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Week 8 (0-1) Intrin Sic Vs (0-2) Dirtyboy 69
VERSES DUE FRIDAY MIDNIGHT
30 LINE MAX NEW RULE MUST SIGN IN BY WEDNESDAY,OR YOU LOSE MUST VOTE ON AT LEAST 3 OTHER BATTLES,OR 3 VOTES WILL BE DEDUCTED |
checkin in hope the dick ryding in this league stops people didn't even read my verse last week just voted for the other guy i'll be up tuesday 15 or 16 lines if you gonna match
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15-16? I'd do 30. But 16 it is.
Signing in. I hope you don't mind 0-3. |
here's my verse
Draft you to the Detroit loins just so you know your losin/ To really make you sick I’ll give you a tainted blood transfusion/ My sharp punches will leave so many holes in you people will think you’re a pastor/ Break your keyboard just so you can’t type and you lose a little faster/ The number of fags ryding dick on this site is disgusting/ To prevent it this week I’m removing your genitals so now I can win/ You’d only drop hot shit if your boy friend gave you gonerria in the ass/ Throw you through a thin plate of glass and watch you bleed to death far from fast/ You can’t win plus there’s only one way to get a split decision/ That’s only if I slip while operating on you and make too long of a incision/ Compare your shit to nursery rhymes and mother goose would be more complex/ You got weak volcab son using the same words over and over more then dmx/ I’ll bash you smash you and swell your eyes shut leave you with broken optics/ And your drops get slept on more then a room full of guys watching chick flicks/ |
We agreed on 16 lines. You wrote 14. Aight, I'll match it.
This kid is constantly losing.. his skills need some serious schooling He's a vet at RapBattles but he's still receiving daily bruisings I'm a be this cat's undoing.. leave this kid with a record to laugh at Spitting such played punches.. niggas see his verse and pass that Begging Repitwa to give him a reset.. I got him dropping in sweat I'm a lower this bitch faster than the stock market and the national debt Your verse dates back the way I've read it on every board in existence The way he recycles shit.. it's cause he's in need of assistance Reading his verse puts me to sleep in an instant.. so fuck this I present a better verse in less than a minute.. and I do it legit So fuck this bitch.. my punches commit the way they leaven you hit DirtyBoy added 69 to his name cause that's the only way he sees it You a bitch.. couldn't touch a pussy even though that's all he spits Weak lines, kid.. I'm a break you and leave you wishin you could resubmit Fuck it. |
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Feelin This..^ Both Came Pretty Even..But Intrin sic Came Better..With More Direct punches..Plus He Worded Shit Better..DrtyBoy Jus Had A Bunch Of Weak punches..None Stood Out..Both Had Okay Flowz Also..But intrin sic basically Took The Battle With The Line I Quoted..Keep elevatin..Pz.. |
i got intrin sic on this one. his punches were better and dirtyboy lines got repetitive. but it was an aiight battle
vote:intrin sic |
2-0 for him
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dirtyboy came decent but Intrin Sic just flat out beat him. More creative metaphors, better multi's and punches. vote=intrin sic |
Vote= Intrin Sic.
Dirtyboy..,.your verse sucked. The rhymescheme was horrible flow was off throughout the verse...punches were weak and played and whats with all the punches concerning "fast." Intrin Sic'c verse was ntohnig to brag about weither but his punches were more direct and hit harder. Had beter flow. Not a wonderful battle but Intrin Sic clearly has it. |
4-0
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vote intrin sic
Intrin's punches rocked dirtyboys 69 to a 96. Begging Repitwa to give him a reset.. I got him dropping in sweat I'm a lower this bitch faster than the stock market and the national debt that won the match |
5-0
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battle was horrible..and intrin sinc to me got this...but i think this was also a matter of D/R sorta cuz Dirty boys verse wasnt complete ass...its juss different styles from the voters..so ill give Dirty some credit..
VOTE: dirtyboy.. oh yea..the 69 in ur name is gay..take that numberie shit out |
"battle was horrible"
Fuck that. It wasn't horrible. Also, ain't no fucken dick riders here. So don't be a bitch. And if you say I fucking won this how would it be dick riders? Man, you are fucking stupid. |
ai't no dick riders shit sic you've had your ass on so many dicks in this battle you probably don't feel it anymore
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Vote= Intrin Sic
Better punchs, and wordplay.. I was feelin that duet line.. nothing else really stood out for me.. Dirt you came really simple to me.. more so than Intrin one |
You might try and claim dick riders if I knew anyone on this site, but I don't.
6-1 |
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lets break it down. Draft you to the Detroit loins just so you know your losin/ To really make you sick I’ll give you a tainted blood transfusion/ ^^^^sick lines are played, but a iight opener My sharp punches will leave so many holes in you people will think you’re a pastor/ Break your keyboard just so you can’t type and you lose a little faster/ ^^^^^^1st line could have been worded better, 2nd line was nice. The number of fags ryding dick on this site is disgusting/ To prevent it this week I’m removing your genitals so now I can win/ ^^^^^^Tight..... You’d only drop hot shit if your boy friend gave you gonerria in the ass/ Throw you through a thin plate of glass and watch you bleed to death far from fast/ ^^^^^^^Played You can’t win plus there’s only one way to get a split decision/ That’s only if I slip while operating on you and make too long of a incision/ ^^^^^^Nice, you need to shorten your bars kid. Compare your shit to nursery rhymes and mother goose would be more complex/ You got weak volcab son using the same words over and over more then dmx/ ^^^^^^^BLAH I’ll bash you smash you and swell your eyes shut leave you with broken optics/ And your drops get slept on more then a room full of guys watching chick flicks/ ^^^^^BLAH closer On to the next. This kid is constantly losing.. his skills need some serious schooling He's a vet at RapBattles but he's still receiving daily bruisings ^^^^Nice opener I'm a be this cat's undoing.. leave this kid with a record to laugh at Spitting such played punches.. niggas see his verse and pass that ^^^^^BLAH Begging Repitwa to give him a reset.. I got him dropping in sweat I'm a lower this bitch faster than the stock market and the national debt ^^^^^iight, worded horrible, a lil effective Your verse dates back the way I've read it on every board in existence The way he recycles shit.. it's cause he's in need of assistance ^^^^^^iight Reading his verse puts me to sleep in an instant.. so fuck this I present a better verse in less than a minute.. and I do it legit ^^^^^^BLAH BLAH BLAH So fuck this bitch.. my punches commit the way they leaven you hit DirtyBoy added 69 to his name cause that's the only way he sees it ^^^^^^^OK, not really effective You a bitch.. couldn't touch a pussy even though that's all he spits Weak lines, kid.. I'm a break you and leave you wishin you could resubmit ^^^^^^BLAH closer Vote~dirtyboy Better punches and nicer wordplay, both need to practice though, and shorten ya damn lines yall. |
Vote - Intrin Sic.
Better All Around Verse, Was Not The Best - But Had What It Took To Win. And, Ya Shouldn't Be Hating On Dirtboy, He Threw Out A Decent Verse. Just Needed A Couple Hard Hitters. |
Punches: Intrinsic
Flow: Intrinsic Metaphors: Dirtyboy Multi's: n/a Wordplay: Dirtyboy Vote: Intrinsic I think this was a close battle even though intrinsic took over as far as punches & flow, & dirtyboy dominated the metaphor & wordplay category. Both had some good verses, but I feel intrinsic slighty won because he was more direct & had better punches. |
7-2 or something like that for the otehr guy uppin for some real votes
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INTRIN SIC WINS
INTRIN SIC- 1-2
DIRTYBOY69- 0-3 |
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