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50Cal. 02-05-05 05:00 AM

D.J EM SCE vs C.A.L.I
 
Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 400

Check in by: 02-05-05 at 05:30 AM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

Status 02-05-05 05:03 AM

waiting for you to check in............bitch..dont duck your own battle

System 02-05-05 05:05 AM

C.A.L.I has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-05-05 05:05 AM.

System 02-05-05 05:06 AM

d.j em sce has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-05-05 05:06 AM.

Status 02-05-05 05:10 AM

how many lines..........6-10...is that good....ye sor no....

50Cal. 02-05-05 05:25 AM

Ask this bitch he thought his 'Class' was 'Sic' and we cured it
Cuz his hardest lines is just dried up poop basically old birdshit
You fell off bitch look most ya personals and disses is played
Punches missing all off like the...like the crooked ass line in ya fade!
Claim he a M.C (em sce) but spelled it all wrong
Cuz the truth is he softer then old Patti Labelle songs
Best dickrider on rapverse somebody quick hand him a saddle
Cuz what kind of 'D.J' or 'EM SCE' ducks a AUDIO BATTLE!:nono:
Im tired of you running round telling everybody you dope
Answer this if you so nice..why you gotta beg for votes?!
Wasnt in no way 'CREATIVE' so you changed ya name back
Cuz even ya avy looking confused 'like hol on.....
HIP-HOP under this name dont match!!'

50Cal. 02-05-05 05:26 AM

just fucking drop bitch dont duck i already dropped accept the fucking battle homo

Status 02-05-05 05:26 AM

Why did caliph make a new user on RV just to change his name again?


Because caliph got merked, denied, and all his battles got slept
We where all elevating except him so he asked how to become a vet
Know one knew caliph so he began feeling sorrow and grief
That is probably the reason he started all of this unnecessary beef
All the facts led to this anonymous man to disappear from RV
Empires anger would grow, once I kicked him out of my army
Come to think of it, he tried to harm me; he thought he was the nicest
Too many loses headed him in the direction of an identity crisis
An he’s “Strictly audio” because if he was ja rule he still wont murder inc
End of discussion, CALI your life has just been wrapped up in a link


Ok CALIPH, I mean EMPIRE, mean CALI, I mean HERB let see who the real vet is

OK if you dont understand a punch or a personal dont vote..or just pm me and i will answer any questions

IF YOU READ THE OPENER AND THE WORDS DOWN THE SIDE....YOU WILL FIND A HIDDEN BAR... IT GOES LIKE THISVVVVVVVVV

Why did caliph make a new user on RV just to change his name again?
.......................because we all know that empires come to an end!




all personals are true....

50Cal. 02-05-05 05:29 AM

^i didnt change my user asshole i just changed my name hence my record idiot

Status 02-05-05 05:29 AM

your verse was aight but i think i got this.......what you think

50Cal. 02-05-05 05:33 AM

^lol sun seriously you know your lieing i owned you and thats my word it was a keystyle i predict a k.o my way within 2 days

Status 02-05-05 05:35 AM

maybe if you pm for votes or if you get d/r...i suspect d/r and i bet you that i will get all vet votes and you wil get newbie voters...

iamthatdude87 02-05-05 05:39 AM

Voted For: C.A.L.I

this battle was coo nuff sed i liked how creative dj was but i think he fell off in his verse flow was ok but nno line really made me say like ohhhhhhhhh....ont the other hand cali came gud nice punches i esp like crooked ass line in the fade i was like ohhhh lol u overall had better punches and personls gud job son

50Cal. 02-05-05 05:42 AM

^one vet vote homo dj i dont get newbs asshole all my battles are 400 posts and better you win from newbs by beating them herb

Status 02-05-05 05:44 AM

what herbs have i beat..if oyu talking aout that sand guy he said that he was a vet on RB.........and he was tlkaing mad shit so i owned him....uppin for some real vet votes...

blitz 02-05-05 05:55 AM

Voted For: C.A.L.I

close battle im going to have to give my vote to c.a.l.i both came hard with persnals and punches hard battle to vote on very close but c.a.l.i just take this with the punches and persnals dj u came good 2 i like the start word thing but u used to much explaining took away the effect of the verse a bit so i thin c.a.l.i took this came hard but both keep doing ya thing

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

DQ 02-05-05 09:42 AM

Voted For: C.A.L.I

d.j em sce

Because caliph got merked, denied, and all his battles got slept
We where all elevating except him so he asked how to become a vet
^nice opener

Know one knew caliph so he began feeling sorrow and grief
That is probably the reason he started all of this unnecessary beef
^could've been worded better to hit harder

All the facts led to this anonymous man to disappear from RV
Empires anger would grow, once I kicked him out of my army
^nope...

