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Week 8 (0-0) Burna Vs (0-0) Shotta
VERSES DUE FRIDAY MIDNIGHT
30 LINE MAX NEW RULE MUST SIGN IN BY WEDNESDAY,OR YOU LOSE MUST VOTE ON AT LEAST 3 OTHER BATTLES,OR 3 VOTES WILL BE DEDUCTED |
checkin in....Shotta its a rap for u
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haha ok checkin in
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here we go....
Oh shit I think its over for you burna// When u read dis, I will haf u signin ‘I will survive’ like you was tina turner// Come on son you like a yung driver, still on ya learnas// An when I decide ta kill this cat, yu wont see me charged wid attempted murder// He a gay nigga always spittin an actin like a fruit// Sensitive thug, cud probably catch him cryin over a book of chicken soup// Teeth are rotten cuz u doin too much bitin// My advise to you burna, is dat next year u take a course in Creative writin// Den come an see me// An just watch tha nine leave ya body spinnin like a CD// Only whips yu ride got bells on it// Soun like tha intro to special delivery, it got bells on it// When you think of Shotta you think of getting shot// When ya gurl think of Shotta she think of getting fuct// Beatin me dog you movin away further and further// Like mah neck and mah wrist dog, you getting colder an colder// Son yu strait garbage// An I aint talking bout Nintendo when I say im loadin a cartridge// Been playin football from lets say three// Dis cat gotta ta study hard when he was goin face me, im like tha S.A.T// Fagget cat probably got thongs underneath// An tha only time he experience pleasure is when his moms underneath// Im telling you, you got matched up wid da wrong nigga// Dis will be tha last time you fuck wid Shotta aka J.A. Skilaz// imma see if i can find three battles to vote on rite now... LAtah |
lets do dis
ima vet spittin out there kid, u cant beat those// only thing u beat is ya meat in ya street clothes// if you wished shotta it wouldnt be hope// even if ya name was "cocaine" u still wouldnt be dope// ya tech dont squirt// ill get charged wit cruelty to animals when i shoot da rhino of ya ecko shirt// betta watch out kid when u see me spittin, run// i got trigga itchin gunz while u got insufficient funds// ill shoot u kid wit no hesitation// so when ya t-shirt wet it aint gon be from prespiration// try on these bullets and see if u fit this// neva "no-showed" but shotta is still on da bitch list// u wunna talk about gunz come on kid i got those// and when i say shells i aint talkin bout tacos// shotta u neva bust ya gun like a sworn cop// u a bastard, closest thing u eva came to a dad was "corn pops"// u dont get money, come kid lets be fa rill// closest thing u eva came to a mil.....is A.M.I.L.// ya verse was wack shotta..dam i hate duds// i'll put da burna to ya mouth son and burn ya taste buds// get over it, we do not mix// when i put da burna to ya feet is da only time u'll have "hot kix" that guy on my shoulder, tellin me to blast it// ill put da burna to ya chest dog, and turn u into ashes// das rite ill take ya soul// even if u had a x-box remote, u couldnt take control// forget about that cocky stuff// even if i lit ya rhymes on fire, they wouldnt be "hot" enough// these mags will blow ya chest away// and i got hollow tips, so u could put dat vest away// holla at ya boy |
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This battle was weak as fuck....no quotables from this shit....
I give it to Burna cause he was less as weak.... Vote=Burna This shit was still borin' as hell and I would've just dissed both verses but there's a rule against that and so I voted... Burna |
both battles were kinda simple on the volcab but strong with punches i'd have to give my vote to shotta though just hit more personal
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Vote\Burna
Both verses absolutley sucked. Flow was off in both verses, no punches...I couldv sworn this was a played line/filler expo. Both verses were elementary as fuck. Burna edges this out because his lines sucked a lil less. But he used, if youre name was cocaine you ewouldnt be dope? are you fuckin kiddin me!?!? you cant think of anything better!?!? You guys should drop out of this and go improve....werk out yah style, et some complexity and then return to challenge |
Eh.. kinda a weak battle.. Burna came harder..Metaphors were better, punchs were harder...
Both need work tho on hard ish, and your rhyme schemes...Damn you two really need work with those to accually flow.. Quote:
Took it for me.. one Vote=Burna |
Shotta...
Gloria Gaynor performed "I Will Survive" didn't she? Anyway, your verse was pretty simple. Could have used some multis for flow purposes. The most glaring flaw was that there was minimal wordplay. The exception was... An I aint talking bout Nintendo when I say im loadin a cartridge Eh. At least it was an attempt. Keep working at it. Burna... Not a great verse, but a little better than Shotta's. There were some nice multis, and some decent wordplay such as... ya tech dont squirt// ill get charged wit cruelty to animals when i shoot da rhino of ya ecko shirt// That line won the battle for you. Vote: Burna Peace |
yall are crazy, i dont see how the battle was weak, i kno some of my verses werent that great, but i kno the battle wasnt weak.
1-4 uppin for votes |
Mc4eyez, tina turner also sang dat song. look it up.
