|
The Black Plague vs Kordozar
Battle Rules:
12-14 lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Good luck Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 02-03-05 at 04:28 PM Must drop verse in 720 minutes after check in. |
Kordozar has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-01-05 09:49 PM.
|
When Thiss Fag Iss Mad,Lets His Penis Attack His Dads..
Not Tough Juss Aktin Bad,Made His Pussy Bleed Uses His Keyboard As A Maxi Pad.. Even On Rv Kid Has A Lightstak,Why He Think He Got Tyte Raps? Bites Sacks,So On Aim He Likes Ta Wrigtmak.. Blaze Thiss Chump,With Kays Or Pumps.. Gets Nutted On,So Tha Spots On His Face Aren't Razor Bumps.. 17-4?Kid Trash Really Who's Teachin Him? Hand Blew Off Now Mad Cus His Sex Buddies Leavin Him.. All Tha Spits Onli Thing Tyte 4rm Him Wass His Smedium.. Even Tho He 4rm Hell Nigga Still Aint Spittin Fire.. Fags Rage,No Harm So Hows He Black Plague Kids A Liar Still A Virgin And Onli Screwin He's Doin Iss Fixin Tires.... ** Explanations** Light Stack-Low Money Wrightmak-Aim Name Lol Bumps On Hiss Face 17-4 Rekord Had A Smedium Shirt On In Hiss Pic His Location Say Hell |
The Black Plague has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-02-05 07:23 PM.
|
Only time ya “wraps on fire” is when you lightin up joints in ya zig zags
I’m commitin hate crimes the way I killed marv, now I’m murderin this fag Ya’ll some homo’s together, ya ass like marv’s submarine.. Full of his “seamen” And Marvjay’s Dick like a colonoscopy, its all up in ya ass for a reason Only time you “spit hard” is when you imitatin ya avvy daffy duck Other than that, you nothing but a washed up-has been ass fuck Ya homo-ass nothing to me, not important like middle school graduation This battle goin into history, the day Plague ripped Kordas ass like flatulation Talentwise you obsolete, you just “wack” like pee wee herman at that movie Heard ya rhymes and thought of suicide, so do that sticom and “Just shoot me” Your verse is worthless… lines are full of trash like alleyways behind a store Ya shit’s stagnant like swamps, prehistorically old like extinct dinasours But this ain’t Jurassic park kid, nobody wants that shit, cant you see? Shit was wack when jesus won a freestyle with it, back in 20 A. D. |
Voted For: The Black Plague
gotta give it to the black plague on dis one....he came harder imo...i like the wordplay and vocab...dis was a nice bar... "Ya’ll some homo’s together, ya ass like marv’s submarine.. Full of his “seamen” And Marvjay’s Dick like a colonoscopy, its all up in ya ass for a reason" kordozar had a good verse also but u tried all these personals but they werent really backed by punches u know what i mean...its like they didnt all flow together with that my vote goes to The Black Plague RTF.. http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=175096 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Uppin this shit
|
uppin again this again
|
This was feedback posted for The Black Plague
checkin polls.....good battle...........................
|
Voted For: The Black Plague
Kordozars Verse When Thiss Fag Iss Mad,Lets His Penis Attack His Dads.. Not Tough Juss Aktin Bad,Made His Pussy Bleed Uses His Keyboard As A Maxi Pad.. eh weak and didnt flow good... Even On Rv Kid Has A Lightstak,Why He Think He Got Tyte Raps? Bites Sacks,So On Aim He Likes Ta Wrigtmak.. thats his screename but it doesnt go together with anything else that you said in the line...it doesnt make sense Blaze Thiss Chump,With Kays Or Pumps.. Gets Nutted On,So Tha Spots On His Face Aren't Razor Bumps.. lol ok 17-4?Kid Trash Really Who's Teachin Him? Hand Blew Off Now Mad Cus His Sex Buddies Leavin Him.. ok All Tha Spits Onli Thing Tyte 4rm Him Wass His Smedium.. Even Tho He 4rm Hell Nigga Still Aint Spittin Fire.. wtf?...didnt rhyme and i have no clue what you even were trying to say cuz everything was mistyped or the e-net thug typing thing idk... Fags Rage,No Harm So Hows He Black Plague Kids A Liar Still A Virgin And Onli Screwin He's Doin Iss Fixin Tires.... pretty good closer... Black Plagues Verse Only time ya “wraps on fire” is when you lightin up joints in ya zig zags I’m commitin hate crimes the way I killed marv, now I’m murderin this fag eh... Ya’ll some homo’s together, ya ass like marv’s submarine.. Full of his “seamen” And Marvjay’s Dick like a colonoscopy, its all up in ya ass for a reason lol ok Only time you “spit hard” is when you imitatin ya avvy daffy duck Other than that, you nothing but a washed up-has been ass fuck wasnt complex and could of been worded better but ok personal Ya homo-ass nothing to me, not important like middle school graduation This battle goin into history, the day Plague ripped Kordas ass like flatulation lmao...ok Talentwise you obsolete, you just “wack” like pee wee herman at that movie Heard ya rhymes and thought of suicide, so do that sticom and “Just shoot me” nah wasnt feelin it... Your verse is worthless… lines are full of trash like alleyways behind a store Ya shit’s stagnant like swamps, prehistorically old like extinct dinasours good rhyming and wording...ok punch But this ain’t Jurassic park kid, nobody wants that shit, cant you see? Shit was wack when jesus won a freestyle with it, back in 20 A. D. lol best line of verse it was pretty good overall i thought black plague had a little bit of the edge here in punches and vocab...kordozar you had some good shit but i just thought blacks was a little harder but i think both were kinda weak...no hate though good luck to both peace |
Voted For: The Black Plague
open:Black mid:black clos:black win:black |
Uppin again thanks for the votes ya'll
|
Uppin once again
|
This was feedback posted for Kordozar
I just wanna check the polls out..
