Read This And Critique
 

LOGIC IS CENTZ
CENTZ IS LOGIC
2 man concepts- split personality exsist in my subconscious-
both disaterous- twist your wig till we my stomach haunches- and i turn nautius-and faustious-
one will spit bars- the other regurgitate hard- with punchline's like collisions between a truck and a car-
each doing 75 on the i 95-
plus when they collide-
flip like they wont equipped with a torque bar-im the illest by far- with the illness to spit beyond sub par-
at a thousand pounds of pressure per rhymes- thats atleast 100 lasserations etched or branded to the paper with lines-
charged like twin alkalines-
internet dialects - downloaded for an m.c. to interprit- in real life i rip mics like starved lions on fragile colprits-
treating m.c. by eating m.c.'s-
give em every disease- after my album gets critiqued through the pyrimidic tree- under the evolution of std's-
and im diagnosed with full blown everything from clap to gonnrie-
in other words none of you are sicker than me- or even have half the mental degree- in comparison your album drop out and graded g-e-d/so you lack my mind equivelency-
dont mention the LOL or M.K.C- unless you sick of life or just sick of breathing-
give you a beating- and wont exagerate-im just that great with what i create- rhymes so tight that if i dont give em space- im liable to sufficate- inhail cpr from every virgin in 50 states-just to resesitate- then fuck you m.c.'s with the agression of a lesbian busting the first time her coochie get ate-while her eggs ovulate-
compared to me you cats is primates-actually primitive to primates-when your only hustles was selling your ass to deathrow inmates-on out takes-of gay taxi cab confessions screamin my name when you each lactate-
you cant fuck with M/B OR M-BODY- OR EVEN ANY MEMBER OF MY FAMILY- we solute with middle fingers pledging a beating to SPITTEN FLAMES and U.E.- you see- the beaf can never be deaded- even if i was beheaded- or brain washed to forget it-
by some experiment-
with death as a remedy- come bacl like the crow cause i aint gonna forget revenge on my enemies-and wont rest in peace- till they rest diceased-or live with the memory of how of how they got gang raped by my team-
my signature shows the planet the greatest stars since the constilations-the conjuration-of rhymes to decode nuclear probes and hold hostage rap across the globe- and take rap world domination.

nice ass spit logic....
but i bet that them bitches u.e. and spittin flames aint even gonna answer to that hit.......
yo did you see that bitch little nice tryin to take shots at my man masta blasta?



i guess thats just one sign that our crew is fuckin sicc.....
we got so many dick rydin, groupie ass, rhyme-bytin, p diddy lovin, dick in da booty ass hataz.....

WE WONT SWET LIL NICE
HE ONLY GOT LIL SKILLZ
MASTER WILL HAVE HIS ASS DEALT WITH AND BACK IN DIAPERS AND INFIMIL

always gotta love yer shyt LOL, makes me all proud to be in Ordo Abacho :D
*tear* lol

naw, great stuff yo, world domination would be nice...

UPPIN FOR MORE CRITIQUES

ANY ONE

yo i liked this spit, i guess ORDO ABACHO got some sick cats on they team. ^

I liked this spit for the most part. It seemed kind of like a freestyle diss. I don't know why I say that, but something about how the lines fed into one another gave me that impression. The primate lines were tight. Overall, a good piece, but not a great one. For a diss piece to really stand out to me, it's got to have amazing wordplay.

Good work.

Peace

Dope ass drop...Yal ORDO ABACHO cats got some problems but yal nice though

This was just Blah yo, only thing remotely nice was ---
give you a beating- and wont exagerate-im just that great with what i create-
rhymes so tight that if i dont give em space- im liable to sufficate-

Upping your own post?Twice?---Come on now soldier, dont get down on sleeping cats, your the one who put the sleeper on

okay your the weakest link

GOODBYE!

lol

LMAO AT STUPID NIGGAS TRY TO BE REALL HIP HOP HEAD AND GET A DAMN MICROPHONE!!!HAHAHAHAH

dawg you garbage on and off mics you cant fuck with me so you get deleted.................................
on mics im twice as ill i ve been with made cats you just some fucken precum pre rap vanilla ice remake who scared to here he wack on open text so he hide on mic's ill slaughter you so stay back

same here nigga......id murder you in a strait freestyle battle.......as fast as i spit when i freestyle id have you fucked up and lookin like one of jerry's kids.........

youve got a big fuckin mouth for someone who was scared too battle me....

U BOTH SUCK GET SOME MICS

check bitch slapped Little Nice

cuzz.i already told you in that bitch slapped thread that little nice is gonna be a lottle bitch and back out of the battle........your just wastin time and energy lil dallas

LMAO U ALL SUCK BITCHES O NO DAMANI ON RAPBATTLE SAID I SUCK AHHHHHHH

whateva fool you garbage and a fag that wht you love holding a stiff mic.it makes you feel frisky to swallow

damn dude you never stop

with the hip-hop

LoL

no really LoL

once again hot shit

i can't really say much more

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