Come to think of it, he tried to harm me; he thought he was the nicest
Too many loses headed him in the direction of an identity crisis
^last line okay,not feeling first

An he’s “Strictly audio” because if he was ja rule he still wont murder inc
End of discussion, CALI your life has just been wrapped up in a link
^like first line,second was just to end it...

Overall good battle but you could've worded some things better so they hit harder.Punches n personals were good,vocab was nice and structure was cool. Had your flow on lock but I think you could've come harder...


C.A.L.I


Ask this bitch he thought his 'Class' was 'Sic' and we cured it
Cuz his hardest lines is just dried up poop basically old birdshit
^hehe,nice opener

You fell off bitch look most ya personals and disses is played
Punches missing all off like the...like the crooked ass line in ya fade!
^good good..

Claim he a M.C (em sce) but spelled it all wrong
Cuz the truth is he softer then old Patti Labelle songs
^good set-up...

Best dickrider on rapverse somebody quick hand him a saddle
Cuz what kind of 'D.J' or 'EM SCE' ducks a AUDIO BATTLE!
^hehe,oh so true...lol...

Im tired of you running round telling everybody you dope
Answer this if you so nice..why you gotta beg for votes?!
^haha,nice...

Wasnt in no way 'CREATIVE' so you changed ya name back
Cuz even ya avy looking confused 'like hol on.....

HIP-HOP under this name dont match!!'
^dope closer

Dope battle,had hardhitting personals and punches in there,vocab was good and structure was tight.Definately feeling your flow, my favo line was the one with the audio battle. It seemed as if you had a more aggressive tone to your verse compared to his so that's why my vote goes to you...

50Cal. 02-05-05 02:09 PM

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Status 02-05-05 05:25 PM

these seems as if they are all d/r votes..........

Da Vinci 02-05-05 06:51 PM

This was feedback posted for d.j em sce
 
Hot battle shoudl be a good one.
Good Luck to both

50Cal. 02-06-05 04:06 AM

Sun You Lost Your Verse Is Wack And Thats Word Get Over Yourself Your Punches Were Wack And Played Stop Being A Fag And Realize Im Better Then You Stupid Fucking Homo Uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp

Status 02-06-05 04:16 AM

your not better than me......in my opinion personals win battles so that is why all i had was personals..........plus i got writers block......just got that shit last week.....and i was mad stressin over hella shit


uppin for some votes...

word is bond~

~Lady Fiya~ 02-06-05 02:09 PM

Voted For: C.A.L.I

Cali-
Ask this bitch he thought his 'Class' was 'Sic' and we cured it
Cuz his hardest lines is just dried up poop basically old birdshit
^^lol... best opener..
You fell off bitch look most ya personals and disses is played
Punches missing all off like the...like the crooked ass line in ya fade!
^^nice personal.. lmfao
Claim he a M.C (em sce) but spelled it all wrong
Cuz the truth is he softer then old Patti Labelle songs
one of ya best bars so far.. pretty good..
Best dickrider on rapverse somebody quick hand him a saddle
Cuz what kind of 'D.J' or 'EM SCE' ducks a AUDIO BATTLE!
no this is the best bar. lmao.. nice personal LMFAO
Im tired of you running round telling everybody you dope
Answer this if you so nice..why you gotta beg for votes?!
^^decent personal..
Wasnt in no way 'CREATIVE' so you changed ya name back
Cuz even ya avy looking confused 'like hol on.....

HIP-HOP under this name dont match!!'
Terrible closer........ blah this was wack..

Overall Your verse stood out with the infinite personals.. you played his name all over it. Real Hard-hittin lines fa real. and creative at the least.. best battle i seen you drop so far.. this was sic.

DJ Em sce:
Because caliph got merked, denied, and all his battles got slept
We where all elevating except him so he asked how to become a vet
^^this was not effective what was the point?
Know one knew caliph so he began feeling sorrow and grief
That is probably the reason he started all of this unnecessary beef
aight personal, well not really... dunno your point of this one either, fa real this is pointless ATTACK SOMETIME SOON
All the facts led to this anonymous man to disappear from RV
Empires anger would grow, once I kicked him out of my army
^^aight you picked up on this one, nice meta not bad
Come to think of it, he tried to harm me; he thought he was the nicest
Too many loses headed him in the direction of an identity crisis
^^nice personal.. coulda been worded better tho
An he’s “Strictly audio” because if he was ja rule he still wont murder inc
End of discussion, CALI your life has just been wrapped up in a link
^^aight the murder inc is pretty played now.. second half was aight....