Holla at cha boobies. |
Voted For: The Black Plague
this was a pretty good battle, but i gota give it up 2 black plague, cause i felt he came a lil harder wit da puncehs and personasls in this one. i was also feelin tha mettas in here, but i dont think u came too hard on that, but they were still good. good drop, and keep elevating. and okay structure.. kordozar-u had a good drop, but i think u didnt come as hard. there was sumtin bout ur verse that i wasnt feelin. i kno i wasnt feelin tha all around structure, but there was sumthin else. good drop tho. i was feelin tha punches and mettas in this one. i think u came harder wit yo vocab and wordplay, but for tha overall verse, i think BP came harder. NO HATE THO...just one vote... overall-this was a good battle. i think yall should keep elevating, and work on structure and originality...NO HATE THO... plz RTF on one of tha battle links in sig...plz pick a crew battle if u will, and xplain ur vote... thanx...~1~ |
Thanks for the votes... honest vote returned...
Uppin again |
Voted For: The Black Plague
Only time ya “wraps on fire” is when you lightin up joints in ya zig zags I’m commitin hate crimes the way I killed marv, now I’m murderin this fag (DECENT OPENER...NICE WORDPLAY AND FLOW..7/10) Ya’ll some homo’s together, ya ass like marv’s submarine.. Full of his “seamen” And Marvjay’s Dick like a colonoscopy, its all up in ya ass for a reason (NICE WORDPLAY AND DISSES..FLOW GOOD...8/10) Only time you “spit hard” is when you imitatin ya avvy daffy duck Other than that, you nothing but a washed up-has been ass fuck (LMAO...FUNNY AND FLOWS WELL...9/10) Ya homo-ass nothing to me, not important like middle school graduation This battle goin into history, the day Plague ripped Kordas ass like flatulation (LOL...GOOD DISS...WORDPLAY GOOD...FLOW GOOD...8/10) Talentwise you obsolete, you just “wack” like pee wee herman at that movie Heard ya rhymes and thought of suicide, so do that sticom and “Just shoot me” (LMAO...PRI THE FUNNIEST IVE SEEN IN A WHILE...GOOD FLOW AND WORDPLAY...9/10) Your verse is worthless… lines are full of trash like alleyways behind a store Ya shit’s stagnant like swamps, prehistorically old like extinct dinasours (GOOD FLOW...FLOW GOOD...VOCAB REAL GOOD..8/10) But this ain’t Jurassic park kid, nobody wants that shit, cant you see? Shit was wack when jesus won a freestyle with it, back in 20 A. D. (DECENT CLOSER...FLOW WAS GOOD...VOCAB GOOD...9/10) AIGHT PLAGUE...THIS WAS A GOOD SPIT...YOUR VOCAB AND YOUR PUNCHES WERE ALL OVER THE PLACE...YOU HAD GOOD FLOW, THE STRUCTURE WAS AIGHT...CHOPPY IN SOME SPOTS...YOU WHOLE VERSE KEPT RIPPIN ON HIM...THERE WASNT A DULL SPOT IN IT...GOOD JOB KORDOZAR When Thiss Fag Iss Mad,Lets His Penis Attack His Dads.. Not Tough Juss Aktin Bad,Made His Pussy Bleed Uses His Keyboard As A Maxi Pad.. (DECENT OPENER...WAY OVER STRECHED THO 6/10) Even On Rv Kid Has A Lightstak,Why He Think He Got Tyte Raps? Bites Sacks,So On Aim He Likes Ta Wrigtmak.. (I DONT GET IT...PLAYED OUT TO ME....6/10) Blaze Thiss Chump,With Kays Or Pumps.. Gets Nutted On,So Tha Spots On His Face Aren't Razor Bumps.. (KINDA PLAYED...GOOD FLOW...PUNCH ISNT THAT STRONG...7/10) 17-4?Kid Trash Really Who's Teachin Him? Hand Blew Off Now Mad Cus His Sex Buddies Leavin Him.. (WEAK LINE...FLOW WAS AIGHT...6/10) All Tha Spits Onli Thing Tyte 4rm Him Wass His Smedium.. Even Tho He 4rm Hell Nigga Still Aint Spittin Fire.. (WTF...WACK SHIT TO ME...5/10) Fags Rage,No Harm So Hows He Black Plague Kids A Liar Still A Virgin And Onli Screwin He's Doin Iss Fixin Tires.... (WEAK CLOSER...DECENT WORDPLAY THO...6/10) AIGHT YOUR VERSE WAS KINDA WACK HOMIE...YOU HAD SOME FLOW BUT IT WAS ALL OVER THE PLACE...I DONT REALLY KNOW WHERE U CAME UP WITH ALOT OF THIS SHIT...MAYBE YOU WATCH AND READ DIFFERENT THINGS THEN ALL OF US NORMAL PEOPLE...BUT YEAH STRUCTURE WAS GOOD...JUST ELEVATE YOUR SHIT VOTE. BLACK PLAGUE |
Voted For: The Black Plague
I think plague got this yo...he really took it harder punches and shit u know...that's wats up...aiight battle |
| All times are GMT -4. The time now is 03:49 AM. |