(0-0) .Mixtape. Vs ub2ez (0-0)
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ok..i'm checkin in
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im here check in........
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my verse....
This boy says im too easy , u dont know how who the fuck i am u fuckin beezy ...
This kid doesnt know wht the hell he be doing thats y in his battles the croud will always be booing Go write to ya bitch n writing somthing in this Magic *potion * which i should add she ant even gon even give u nothing... Boy u really need to cover up cuz u really are ashy n need some lotion ... Just to let u know this battle is mine just a little knowtice... ur not even worth it n ur just a waiste of my time ... |
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I approach the stand with half a gram of coke in my hand Got white chicks from the clan shakin it to kanyes workout plan Bet I made you laugh you just a fag from the backa the class Sucha easy task...Face Turning green as if u had on "The Mask" Your usless like a eraser witha blank piece of paper and no pencils Fat men like you need sweat suits and you got the Band-AID Facing me James but you aint eving "worthy" of this "tourney" 2 rounds still not "learning" you "urning 4 what" u the cut? See you might be mixtape but works not sold on shelves Witha heart of an elf..sucked his dick got high on himself I'm a Fighter notta lover,got you scared like virgins fucking wit no rubber.... ok i'm done... |
aiight imma break this down real quick
This boy says im too easy , u dont know how who the fuck i am u fuckin beezy ... This kid doesnt know wht the hell he be doing thats y in his battles the croud will always be booing Dawg You had multi's but chu jus throwin shit together chu know... Didnt even make sense..whats a beezy? LOL......they on some grade 2 shit seriously....how old iz you? 2/10 Go write to ya bitch n writing somthing in this Magic *potion * which i should add she ant even gon even give u nothing... Boy u really need to cover up cuz u really are ashy n need some lotion ... LOL need some lotion. that was funny..but stupid...like dawg. make sense when you rap 2/10 Just to let u know this battle is mine just a little knowtice... ur not even worth it n ur just a waiste of my time ... Wack 1/10 aiight Now UB2EZ: I approach the stand with half a gram of coke in my hand Got white chicks from the clan shakin it to kanyes workout plan First line was koo, dope opener i was feelin it...LOL second line was fuckin fire..WHAT WHAT..this would be hot for a song..you can tell youz an audio kat..that shit was nice LOL i give that 9/10 no doubt Bet I made you laugh you just a fag from the backa the class Sucha easy task...Face Turning green as if u had on "The Mask" First line was koo aswell..good rhyme scheme and it sounded perfect...second line was dope..good use of Wordplay too.......8/10 Your usless like a eraser witha blank piece of paper and no pencils Fat men like you need sweat suits and you got the Band-AID i dont understand what you was saying here..blah 3/10 Facing me James but you aint eving "worthy" of this "tourney" 2 rounds still not "learning" you "urning 4 what" u the cut? koo multi's end lines didnt rhyme but it was pretty nice 6/10 See you might be mixtape but works not sold on shelves Witha heart of an elf..sucked his dick got high on himself LOL wtf....shit was aiight 6/10 I'm a Fighter notta lover,got you scared like virgins fucking wit no rubber.... YO THAT SHITS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO TRU my gurl a virgin too and she wanted to fuck me and i had no rubber and she was sayin the same damn thang she was all paranoid..so we didnt end up doin it..haha i give u a 8/1o for dat one No need to calculate this shit...UB2EZ takes this easily vote UB2EZ |
mixtape, that was horrible..you said nothin..n made no effort it seemed..
i suggest you read the rules n try again...lol . I approach the stand with half a gram of coke in my hand Got white chicks from the clan shakin it to kanyes workout plan single syllable multi's..?.... Bet I made you laugh you just a fag from the backa the class Sucha easy task...Face Turning green as if u had on "The Mask" again, lines not bad but not complex... Your usless like a eraser witha blank piece of paper and no pencils Fat men like you need sweat suits and you got the Band-AID nope,...... Facing me James but you aint eving "worthy" of this "tourney" 2 rounds still not "learning" you "urning 4 what" u the cut? ??...wheres ya ryhme scheme..? See you might be mixtape but works not sold on shelves Witha heart of an elf..sucked his dick got high on himself no, this was very wack I'm a Fighter notta lover,got you scared like virgins fucking wit no rubber.... ..blah..... . k, you both didnt read the rules obviously,...mixtape, i cant n wont vote for you cuz that was soo weak....n made no sence at all.... . ub2ez,..it was simple multi's not complex at all n you didnt even punch had good flow n all, but it was weak for text..i wouldve voted for you but you went over the line limit....................... . VOTE/me for reading this bullshit.... |
This boy says im too easy , u dont know how who the fuck i am u fuckin beezy ...
