Invektive vs dex
 

Battle Rules:

6 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

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Dex has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-06-05 08:48 PM.

Invektive has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-06-05 08:57 PM.

I wanted a battle but got 60mins and 6 lines
Your busy packing shit rhymes to spit in the nick of time
Your rhyme pads lookin whiter than a line of coke
Only battled herbz thus far, now to dex you’ll just choke
Transferring a dictionary is how your betting to spin
Only thing phixional here is you getting the win

Dex sees himself in the near future.......you know this dudes confused when
he claims he'll be one of RV's top text heads ....nah you seein optical illusions
you never beat nobody with skill...your newbies slain list...who could be next?
you see dex...losing for you is simply a repetitive thing...its just a mear reflex
your gayness reflects off your signature....you thought RV would see past it?
you just erase bizzy's name.......and secretly place yourself in your sig faggot

uppin for the win..................................

Voted For: Invektive

I wanted a battle but got 60mins and 6 lines
Your busy packing shit rhymes to spit in the nick of time
ok multis, but nothin more than that
Your rhyme pads lookin whiter than a line of coke
Only battled herbz thus far, now to dex you’ll just choke
heard the "white as coke" stuff alot, no punch or anythin in the second line
Transferring a dictionary is how your betting to spin
Only thing phixional here is you getting the win
i dont get the setup, but nice personal to end it.... pretty nice closer


Dex sees himself in the near future.......you know this dudes confused when
he claims he'll be one of RV's top text heads ....nah you seein optical illusions
haha.... nice opener, especially since cats in the head were tellin him it wont happen, too
you never beat nobody with skill...your newbies slain list...who could be next?
you see dex...losing for you is simply a repetitive thing...its just a mear reflex
nice multis, and theres alil punch in there, but not great
your gayness reflects off your signature....you thought RV would see past it?
you just erase bizzy's name.......and secretly place yourself in your sig faggot
blah closer, its ok but not creative, but u bring the multis into this bar too and made it an ok bar with that

Overall Invektive i think edged this out with his opener and his second bar had nice multis and a decent punch... dex needs to elevate alil bit too...

This was feedback posted for Dex
 

lmaoo y do u even rap anymore fam...uz a snitch gettin niggaz dqed..now u gettin merked by new niggaz

uppin for the win........................................

yous gotta obey the rules silly herb.

Oh and if im gettin merked so bad, why didnt you vote?

uppin for this

uppin for the win.................................

I think you took this fella. Good verse. I should have done my homework like you

Voted For: Invektive

good battle to both but the vote is for Inv

Explanation:

Punches is what won this dex good punches but not as hard as Inv they seemed a lil original to (my same prob :( )
Flow on both sides where good i kept in tune with ease
Structure both a lil tipsy but equal also (another prob of mine)

Inv bes line:
your gayness reflects off your signature....you thought RV would see past it?
you just erase bizzy's name.......and secretly place yourself in your sig faggot
(Hard hittin punch, liked it)

Dex bes line:
Your rhyme pads lookin whiter than a line of coke
Only battled herbz thus far, now to dex you’ll just choke
(ight, descient)
but Dex ya didnt come as hard as u usually do nuttin really coulda hurt him it was all simple stuff

I give Inv a 8/10 for the punches n flow
I give Dex a 6/10 for his flow

Dex throw them punches u will be a force to be recond wit yo

Not hatin Fams , Jus votin

^^^yo thanks for the honest vote.......uppin again.......thanks for the props also dex....much appreciated

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Voted For: Invektive

[Font=Arial Narrow]you never beat nobody with skill...your newbies slain list...who could be next?
you see dex...losing for you is simply a repetitive thing...its just a mear reflex
nice punch, hard hitting and it connected
8/10

vs

Nothing

uh Dex, here it doesnt seem like you was even trying, ur punches were weak like whoa, and ur structure + flow was aight but those punches need to up...

overall ivek too this one

^^^yo thanks for voting......uppin again.............

Voted For: Invektive

i liked this battle

Dex:
-I wanted a battle but got 60mins and 6 lines
Your busy packing shit rhymes to spit in the nick of time
=solid opener, first line coulda used some work 7/10
-Your rhyme pads lookin whiter than a line of coke
Only battled herbz thus far, now to dex you’ll just choke
=eh, wasnt really feelin it, little choppy 6/10
-Transferring a dictionary is how your betting to spin
Only thing phixional here is you getting the win
=sweet closer, best line 8/10

total: 21/30....nice spit man, kinda weak with the punches coming off, good personals/multis, but vocab was lacking, flow little choppy, and didnt really come out too hard, therefore, punches didnt really hit hard, but overall, not too bad of drop

Invektive, nice
-Dex sees himself in the near future.......you know this dudes confused when
he claims he'll be one of RV's top text heads ....nah you seein optical illusions
=nice play with that thread, good opener 8/10
-you never beat nobody with skill...your newbies slain list...who could be next?
you see dex...losing for you is simply a repetitive thing...its just a mear reflex
=best line here, loved the seoncd one 8/10
-your gayness reflects off your signature....you thought RV would see past it?
you just erase bizzy's name.......and secretly place yourself in your sig faggot
=haha, nice play with the sig too 8/10

total: 24/30....overall, solid drop man, personal were slick, came hard and made your punches more effective, good plays/connections in there (thread, sig, etc), good use of vocab and nice flow, treat to read, haha, keep it up man

---vote: Invektive....better personals, harder punches, creativity and smoother flow...wird

Voted For: Invektive

structure pretty close but yours looks cleaner
flow tie both had pretty good flow no work needed
vocab yours by far dex verse was too simple he needs to up his vocab a little bit
punches once again im giving it to you dex came wack nothing really hard hitting in my opinon work on finding some good hard hitting personals
good battle to both but u got it easily