more of your verse and punches make sense. The other dude was weak and sounded like he was making a song instead of a actual battle verse. For example, some of your words didnt rhyme judical. arrested/breathless. Both you guys need to step it up, but 8 ball got this. No hate just stating facts.