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intensify effect vs *troop*
Battle Rules: CREW BATTLE: CODE STEEL VS S.M
12 lines... No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting no feeding... CODE STEEL IS ABOUT TO OWN S.M WE 1 WIN AWAY FROM KO'IN YA CREW BITCH!!!! Minimum posts to vote: 300 Check in by: 02-10-05 at 03:57 PM Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in. |
intensify effect has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-09-05 05:16 PM.
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CODE STEEL MOTHER FUCKER..... RESPECT US BITCH...
..ima pop ya vocal cord like from behind stealing a neckless... ur lines BULLSHIT..they Build up Nothing like a won game of Tetris.. troop ya punches couldnt be "hot" if u "burnt-ya-fist" im bugg'in?, i have yet to "Tear-a-Ris" ya like a "Muslim Extremists" my punches'll leave u to grow fucked up on Rv like a retarded Fetus, N if this win was a walk down the block, u'll struggle to crawl like a parapalegics... N like lowis lane im glad u'r here to get the scoop cuz u'r like a news-reporter in iraq, still not yet concider a TROOP.... LOOK, S.M bound to fall like a avalanch call from mother nature... and i maybe AMP, but u'r only shockin when ya set off ya pace-maker..... BITCH.... CODE STEEL BITCH... WE GOT THIS..... |
*Troop* has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-10-05 01:53 AM.
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Stop ya Ignorance Ya Not in the Sindicate Your Simplify Reflects Slowly Mixing RedBull..... and Bacardi still wont Intensify Effects Your not Gifted believe me ya Battles are Poo ya Drop Tells Mishandeling Egg Cartons is the only time u Dropped Shells From the Check in you was Nervous Basically Rippin ya Nails U defeat Me? Ya when Anerexics Finally start Tippin tha Scales I.E Recycles other Lyrix he might as well start 2 "Lease Raps" Ghandi on a Me vs U audio Still wouldnt make "Peace Tracks" Believe Me Rv knows ya Lyrix are Shit i guess u Rhyme Bloated U cant See Me .... like Jogging thru an Intersection Blind Folded You got Jr Freeze on His Knees 2 Please so u hittin High Notes This a Misbalanced Battle like 300 Pounders hittin Tight Ropes ...Nuff Said that Bitch... |
Voted For: *Troop*
Troop Stop ya Ignorance Ya Not in the Sindicate Your Simplify Reflects Slowly Mixing RedBull..... and Bacardi still wont Intensify Effects nice opener Your not Gifted believe me ya Battles are Poo ya Drop Tells Mishandeling Egg Cartons is the only time u Dropped Shells aight From the Check in you was Nervous Basically Rippin ya Nails U defeat Me? Ya when Anerexics Finally start Tippin tha Scales decent I.E Recycles other Lyrix he might as well start 2 "Lease Raps" Ghandi on a Me vs U audio Still wouldnt make "Peace Tracks" coo Believe Me Rv knows ya Lyrix are Shit i guess u Rhyme Bloated U cant See Me .... like Jogging thru an Intersection Blind Folded coo You got Jr Freeze on His Knees 2 Please so u hittin High Notes This a Misbalanced Battle like 300 Pounders hittin Tight Ropes coo clser pretty coo verse...it flowed very smoothly...punches were hittin...had a little vocab and some good multies...good creativity also...nice verse...8.5/10 I.E. ..ima pop ya vocal cord like from behind stealing a neckless... ur lines BULLSHIT..they Build up Nothing like a won game of Tetris.. lol...nice opener troop ya punches couldnt be "hot" if u "burnt-ya-fist" im bugg'in?, i have yet to "Tear-a-Ris" ya like a "Muslim Extremists" this aight...nothin special my punches'll leave u to grow fucked up on Rv like a retarded Fetus, N if this win was a walk down the block, u'll struggle to crawl like a parapalegics... coo N like lowis lane im glad u'r here to get the scoop cuz u'r like a news-reporter in iraq, still not yet concider a TROOP.... lol...coo LOOK, S.M bound to fall like a avalanch call from mother nature... and i maybe AMP, but u'r only shockin when ya set off ya pace-maker not too good of a closer you had an aight verse...u had a couple of lines i liked...your punches hit solidly, but u lost it in a couple places but still decent...some good multies...u had a little creativity...flow was kinda off in some spots...but still decent verse...8/10 pretty close battle... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
return the favor please...................feedback or somthin
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=175611 |
...............And u thought u was gone Merk Who?
