A.K. Nightfall vs Hot Sauce
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 02-11-05 at 03:26 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

A.K. Nightfall has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-08-05 03:28 AM.

Hot Sauce has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-08-05 12:19 PM.

I changed my stru because a lot of ppl say its weak so I changed it up

Instead of a 'CHALLENGE', I take it as a 'DEATH WISH', Read your Past Battles, ~My WORST Rips Your BEST SHIT!~
~YOUR DEAD BITCH! ~You Just MESS WITH~ The Wrong 'G', Steppin' To Me!? Your in the 'DANGERFIELD' Just Like 'you'. There Ain't No STOPPING ME! / Come Again, ~I'll be Forced to DROP You CHIEF. ~I'll STOMP This BEEF! ~I'm Known to EAT EMCEES, With CHOMPING TEETH!~ / ~Were You Sure ABOUT TAUNTING ME!?~ HONESTLY, YOU DON'T KNOW!?/ ~I'll SLUMP You HO!~ This FAG Drops The Instant Punch Line's Directed GUNs BLOW~ / This Trick is DONE FO', BLOODIED The FLOOR! Have Another Fucker Face to Face With the LORD! Punch Line Amasses Soldiers in HORDES, Be Like TROJANS With SWORDS, Murdered This WHORE! DISMANTLE His HANDLES~ Then SEPERATE THEM in GORDS!~ I'll EXIT OUT DOORS.~ / ~If This Wack Bitch BEATS ANYONE ELSE! ~My ATTACKS Are Gonna BE FELT! ~YOUR GOING TO HELL! ~Got The Fags Who Vote For You with Thier Heads On A SHELF!~ / Your Last Hand has Been DEALT! The Fuck With Your HEALTH. Get Murked Mother Fucker, Cuz The Last Word Has Been SPELT!


Change up
|I Eternally Criticize your Image, Deface your Face Until your Own Mom Can't Distinguish~|
|Your Finish, It's My Buisness, To Make Sure your The Only Witness to Your Death, So Keep your Lips Stitched.|
|This Bitch Wish He Can Defeat Me, Always Talking About "How He Spit So ill."|
|Bitch!!! 'I Spit ill', 'So ill, That I Kill at Free Will', This Trick is UnSkilled, Had My Fill of Wack Emcee.|
|Don't Tempt Me, ak is a "Filler" Because All His Rhymes are "Running On Empty".|
|This Fool Sent For Me!? You Must've Thought You Caught Me at a Bad Moment.|

|I Don't Condone Tricks, I Read your Past Battles, Your Lyric's Remind of The Weak Shit Spoken in The South.|
|I Fucked Your Mom While She Was Pregnant With You, So ak Was Born With My dick in His Mouth.|

its over its done

yo im new to rapverse...
and its my first battle, im already sending u back to the womb in a bloody hearse...
bitch u accept cuz u thought this was ganna be a breeze...
u thought oh hes new and hes from alaska, ill bring my stats up..but bitch u missjudged me...
your shit looks like its been written by a child....
somone needs to spice u up cuz this hot suace is mild...
kid i aint even tryin...
cuz the sause comes out way to fast and u been spillin...
u might as well get of this site...
cuz u are supposed to represent where u from not make people ashamed of it...
so bitch if u come back come strong...
dont do some pussy kiddy shit,that i could do while im to blazed to even take another hit from da bong...
so damn kid im sorry u just got served by a newbie...
somone pass the hotsauce it needs another serving...

haha fuck man i htought i was gong first haha we posted at the same time whutever but vote...........

This was feedback posted for Hot Sauce
 

damnnnnnnnn niggaaaaa
you wasted madddddd lyrics on his wack asss

in laymans terms...MURDA

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This was feedback posted for Hot Sauce
 

im not sure which part of hot sauce's shit i was sposed to read... but dont matter heres just my feeds aint votin nEway.