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4th vote.( i'm such a nice guy)
BREAK DOWN!!!! Oh shit I think its over for you burna// When u read dis, I will haf u signin ‘I will survive’ like you was tina turner// ^^^nice opener, but does tina really sing that? i thought it was someone else, oh well, nice. Come on son you like a yung driver, still on ya learnas// An when I decide ta kill this cat, yu wont see me charged wid attempted murder// ^^^^^^^BLAH He a gay nigga always spittin an actin like a fruit// Sensitive thug, cud probably catch him cryin over a book of chicken soup// ^^^^^nice, Teeth are rotten cuz u doin too much bitin// My advise to you burna, is dat next year u take a course in Creative writin// ^^^^^LOL, good suggestion Den come an see me// An just watch tha nine leave ya body spinnin like a CD// ^^^blah Only whips yu ride got bells on it// Soun like tha intro to special delivery, it got bells on it// ^^^^^^^ummmmm no When you think of Shotta you think of getting shot// When ya gurl think of Shotta she think of getting fuct// ^^^^^^nope Beatin me dog you movin away further and further// Like mah neck and mah wrist dog, you getting colder an colder// ^^^^^^^BLAH Son yu strait garbage// An I aint talking bout Nintendo when I say im loadin a cartridge// ^^^^^^6nice, Been playin football from lets say three// Dis cat gotta ta study hard when he was goin face me, im like tha S.A.T// ^^^^^^BLAH Fagget cat probably got thongs underneath// An tha only time he experience pleasure is when his moms underneath// ^^^^^^6stop tryin to rhyme with the same words Im telling you, you got matched up wid da wrong nigga// Dis will be tha last time you fuck wid Shotta aka J.A. Skilaz// ^^^^^^nope NEXT!!! ima vet spittin out there kid, u cant beat those// only thing u beat is ya meat in ya street clothes// ^^^^^nope if you wished shotta it wouldnt be hope// even if ya name was "cocaine" u still wouldnt be dope// ^^^^played ya tech dont squirt// ill get charged wit cruelty to animals when i shoot da rhino of ya ecko shirt// ^^^^^^^nice...very nice betta watch out kid when u see me spittin, run// i got trigga itchin gunz while u got insufficient funds// ^^^^nope ill shoot u kid wit no hesitation// so when ya t-shirt wet it aint gon be from prespiration// ^^^^^iight try on these bullets and see if u fit this// neva "no-showed" but shotta is still on da bitch list// ^^^^^naw u wunna talk about gunz come on kid i got those// and when i say shells i aint talkin bout tacos// ^^^^^iight shotta u neva bust ya gun like a sworn cop// u a bastard, closest thing u eva came to a dad was "corn pops"// ^^^^^^^^^HELL NAW, get that gay ish outta here u dont get money, come kid lets be fa rill// closest thing u eva came to a mil.....is A.M.I.L.// ^^^^^^^nope ya verse was wack shotta..dam i hate duds// i'll put da burna to ya mouth son and burn ya taste buds// ^^^^^naw get over it, we do not mix// when i put da burna to ya feet is da only time u'll have "hot kix" ^^^^iight that guy on my shoulder, tellin me to blast it// ill put da burna to ya chest dog, and turn u into ashes// ^^^^^^fuck tha burna's das rite ill take ya soul// even if u had a x-box remote, u couldnt take control// ^^^^^^yada yada yada forget about that cocky stuff// even if i lit ya rhymes on fire, they wouldnt be "hot" enough// ^^^^^PLAYED these mags will blow ya chest away// and i got hollow tips, so u could put dat vest away// ^^^^nope vote~burna |
yall think it was wack cuz yall used to dat bullshit, yall dont know anything else. dis is suttin yall dont kno about
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Vote - Burna.
Burna - You Had Those Street Lines .. Shit That Wins Freestyle Battles. But Yo, This Is The Net - pEEPs Going To Hate Cuz They Think You Spitting Shit That You Know Nothing About. So Stick To Internet Lines, And Leave Street Lines For Real Life. Feel Me? |
the battle was ok but i was feelin burna verse more,he hit harder wit his punches,and i only felt a few lines from shotta
vote-burna |
gay 1-7 uppin!!!!!!
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"if you wished shotta it wouldnt be hope//
even if ya name was "cocaine" u still wouldnt be dope//" some the best lines in the battle not that great of a battle but burna gets it for a better overall verse, all aspects over came vote=burna 1 |
yo this battle wasn't weak is was kinda funny
ayo Oh shit I think its over for you burna// When u read dis, I will haf u signin ‘I will survive’ like you was tina turner// Come on son you like a yung driver, still on ya learnas// when I decide ta kill this cat, yu wont see me charged wid attempted murder// lmao, when i read "learnas" that made me laugh so hard lol i don't even kno why, that tina turner shit was coo too Son yu strait garbage// An I aint talking bout Nintendo when I say im loadin a cartridge// that was ill and also funny next guy if you wished shotta it wouldnt be hope// even if ya name was "cocaine" u still wouldnt be dope// that shit was played mo the grand theft auto dawg still was funny tho shotta u neva bust ya gun like a sworn cop// u a bastard, closest thing u eva came to a dad was "corn pops"// THAT MADE ME LAUGH LIKE A MUTHAFUCKA LOL HAHAHA BURNA WON FOR MAKING ME LAUGH SO HARD |
yea i feel wut u sayin i.e., das wut im talkin bout, i guess i gotta swithch to "internet flow"
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BURNA WINS
BURNA- 1-0
SHOTTA- 0-1 |
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