Not Troop *Nuff Said on this Clown* |
^^^ bitch u pre-wrote that, u ducked my first set up just to give ya-self some more time to drop....
fuckin lames with they pre-writtens make me sick.... keyed my shit in 10 fuck that verse took u 4 days...... nuff said.... upp'in.... |
This was feedback posted for intensify effect
nice battle Ie very close battle word.............
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No Pre Written Needed
Im jus overall Better than u Thats tha diff between a Vet and a Clown wit 33 losses like u Now realize U been Exposed sorry Bitch *Nuff Said on this bitch that keep Jockin Me* |
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This was feedback posted for *Troop*
meh....in SM just upping...good luck troop........
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I dont need luck...skills speak 4 themselves
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Voted For: *Troop*
whoooo damm dis was a good battle ya'll..no hate or nothin but i gotta go with troop cuzz of his ryhme scheme and his shit was more consistant and he had some hott punchlines...i.e ya shit was type hott like dat troop line but dat was it basically nahmean i wasn't feelin ya ryhme scheme and some of ya lines stretched a lil datz cool tho but overrall troop shit was hottah........ opener-troop creative punch......i.e good ryhme scheme but wasn't really feelin da punch dat much structure-troop his shit was neat.....i.e ya lines strectched a lil punchlines-troop basically every line was a punch personals-troop he takes it...return da favor ya'll links in da sig |
Bumpin this shit..................
*Nuff Said Chump* |
WHAT???
how dont u feel my opener punch??? ..ima pop ya vocal cord like from behind stealing a neckless... ur lines BULLSHIT..they Build up Nothing like a won game of Tetris.. What is it u dont feel?? its creative, and a good hit, the game is about connecting and making a straight line, if u won da game then u have no lines??? get it?? danm son and my lines streched??? i think ya just love saying that about my verse, cuz it seems like peeps always hate'in saying my lines is streched..... when they aint........ |
Its ok man my linez used 2 be stretched 2 when i Sucked
But i neva sucked as much as u Muthafucka Talked all that shit and got Knocked Out Damn!!!! *Nuff Said* |
Voted For: *Troop*
T.R.OO.P Alright THis Was One Sided Troop Had This Battle His Punches Where On Target And Was Hitting, His Rhyme Scheme Was There, Also Had Some Good Vocabulary, Structure Was Decent His Lines Was All Lined Up, WordPlay Nice, This Verse Was Creative, And That's What You Need For Battles These Days,Also Had Personals Which I Felt Was Hard Hitting, From My Prespective This Battle Was One Sided I.E. Alright Coz First Off?? Where Was Your Structure? It Was Chaotic Kid, You Need To Start Lining Your Bars Up To Match, Your Rhyme Scheme Was Totally Whacked, WordPlay Hmm, I See Some Recylced Ish In Here Man, You Need Some New Vocabulary. Coz This Is Getting Played, Alos Personals Wasn't Quite Hitting You Need To Work On That, Punches, Gosh Dawg That Needs Help Coz Not One Even Hit Troop Close Enuff To Damage, Any Way Elevate Some More Pimpin Vote=Troop Return The Favor Me Vs Death Only, Link In My Sig...... . .. ... .... ..... ...... ....... ........ ......... .......... |
^^^^ what was ya other name?????
befor u changed it???? anyways upp'in to get this ova with........... :gfy: :banghead: |
U damn righ uppin 2 get ya 34th Loss u sorry fuck
*Nuff Said* |
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This was feedback posted for *Troop*
Not enough posts to vote but if it means anythin I give this to T.R.OO.P... Redbull and bacardi line was hot, so was the drop shells punch.
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=176885 |
This was feedback posted for *Troop*
checkin polls...........solid drop fam....you got this
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Its nuthin 2 me 2 ruin Records......................
