.:BlazE:. vs ••••Dice••••
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 02-10-05 at 12:47 AM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

.:BlazE:. has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-09-05 12:50 AM.

Wanting to be a betta rapper was dis kids new year's revolution
^^^^^^Dat last word is supposed to be Resolution.....lol

First lesson, ya shit’s depressin, so to this page, my text is blessin
There’s no question Dice always top these herbs like salad dressin
It’s impressive, to how fast, I put your career’s tense in half-past,
Just wack, couldn’t Blaze on paper if ya possessed a fat stack,
Ya scriptz are all the same'n'played like comp's when they reboot,
Shoot, you worth my time? I've seen better punches eat'n alpha soup!!
This faggot get's hype for bars like retards see'n candy jars.
Can't seem to connect like kamikazi shoot'n star's
I done with this bitch, give me a vet or some shit,
I rise to the top of RV, quickly, like I murdered gravity,
Like Columbians I stay stackin keys and leave
90% of you emcees studying my text like it’s the fuk’n SAT’s.


lmao..... as ya might have guessed the losses on my rec were no-shows
It's a a wrap.

••••Dice•••• has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-09-05 09:28 PM.

First lesson, ya shit’s depressin, so to this page, my text is blessin
There’s no question Dice always top these herbs like salad dressin
It’s impressive, to how fast, I put your career’s tense in half-past,
Just wack, couldn’t Blaze on paper if ya possessed a fat stack,
Ya scriptz are all the same'n'played like comp's when they reboot,
Shoot, you worth my time? I've seen better punches eat'n alpha soup!!
This faggot get's hype for bars like retards see'n candy jars.
Can't seem to connect like kamikazi shoot'n star's
I done with this bitch, give me a vet or some shit,
I rise to the top of RV, quickly, like I murdered gravity,
Like Columbians I stay stackin keys and leave
90% of you emcees studying my text like it’s the fuk’n SAT’s.

uppin dis shit 4 some votes dont sleep on it vote honest votes only.....Pz

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Voted For: ••••Dice••••

this was a pretty weak battle but dice gets my vote because the other guy just didnt come hard at all dice was better on the punches and on the vocab his verse was a lil bit more creative plus he also had some multi's in his verse and the other cat didnt have any but both of u came pretty weak but dice won because a battle is about punches and he had some punches and blaze just didnt have any return the fav http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=175856

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This was feedback posted for ••••Dice••••
 

Dice was nice. He definitely owned. Salad dressing line alone Blaze couldn't top.

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uppin dis shit honest and explained votes ONLY!!!!

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Voted For: ••••Dice••••

ok this battle was ok but could have been alot betta:
opener: dice
vocab: blaze
multis: dice
structure: dice
closer: blaze
dice won my vote cuz he came harder & hit wit more punches in this battle..u don't need 2 stretch ur rhymes 4 future reference; blaze u don't need 2 self glorying in a battle
make sure 2 return the favor

Onesided my ass,

Your next.


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Voted For: ••••Dice••••

Dice gets this vote.
alot more thought out verse
more strength in the punches

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uppin dis shit honest and explained votes ONLY!!!!

Voted For: ••••Dice••••

Votin for Dice

Dice got this due to a more creative verse n he had sum pretty creative punches in his verse as will very creative verse overall n a few perosnals i saw as well
I woulda liked to see some multies up in the verse so elebvate on ya multies Dice good verse fam overall

:Dice Bes line:
Ya scriptz are all the same'n'played like comp's when they reboot,
Shoot, you worth my time? I've seen better punches eat'n alpha soup!!
(liked it , very creative holla)

Ight blaze ya verse was ight but the punches were a bit doft n ya wordplay was a bit to original ya gotta spuice ya verse up a lot so elevate on the severity of your verse. Multies needed to be elevated on n maybe throw a personal in every now and then itll get ya the votes fam

ight so overall:
Punches- Dice
Personals- Dice
Flow- Tie
Multies- None
Structure- Tie

good battle fams be sure to RTF in my battles fo sho

good battle , holla

Not hate votin nor dickridin jus votin

Voted For: ••••Dice••••

this was an ok battle here

Dice: you practically took this one here mayn,
the flow was on point, and not chopped up lookin
the vocab was good, and no mispelled words either
overall u had a nice story, and stayed on topic

Blaze:eh you had a pretty decent story here too
your flow was on point, and the vocab was good
u need a font-change though...but thats me
but anyway, u had a good story too, just that
to me it wasnt as good as shadow's story tho

make sure 2 return the favor