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Massive 07-21-02 04:39 PM

Week 8 (1-1) Uniqk Vs (1-1) Lil Dallas
 
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Mystery~murdera 07-21-02 04:58 PM

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uNiQK 07-22-02 01:11 AM

check it...

Mystery~murdera 07-23-02 10:10 PM

I'ma wait for this nigga to post his verse then split him up real nice. Without feedin. Rep you gonna have one for the top 40 out of here.

uNiQK 07-24-02 11:40 PM

juss alil summin summin

Dallas win by popular demand..? Sorry but you lost this ballet..
I'll turn "dallas backwards" and let R. kelly toss this *sallad*...
many die in this game...and where ya from..death penalty comes often...
You think your "the shit"...cuz your always wit "pooh" like christopher robin...
you gave ya mic a "check" western union... look how long the mic took...
Chop off ya left leg so you could get off on the right foot...
You want imagery..?..fine...i'll rip your artieries so u cant pump blood...
siskel could *jerk off* to your album...but you wouldn't get a *thumb up*...
The difference is simple...Im the medias eye and u juss get mere looks...
Cuz uNiQK got *everybodys pic*...like school yearbooks...
Ya lines are like Metal in my "reign"...cuz if youve seen em..their rustin...
And you must be *Irish*...cuz in your mouth...my penis is *dublin*...

lol...jussed some humor to finish it off...
commence

Mystery~murdera 07-25-02 09:35 AM

in rap batts, you like a lobster in a crab shack... out of ya' place, that shit's just an apparent fact... get it togetha nigga, look at ya verse, you coherently whack... and I know this, I bustin that ass since way back... b4 the operation, b4 all that... I beat you like Tina, and bounced like yo rap career... if you was fear itself & came in stealth, still wouldn't be feared... victory you miles from, son you ain't near... I be the car, the headlights, you be the dear, get the picture here?... I'm fearin you ain't hearin this lyrical storm adhereing to yo' ass... betta duck and cover pray it to pass... Uniqk couldn't be street if he changed the name to concrete... which he should cuz his flow is stagnant... I'ma rip you loose so bad in the afterlife, your soul is turned away by Heaven's doctor for bein a faggot... sendin you mental anguish... get the dick out of yo anus, it'll help ya flow... too hard to spit wit ya head burried in pillow... still though, two niggas in Jersey shouldn't beef like this... but I had to, cuz you usin Winnie the Pooh and a cartoon diss... if you swung for victory wit that, on the real, big fuckin miss...

OFF~CeNTeR 07-25-02 09:45 AM

lol....litle dallas said he was gona wait or Unigk to post his verse and then wasnt gonna feed off him. It appears that Lil d's last line is playing off Uniqk verse...well done cock buffer.


Anyway, Vote=Uniqk
Uniqk's punches were hunny and the wordplay was nice. Punches hit harder and were more diretc. The R. Kelley line was nice. The flow was off at points in Lil ds verse w as well. it comes down to this.

Flow-Uniqk
Punches-Uniqk
Wordplay-Uniqk
Mulits/inners-N/A
Overall-Uniqk

Mystery~murdera 07-25-02 09:50 AM

seems like d/r or haten but 1-0

Intrin Sic 07-25-02 10:27 AM

uNiQK

- Chop off ya left leg so you could get off on the right foot...

I'm surprised I never heard that line before. Nice.

- And you must be *Irish*...cuz in your mouth...my penis is *dublin*...

Hotness.

LilDallas

- I be the car, the headlights, you be the dear, get the picture here?...

That could have been nice. But that was really forced.

- but I had to, cuz you usin Winnie the Pooh and a cartoon diss...
- if you swung for victory wit that, on the real, big fuckin miss...

That's real nice. But you said you wouldn't feed his verse?

No beef to Lil D, but all I really was feeling was the last two lines and those were both direct feeds. In battles I think it should be cool to feed off someone's verse, but you said that you wouldn't. So... my vote goes to uNiQK. Keep your head up.

KunG-FuzeD 07-25-02 11:26 AM

Flow-LilDallas
Punches-Uniqk
Wordplay-Uniqk
Multis-erm,uniqk
Overall-Uniqk

lil dallas,ya verse was okay,had a nice flow n all,but i think it needs to be set out a bit better. Had sum nice ideas, and sum iight wordplay npunches,but i didnt think they were had enuff to match uniqks verse overall.

VOTE = UNIQK

OnSlaught 07-25-02 12:16 PM

Uniqk had some nice punches, Lil didn't have very good punched, especially after feeding off of Uniqks verse, after he said he wouldn't lol

Uniqk flowed better, and Lil tried to Force alot of stuff in

My vote: Uniqk

burna 07-25-02 12:58 PM

uNiQK - Dallas win by popular demand..? Sorry but you lost this ballet..
I'll turn "dallas backwards" and let R. kelly toss this *sallad*...

good opening

The difference is simple...Im the medias eye and u juss get mere looks...
Cuz uNiQK got *everybodys pic*...like school yearbooks...

nice

Lil dallas- I be the car, the headlights, you be the dear, get the picture here?

had a good concept but didnt quite get the wording right
and that was it

uNiQK had better punches that hit harder, wordplay was better and overall uniqk won it

VOTE=UNIQK

uNiQK 07-25-02 01:09 PM

5-0...uNiQK..onwards

Shotta 07-25-02 03:06 PM

good battle, both came good, good flo for both, lil dallas had some aight punches:

victory you miles from, son you ain't near... I be the car, the headlights, you be the dear

but they didnt come so hard, so my vote goes to uniqk cuz he had nicer punches, which haf already been stated already.

vote:uniqk

kadafi 07-25-02 03:45 PM

Vote:~ UNIQK

basically the same reasons as everyone else.
dallas you said you wouldnt feed but you did.
uniqk showed room for improvement, but still
won this comfortably.