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Voted For: intensify effect
..ima pop ya vocal cord like from behind stealing a neckless... ur lines BULLSHIT..they Build up Nothing like a won game of Tetris.. good shit troop ya punches couldnt be "hot" if u "burnt-ya-fist" im bugg'in?, i have yet to "Tear-a-Ris" ya like a "Muslim Extremists" oo shit i get it good shit my punches'll leave u to grow fucked up on Rv like a retarded Fetus, N if this win was a walk down the block, u'll struggle to crawl like a parapalegics... hahaha N like lowis lane im glad u'r here to get the scoop cuz u'r like a news-reporter in iraq, still not yet concider a TROOP.... nice play off hes name LOOK, S.M bound to fall like a avalanch call from mother nature... and i maybe AMP, but u'r only shockin when ya set off ya pace-maker..... BITCH.... ok ending u had way better ending befor but it was aight good verse besides the ending Stop ya Ignorance Ya Not in the Sindicate Your Simplify Reflects Slowly Mixing RedBull..... and Bacardi still wont Intensify Effects decent shit there Your not Gifted believe me ya Battles are Poo ya Drop Tells Mishandeling Egg Cartons is the only time u Dropped Shells played, concept been said 1,000 times already From the Check in you was Nervous Basically Rippin ya Nails U defeat Me? Ya when Anerexics Finally start Tippin tha Scales preety good I.E Recycles other Lyrix he might as well start 2 "Lease Raps" Ghandi on a Me vs U audio Still wouldnt make "Peace Tracks" i wasnt feeling this bar Believe Me Rv knows ya Lyrix are Shit i guess u Rhyme Bloated U cant See Me .... like Jogging thru an Intersection Blind Folded haha good shit You got Jr Freeze on His Knees 2 Please so u hittin High Notes This a Misbalanced Battle like 300 Pounders hittin Tight Ropes ...Nuff Said that Bitch... ok ending but it could of been better ya both aint have no good ending but I.E had less weak hits then troop so imma go with I.E Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
lol stupid ass...thats not a vote..u didnt explain shit
nice Nutt ride try... |
This was feedback posted for *Troop*
Checkin polls...Surprise I.E. actually showed up! GL Troop...
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Voted For: *Troop*
T.R.OO.P - Good spit, your flow was good and your punches/personals were hitten hard. Best Line - Stop ya Ignorance Ya Not in the Sindicate Your Simplify Reflects Slowly Mixing RedBull..... and Bacardi still wont Intensify Effects Your not Gifted believe me ya Battles are Poo ya Drop Tells Mishandeling Egg Cartons is the only time u Dropped Shells Worst Line - You got Jr Freeze on His Knees 2 Please so u hittin High Notes This a Misbalanced Battle like 300 Pounders hittin Tight Ropes intensify effect - Iight spit, your flow was good and your punches were good. Best Line - ..ima pop ya vocal cord like from behind stealing a neckless... ur lines BULLSHIT..they Build up Nothing like a won game of Tetris.. Worst Line - LOOK, S.M bound to fall like a avalanch call from mother nature... and i maybe AMP, but u'r only shockin when ya set off ya pace-maker..... OVERALL - Decent battle, punches were hitten hard and flow was well. My vote goes to TROOP cuz he had multi's and harder hitten punches. IE you shoulda came harder wit the personals. Vote - Troop |
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Voted For: *Troop*
just checking the polls... p.s. IE your a homo and you lost this battle... good thing that socrates got matched up against me in this crew battle and not you cause i woulda whored you so bad you woulda left the site like the bitch you is... so now i gotta whore socrates even worse for tryna stab me in the back last month Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Vote is being removed.......hit feedback next time
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i gave a explained vote and nun of ya niggaz gon return da favor....whuts hood
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This was feedback posted for *Troop*
checkin' the polls gentlemen. nice shit.......nice shit.
^^^uppin' for y'all!!! s.v...........c.s. |
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Voted For: *Troop*
vote = troop I.E. your muslim wordplay didnt work at all and all ya punches seemed forced like you had writers block writin this. and you had too much "like a" in ya verse... "blah blah blah like a blah blah blah blah like a blah" TROOP: your simplify reflects??. dropped shells was so so...finally someone can use multis correctly...thank you..nice closer, imagry and a nice punch easy to decide p.s. RTF in the second link in my sig...one more vote 2 close the battle |
This was feedback posted for *Troop*
TROOPS verse was killin. it was consistant as hell. too bad i cant vote yet but if i could it would got to troop. i.e was cool for a bit but troop's had a flow from beginning to end. dats whats up
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