Aight creativite i expected you to come way harder than this. Cali killed you wit personals and he had better punches this time..

V/ Cali

Status 02-06-05 02:13 PM

yes....but i was really counting on my creativity..to win this...its like oyu guys are ignoring the fact that i made up a hidden bar.....and actually took the time to make it say somehting down the side......wtf...

~Lady Fiya~ 02-06-05 02:23 PM

i seen that and that was creative BUT that didn't help your verse so i didn't even have to mention the hidden message you had along the side.. i didn't find that effective at all.. no hate, either.. just sayin cuz i seen you drop real dope shit way better than this one you did.. and yea i did expect way more outta ya verse than that... no b/s just truth.. i'm out..
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N.Tavarez 02-06-05 03:11 PM

This was feedback posted for C.A.L.I
 
damn i sense the animosity....wow!
good shit both

50Cal. 02-06-05 04:33 PM

Dj Thats No Em Sce You Lost Stop Crying Your Shit Was Wacked Nobody Cares Bout The Name Shit Down The Side Who Gives A Fuck?it Wasnt Dope Or A Personal And Its Been Done Before What Did You Do So Dope?nothing Your Punches Were Weak And Played:nono:

50Cal. 02-09-05 07:37 PM

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Magic5 02-09-05 07:44 PM

This was feedback posted for C.A.L.I
 
I just wanna check the polls..

CAUSE IM GANGSTA!

M-Eazy 02-12-05 05:35 PM

This was feedback posted for C.A.L.I
 
checkin polls.
i dont know who took this one...ima break it down
opener-DJ
personals-DJ
punches-CALI
metas-none
wordplay-cali
structure-DJ
closer-cali

THATS ALL I SEEN IN THIS ONE. I DONT KNOW WHO GOT THIS ONE, THIS WAS A CLOSE BATTLE. I WAS FEELIN BOTH THA DROPS
DJ-I WAS FEELIN YO VERSE. OF COURSE U TOOK THA PERSONALS CATEGORY. U HAD TRUTH BEHIND YO VERSE, AND THIS WAS A REAL BATTLE, BUT IF IT WASNT TEXT, U WOULDVE REALLY TOOK IT. I WAS FEELIN YO STRUCTURE, I THINK U CAME HARDER WIT THAT, AND ELEVATED ALOT,BUT I WASNT FEELIN HOW U JUST FOCUSED ON UR PERSONALS, AND THATS IT, U SHOULDVE CAME HARDER AND FOCUSED MORE ON PUNCHES AND OTHER SHIT...ELEVATE WIT THAT
CALI-U HAD SOME ORIGINAL SHIT IN THERE, AND I WAS FEELIN THAT. I WASNT FEELIN YO STRUCTURE, IT DIED DOWN IN THA MIDDLE OF UR VERSE, AND U WAS FALLIN OFF WIT IT WEN IT GOT TO THA END. ELEVATE ON THAT, BUT I THINK U CAME WAYY HARDER IN PUNCHES AND WORDPLAY AND SHIT. YO CLOSER WAS NICE, BUT NOT ALL UR LINES WERE NICE LIKE THAT, I THINK IF U WOULDVE CAME MORE CONSISTENT IN THIS ONE, U WOULDVE GOT THA VOTE FROM ME. ELEVATE ON THAT
OVERALL-I WAS FEELIN THIS BATTLE. I THINK IT WAS A NICE BATTLE, AND NECK 2 NECK, I DONT REALLY KNO WHO TOOK THIS ONE. SRY, I CANT VOTE ON THIS ONE, BUT I LEFT REAL FEEDBACK, SO IT WOULD BE APPRECIATED IF U WOULD DO THA SAME, OR EVEN VOTE ON ONE OF THA BATTLES IN SIG...


~PEACE~

M-Eazy 02-12-05 05:37 PM

Yall Niggas Dont Kno How To Vote...that Bar Breakdown Shit Aint Votin. That Aint Tellin Why U Vote For Who U Voted For...yall Niggas Are Idiots...


*guess I'll Up This Again*

50Cal. 02-19-05 12:22 AM

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**GHOSTE** 02-19-05 11:51 PM

This was feedback posted for C.A.L.I
 
check pollz.......................................

