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Rappin Wit Gunz (My-Mixx)
dis is some shit i wrote...but revised it fo yall RV people...please read dis shit wit a OPEN MIND...its been a long time but fuck it...and LEAVE FEEDBACK!!!
bang bang, naw dat aint my style... i'd rather see u suffer and hear screams in da background... my mental compacity full child... all i see is money green dats how i changed my style from tha neck down... i'll rip yo crew up... and have ya dramatized and limpin round here like you got beat down from tha tooth up... brain damage, now you gotta give ya bitch up... and im stabbin tonight but dont compare me to young buck... im different like tha foosh-nickins... or betta yet like how chi ali was fuckin wit dem stupid bitches... in a 6-4 steadly hittin switches... ridin on I-75 like im a chain gang chasin snitches... nothin is gone change here homie, im too far into dis... my last OM aint get play so now im takin aim and shit... GIVE FEEDBACK on dis nigga, im only uppin dis one one time... or maybe two times, besides battlin niggaz i was built to ryhme... so how bout you go and pick beef wit somebody else like 50 cent... fo i come through yo hood in da black van, black tent... { :shoot: rappin wit gunz nigga... :laugh: } |
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It Was Hot. I Would Really Be Feelin This If It Was A Audio. U Got Skillz, I Was Feelin Tha Barz. Not Really Many Punches In There, Just A Str8 Rhyme...good Shit..
Check Out Nok Fam, U Got Skillz...click Tha Link And Drop A Tryout, Or Sumthin, Or Put This Shit In There, And We'll Get Back At You |
^^iight...i'll get 2 dat...4real
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damn man yall beatin around da bush i posted two links and u still aint say if im in or not
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^^^damn........
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that must means NOOOOO..... as far as this piece go's.... nice drop word, straight flow * ya strongest point * but u aint have no punches or multis so this probley would sound better audio but still a good drop, feeling this drop word.... 7/10 keep doing ya thing.... code steel is watching u word....... |
alright...thanx...im watchin yall 2...lmao...more feedz please
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and damn...since i got 2 crews watchin my moves...guess i gotta post tha remix on here...it should be up on tha weekend...look 4 it!...4real
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I was entertained long enough to read the whole thing... so that gets you a 5 at least... lol
No but it was good and you show quite a bit of potential and fuck code steel... IE crews ain't never last very long... but I do admit they are great farm crews :) NOK... cheap nock off of a wack crew. but back to your open mic... I'll give it a 6.5/10 good work bro. |
thanx guy...much appreciated
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mo feed yall...get at tha kid :thumbup:
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i feelin this shit
u show a lot of potential good structure u need a lil more vocab but overall its good ill give it 8.5/10 |
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yea..... u can listen to one of my long time fam who been on my dick since i can remember having it.....lollol... but code steel is a tight crew & not my crew... *ecko crew* and NOK is a tight crew as-well... * those are the 2 new crews that will be on-top of things..... |
^^^yeah...im wit NOK now a days...get back at me wit more feedz
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uppin...lets get dis one movin yall...damn
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it was ok but u need ta upp your vocab quite a bit some of it fell off and it really didn't rhyme that much if u want help on vocab and how ta make it flow easier when ur putting an open mic together i could teach ya just let me know but i give this a 5/10 elevate
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ok ok
no D/R dis was pretty koo, i liked it mayn, nice shit fo real, u good dawg |
he's not that good but he's a newbie he's got an excuse stop dickridin' math
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^^^what tha fuck u look like callin me a newbie?...u a newbie too...*goes to HD's open mic*
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whoops sorry i was thinkin of someone else sorry i shoulda payed attention on that one
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its iight my nigga...~1~
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cool i didn't mean ta sound cocky or anything i know i ain't the best neither but it just was a mix-up nuthin more or less bout it
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its cool my nigga...no beef/hate
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im uppin dis shit too
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