STYLE:
hotsauce's got the edge with the constant attempt on internal rhymes, but u gota be careful, theres a fineline between being artistic and pure crampedthefucktogether; AK, for a first, this shit alone shows taht u've got deep potentials, keep workin on this shit man

PUNCH:
"instead of a challenge i take is as a deathwish, read ur past battles, my worst rips ur best shit!" OUCH!!! sick line... only... it's AK's first battle here, get ur facts straight
"i fucked ur mom while she was pregnant with u, so AK was born with my dick in his mouth" iLL give u this one, but this was close to being as stretched as AK's blow wit the bong.
my personal favorite? "someone needs to spice u up cuz this hot sauce is mild"... DAYMN!

FLOW:
hotsauce, with some better breaks, u could kiLL the crowd
AK, u lost ur momentum as u built ur verse

TECHNIQUE:
i see some real potential damage here guys, keep it up

S: Hot Sauce > A. K. Nightfall
P: =tiE=
F: Hot Sauce > A. K. Nightfall
T: Hot Sauce > A. K. Nightfall (keep workin at it AK, ur there)
OVERALL: hotsauce's got it, but not by the big landslide i expected
VOTE: Hot Sauce, but im stiLL a post away from being able to make this official

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This was feedback posted for Hot Sauce
 

uppint this shit nice battle i'll vote later nice battle

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..............fuckin vote on this shit......god damn............

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Voted For: Hot Sauce

Wow Hot Sauce took this easy, jus on the basis that your opponent spit some whack ass shit....ya verse was tight too, punches were hittin, didn't really like the structure, but it worked 4 u

No Hate

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Voted For: Hot Sauce

ok now hotsauce first of all, your shit hurt my eyes man... Fix your fucking structure dude, stop using " " and ~ ok, but overall you won this battle, way harder punches, nice multi's too, decent meta's blah at personels, it was a good verse though, try looking at Cannabarz or .:Jack Rackam:. cuz that's how you can learn to use multi's and still have agood structure, you'll eleavte off them... Night fall, rap battling isnt just rhyming words, go check out Lyrical Flowz or Jimmy Pocketz, and learn to use personels and meta's off them, elevate off that, and you should have no problem... but hot sauce takes this, for actually having punches/

v/ HS

Voted For: Hot Sauce

Hot Sauce Battle me you HOE why you duckin me you faggot i called you out 2 times and you ducked im gonna set the battle up now and if you duck im gonna make it a rule that strobe gives me a win and you a lose HOE so battle, and i can do that with the rules so battle or bitch out and get a lose bitch

Hotsauce:
came with the better verse had better punches ugly ass stucture and some very ugly flow and sketchy shit but i thought you came better so thats why i give you this battle a win pz

A.K Nightfall
stucture was horrible and you have no creativty i wasnt feeling your verse at all i thought you came mad weak n all prospects pz

RTF in my battle with A_M_H links in the sig

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Voted For: Hot Sauce

hot yo ya verse was good but u need to fucking fix ya structure that shit made it hard as hell to read but i did read some good punches that hit hard i thought ya switch up was when u turned it up a notch and really did ya thang ya hit connected ya flow was good but ya stru was choppy as fuck

I Eternally Criticize your Image, Deface your Face Until your Own Mom Can't Distinguish~|
|Your Finish, It's My Buisness, To Make Sure your The Only Witness to Your Death, So Keep your Lips Stitched.|
^^ good hit

nightfall u are new to rapverse and u is preety ill prop cuz u had some good hit a way better structure but ya punches wasnt as raw as hot but they was there and connected none was a knockout blow thou ya flow was good but i think punches win battles and that is what u need it more of here

your shit looks like its been written by a child....
somone needs to spice u up cuz this hot suace is mild...
good flow but u need wasy better punches

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Voted For: Hot Sauce

this was really sn 1-sided battle in my opinion:

hot sauce- ight, ur structure was all ova the place..ur
punches were nice..it flowed all the way thru
..ur multi's r there & hit hard..so did ur
personals were good..overall u had the
betta verse

a.k.- ight, ur structure was all ova the place also..ur
punches lack the effectiveness it needs 2 b hard
hitting..it was like u forced ur flow..needs elevation
..no multi's..not many personals..overall ur verse
was lacking & needs elevation in my view but
betta luck next time
V/ Hot Sauce
make sure 2 return the favor