FlOW:~ LiL D
PuncheS:~ UniQk
wordplay: UniqK:~ especially this line

V V V V V

Quote:
Originally posted by uNiQK
And you must be *Irish*...cuz in your mouth...my penis is *dublin*...


/\ /\ /\

LMAO

keep elevatin both of y'all.

uNiQK 07-25-02 04:32 PM

7-0..me..onwards

rar one 07-26-02 04:52 AM

Uniqk took about every aspect of this.. Tha right foot part was kinda tight.. Flows were about even..

LiL your improving a grip, but still need work, You need better punchs...

flow-tied
punchs-un
word play-un
multis-un
vocab-un

also Uniqk
Quote:
siskel could *jerk off* to your album...but you wouldn't get a *thumb up*...

Maybe im playing into this to much, but I know ive seen that exact line on RB b4 it crashd...

neways vote= Uniqk

one

Mystery~murdera 07-26-02 06:26 AM

damn this is a slaughter but rep check what rar one just said about that exact line.

MC4Eyez 07-26-02 07:42 AM

Lil D...
That deer in the headlights line was pretty tight, but the rest was pretty standard.

Uniqk...
Not a bad verse. Very funny with some good multis. My favorite line is...

You think your "the shit"...cuz your always wit "pooh" like christopher robin...
That and the finishing line were great.

Vote: Uniqk

Peace

RealizE 07-26-02 11:19 AM

3rd vote...
BREAK DOWN!!!!

Dallas win by popular demand..? Sorry but you lost this ballet..
I'll turn "dallas backwards" and let R. kelly toss this *sallad*...
^^^^^iight opener
many die in this game...and where ya from..death penalty comes often...
You think your "the shit"...cuz your always wit "pooh" like christopher robin...
^^^^^LOL, nice
you gave ya mic a "check" western union... look how long the mic took...
Chop off ya left leg so you could get off on the right foot...
^^^^Played but LOL n-e-wayz
You want imagery..?..fine...i'll rip your artieries so u cant pump blood...
siskel could *jerk off* to your album...but you wouldn't get a *thumb up*...
^^^^^ummmmmm BLAH
The difference is simple...Im the medias eye and u juss get mere looks...
Cuz uNiQK got *everybodys pic*...like school yearbooks...
^^^^^^nice but, we dont care bout what peeps think bout ya, just throw punches.
Ya lines are like Metal in my "reign"...cuz if youve seen em..their rustin...
And you must be *Irish*...cuz in your mouth...my penis is *dublin*...
^^^^^^BLAH BLAH BLAH

NEXT!

in rap batts, you like a lobster in a crab shack... out of ya' place, that shit's just an apparent fact... get it togetha nigga,
^^^^^^BLAH opener
look at ya verse, you coherently whack... and I know this, I bustin that ass since way back... b4 the operation, b4 all that... I beat you like Tina, and bounced like yo rap career...
^^^^^ummmmmm no.
if you was fear itself & came in stealth, still wouldn't be feared... victory you miles from, son you ain't near... I be the car, the headlights, you be the dear, get the picture here?...
^^^^^^^nice....
I'm fearin you ain't hearin this lyrical storm adhereing to yo' ass... betta duck and cover pray it to pass... Uniqk couldn't be street if he changed the name to concrete... which he should cuz his flow is stagnant... I'ma rip you loose so bad in the afterlife, your soul is turned away by Heaven's doctor for bein a faggot...
^^^^^^6was this a line? KID CHANGE YOUR STYLE DAMN IT!
sendin you mental anguish... get the dick out of yo anus, it'll help ya flow... too hard to spit wit ya head burried in pillow...
^^^^^^Nice....pretty tight
still though, two niggas in Jersey shouldn't beef like this... but I had to, cuz you usin Winnie the Pooh and a cartoon diss... if you swung for victory wit that, on the real, big fuckin miss...
^^^^^^Played off his verse, and this line sucks for that.

Vote~Uniqk
Nicer punches, more direct, his wordplay was put in nicely and his verse kept me more interested. dallas came iight, you need to change that damn style seriously mayne. Pz

uNiQK 07-26-02 03:58 PM

DAMN..10-0..lol...me..onwards..and biting..i think not..i wasnt even on rb when the site crashed..think about it..there arent too many lines out there that people can use..i jussed happened to think of something that was already thought of..biting..i think not..coincedince..maybe...either that or ur on some dumb shit..

Massive 07-27-02 11:54 PM

UP

Massive 07-28-02 12:06 AM

UNIQK WINS
 
UNIQK- 2-1


LILDALLAS- 1-2


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