This kid doesnt know wht the hell he be doing thats y in his battles the croud will always be booing Go write to ya bitch n writing somthing in this Magic *potion * which i should add she ant even gon even give u nothing... Boy u really need to cover up cuz u really are ashy n need some lotion ... Just to let u know this battle is mine just a little knowtice... ur not even worth it n ur just a waiste of my time ****** ....as a whole this lacked vocabs, complexity and REAL multis..(more dan 1 syllable) did you try? 50/100 I approach the stand with half a gram of coke in my hand Got white chicks from the clan shakin it to kanyes workout plan Bet I made you laugh you just a fag from the backa the class Sucha easy task...Face Turning green as if u had on "The Mask" Your usless like a eraser witha blank piece of paper and no pencils Fat men like you need sweat suits and you got the Band-AID Facing me James but you aint eving "worthy" of this "tourney" 2 rounds still not "learning" you "urning 4 what" u the cut? *****pretty decent bars...needed a lil more...but judging his verse, it dont really matter See you might be mixtape but works not sold on shelves Witha heart of an elf..sucked his dick got high on himself I'm a Fighter notta lover,got you scared like virgins fucking wit no rubber.... ***like these 2 bars, made the verse better my vote...ub............but i guess it dont matter if u dq him |
MixTape
This boy says im too easy , u dont know how who the fuck i am u fuckin beezy ... This kid doesnt know wht the hell he be doing thats y in his battles the croud will always be booing Go write to ya bitch n writing somthing in this Magic *potion * which i should add she ant even gon even give u nothing... Boy u really need to cover up cuz u really are ashy n need some lotion ... Just to let u know this battle is mine just a little knowtice... ur not even worth it n ur just a waiste of my time ... you had no multies...lol...this was suppose to a multies battle, not jus a regularly battle...anyway your shit was weak dawg...you need to work on your punches and multies...3/10 UB2EZ I approach the stand with half a gram of coke in my hand Got white chicks from the clan shakin it to kanyes workout plan Bet I made you laugh you just a fag from the backa the class Sucha easy task...Face Turning green as if u had on "The Mask" Your usless like a eraser witha blank piece of paper and no pencils Fat men like you need sweat suits and you got the Band-AID Facing me James but you aint eving "worthy" of this "tourney" 2 rounds still not "learning" you "urning 4 what" u the cut? See you might be mixtape but works not sold on shelves Witha heart of an elf..sucked his dick got high on himself I'm a Fighter notta lover,got you scared like virgins fucking wit no rubber.... good verse...you had some multies atleast...lol...this was a cool verse man...i like a couple of the punches also...nice work...7/10 |
my ni99a j-blaze a.k.a the last lane will merk ne ni99a in a multie
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^^^^^^^^^Freepost and i'm uppin in the battle...thanks too all tha voters |
Not Sure What Faggot Deleted My Post'd Vote
But It Was 4 ub2ez.... |
n we uppin..............
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yea uppin for some more....
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Uppin 4 some more votes...
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ive battled a kid called that n he was lame if its any concellation T...... |
was his name J-Blaze or the last lane?
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i deleted the fuckin freeposts and shit that had no fuckin sense im only keeping the Votes.......
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ay whts the score right now? buh yea uppin for some more....
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yeah word......how many votes u need to win.....and i'm gonna be out till tommorow night......
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Mixtape, your verse was ok man. I wasnt feelin ya rhymes too well man and your multis wasnt being pulled off to their best i think. some ok punches and i could see how you were aiming ya lines but if your gonna go at someone like that, the punches have to be stronger i think. I aint sayin i can do better, just that his verse came off better
Ub2eZ, Ya verse was cool. Some real nice punches in there that were hard and on target. Biggest problem was the lack of good multis. IF he had some more complex multis in his verse, your punches wouldnt have been able to save you in this but i really enjoyed it and it flowed well but you get the vote ~Ub2eZ |
iight cool man...i'm uppin for them votes........good battle Mix
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yea u too ub2ez...
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and we upppin...mixtape...tryout for GROUND ZERO...drop ya hottest stuff
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mixtape- ya gotta put more than a two word rhymin statement together and ya need some punches that arent forced or forced to flow together...need to make sence in your rhymes n follow da structure 1st line rhyme skeme follows the third o second and multis need punches and at least 2-3 word o syllables with the root rhymin word each phrase...3/10 being generous
Ub2ez...thank god found a piece with some what of a multi to vote on...haha...you flowed and actually had some multis...little lengthy cause its 4-6 lines but ya punches were aight liked da last 3 lines like hotshh pointed out pretty good ya take this one...ya vocab was alright n so was structure...give ya 7/10 vote ub2ez |
UB2EZ wins by KO
Ub2ez's new record 1-0 .mixtapes. new record 0-1.. |
iight man close this ish up
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ub2ez takes this.......2ez. Normally i would break this down bar by bar but there's no need.
Mixtape's verse: Alot was only a multi because he used the same word twice ie. be doing be booing some just didnt rhyme ie. potion and nothin and the closer was just wack ez's verse: it was funny, it had punches and it actually made sense v/ ub2ez |
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