50Cal. 02-21-05 12:05 PM

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MaRVJay 02-24-05 03:09 PM

This was feedback posted for C.A.L.I
 
You fell off bitch look most ya personals and disses is played
Punches missing all off like the...like the crooked ass line in ya fade!
^^LMAOOOOOOOOOOOO OH SHIT DAT WAS FUNNY WOW........

50Cal. 02-24-05 04:13 PM

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Dirty Nigga 02-24-05 04:27 PM

Voted For: d.j em sce

C.A.L.I:
Ask this bitch he thought his 'Class' was 'Sic' and we cured it
Cuz his hardest lines is just dried up poop basically old birdshit
^^
Not really feeling the old birdshit line, seemed kinda elementary an not very witty

You fell off bitch look most ya personals and disses is played
Punches missing all off like the...like the crooked ass line in ya fade!
^^^
not bad, personal kinda hit, nice wordplay

Claim he a M.C (em sce) but spelled it all wrong
Cuz the truth is he softer then old Patti Labelle songs
^^
patti labelle line was nice lol

Best dickrider on rapverse somebody quick hand him a saddle
Cuz what kind of 'D.J' or 'EM SCE' ducks a AUDIO BATTLE
^^
nice shit too, nothing special, but it was alright, pretty decent personal again

Im tired of you running round telling everybody you dope
Answer this if you so nice..why you gotta beg for votes?!
^^^
naaaw, not feeling that, the flow was there, but it was kinda basic

Wasnt in no way 'CREATIVE' so you changed ya name back
Cuz even ya avy looking confused 'like hol on.....

HIP-HOP under this name dont match!!'
^^^
pretty decent closer, nothin really that special, but it hit

I expect better from you C.A.L.I, wordplay was decebnt, an the flow like always, but ya lacked creativity in most of ya verse, it was all kindas basic disses that alot of emcees would have thought of, an i ex[pect with your record ta be alot more creative.

DJ:
Because caliph got merked, denied, and all his battles got slept
We where all elevating except him so he asked how to become a vet
^^^
Nice flow, an its pretty decent for an opener

Know one knew caliph so he began feeling sorrow and grief
That is probably the reason he started all of this unnecessary beef
^^^
Naw, not really feeling it, i was feeling the build up line, but the leading up personal wasnt nice, could have worded it better, even tho he does like ta hate alot....but he'll admit that so yeah lol


All the facts led to this anonymous man to disappear from RV
Empires anger would grow, once I kicked him out of my army
^^^
Nice personal, hit kinda hard...


Come to think of it, he tried to harm me; he thought he was the nicest
Too many loses headed him in the direction of an identity crisis
^^^
wasnt feeling the build up line, but the personal hit real hard, it flowed well an i was really feelin it...


An he’s “Strictly audio” because if he was ja rule he still wont murder inc
End of discussion, CALI your life has just been wrapped up in a link
^^^
Best bar of the whole battle...
real nice meta in the build up line, an ya wrapped it up with the link line, nice shit man

DJ Gets my vote cause his personals hit real hard, an you can tell he put alot of effort into it, where as cali was a better flow ta his verse, but in places it was way too basic, i expected better an more creativity from cali, but still....Cant take nothin away from DJ, he came hard with personals an in my opinnon he gets the win..

THIS IS NOT A HATE VOTE CALI, i'm telling it how i see it, not how yousee it, or anybody else, how i see it, an sorry but this wasnt your best, but it was still alright, DJ just hit with those personals, good shit y'all an no hate

Peace

Status 02-24-05 04:29 PM

upppin this shit.................word...i got a vote....finally someone .,...damn i wonder howcome buck shot wasnt D/ring Cali like all of these other kids....?????

50Cal. 02-25-05 12:50 PM

^stupid idiot me and him got beef homo thats why he voted for you hes mad i just k.oed his bum ass dumb fag uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp

Dirty Nigga 02-25-05 12:53 PM

^^^
Cant you read? i said it WASNT a hate vote, i saw DJ's thread about his record, an you talkin shit ta him, so i figured i peeped the battle, you have NO VOCAB, You havwe NO WIT, Your punches dont hit hard at all, an you used bird shit as a metaphore, your personals was tight, i explained why i voted enuff, an SINCE YOU BEAT ME I'VE EVEN VOTED FOR YOU, I just liked DJ's verse better cause it was MUCH MORE Creative, stop being a bitch for once in your life an take a vote against you like a man


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