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Death vs Capitol
Battle Rules:
10 Lines Max No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 150 Check in by: 02-09-05 at 07:44 PM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
Death has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-09-05 07:19 PM.
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Capitol has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-09-05 07:23 PM.
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His Name's Death Coz He Predict His Death, I'll Leave Em Out Of Breath
Nothing Left But An Effect Greater Then An Open Wound in His Neck In Fact This Kid Is Whacked, He Lack The Potential To Be An Emcee So He's Back With A Mic, Impacted With The Lyrics Of A False Femcee Ending His Entry, Coz He Keep's His Mouth Open As Late As Wendies Trying To Be Freindly, This Kid Was Done Before He Made His Entreis I'll Let This Kid's Pride Be His Down Fall, This Clown's Juggling One More Loss I'll Race Pass This Kid At The Circus Like I'm Riding In An Open Motor Cross Hi's Skill Is Based On Ass, Coz Ppl On Rap Verse Agree That He's Finished Considered As HottnesDefines Brother, Now This Dumb Fuck's Diminished |
ca-pi-tol? ill blast-this-fool, then laugh-at-you, cuz you need to stop rap-ping-dude
leave you cracked-in-two, stop rapping, stick wit sleeping, eating, and crapp-ing-poop this just iasnt your day, even you parents say, that it was an innocent, accident, hav-ing-you leaven you stuck in a "split" decision, listen, your flow, "squirts", like your sisters "vag-i-nal" the jury, needs to hurry, an quit, cuz thier roster will eventually scurry, and then it will die like an onion, im not touching, you, but still con-tem-plate, and find-a-way, to make, you cry stop, nobody cares, like times new roman and arial font, your punches are always used and similar to, a criminal, sitting in an electric chair, your always dumbfounded, and are *con* *fused* after i get these votes, its up to your hopes, and prayers, to win, so hold onto your breath forget the rest, I am the best, and im sentencing you,and your crew, to, unconstitutional, death |
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Voted For: Death
this was an ok battle both of u came pretty decent but para just had better punches he was a lil bit more witty than cap he also used a lil wordplay and his vocab wasnt that bad either he also had more multi's and he was just more creative with his shit but to me the art of battling is about punches and para took it because he had punches and cap just didnt have any so thats my vote return the fav and drop a vote here http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=175856 |
Death You Had Someone Ghost-Write For You,I Know Who You Are "Reloaded" And Had Someone Ghost-Write Kid, What A Smahe |
.......think wut you want, but, im not reloaded, life, or any of those people, im ME.......
*too bad you dont know who "ME" is* -1 uppin/////////////////////////////////////////// |
Lol, Dumb Ass, Kid You Made The Name With Me knowing, Stupid I'm The One Who Told You Make An Alias Name... |
^and thats wut you think................................ i dont even know you homie.....you need to take your convictions back to the lab and think them over, cuz their obviously incorrect
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Voted For: Death
damn this was a hot ass battle lol. but i think paraiste edged it out a lil bit both of yall had some good multies and some good punches but i was feelin parasites a lil more opener=capitol closer=parasite punches=parasite flow=parasite structure=parasite vocab=capitol multies=tied basically parasite's punches r what edged him out. but yall both need to try n make ya verses make a lil more sense RETURN THE FAVOR http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=174890 |
Voted For: Capitol
His Name's Death Coz He Predict His Death, I'll Leave Em Out Of Breath Nothing Left But An Effect Greater Then An Open Wound in His Neck decent multi’s…punch was aight In Fact This Kid Is Whacked, He Lack The Potential To Be An Emcee So He's Back With A Mic, Impacted With The Lyrics Of A False Femcee pretty decent, punch was okay here Ending His Entry, Coz He Keep's His Mouth Open As Late As Wendies Trying To Be Freindly, This Kid Was Done Before He Made His Entreis good punch I'll Let This Kid's Pride Be His Down Fall, This Clown's Juggling One More Loss I'll Race Pass This Kid At The Circus Like I'm Riding In An Open Motor Cross decent punchline here Hi's Skill Is Based On Ass, Coz Ppl On Rap Verse Agree That He's Finished Considered As HottnesDefines Brother, Now This Dumb Fuck's Diminished decent closer, punch was decent here ca-pi-tol? ill blast-this-fool, then laugh-at-you, cuz you need to stop rap-ping-dude leave you cracked-in-two, stop rapping, stick wit sleeping, eating, and crapp-ing-poop pretty decent, punch was okay this just iasnt your day, even you parents say, that it was an innocent, accident, hav-ing-you leaven you stuck in a "split" decision, listen, your flow, "squirts", like your sisters "vag-i-nal" weak punch, flow was too long, wasn’t feelin this one the jury, needs to hurry, an quit, cuz thier roster will eventually scurry, and then it will die like an onion, im not touching, you, but still con-tem-plate, and find-a-way, to make, you cry decent punch, too much comma’s up in there stop, nobody cares, like times new roman and arial font, your punches are always used and similar to, a criminal, sitting in an electric chair, your always dumbfounded, and are *con* *fused* eh, weak punch don’t like the way u setted it up after i get these votes, its up to your hopes, and prayers, to win, so hold onto your breath forget the rest, I am the best, and im sentencing you,and your crew, to, unconstitutional, death decent closer, punch was okay overall both had aight drops punches – capitol had tookin this one…just came harder with them flow – cap. Took this one…parasite your drop was mmaadd ssttrreettcchheedd personals – didn’t really see any from both of you structure – cap. Took this one, structure was in place… 3-1…no hate to both but Capitol took this one though |
^^Finaly A Dope Emcee's Prespective, None Of This Newbies Shit, Good looking Man Upping |
^lol, probably pm'd his ass or sumthin, cuz your lines were more streched than mine, only one of my lines was much longer than the otherz, two of your lines were longer than the otherz, but o well.............................................. .
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This was feedback posted for Capitol
hmmmmmmm close battle here.
Checking polls G-drop parasite and capitol. |
Voted For: Capitol
voted for capitol Easy Vote Capitol- damn good verse fam, I felt it man Ya punches was hard n strong , striat to his face Flow was Nice very nice I could actually stay wit it Multies- Good for the ones I saw Structure- Ight structure fam (not the best) (not the worst) Personals- Didnt see any sorry Para the only thing I seen u had goinf for you was the multies man Ya punches well i didnt hardly see any that were worth looking at fam ya gotta make sure people no ur dissin him man Personals nah didnt see any fam sorry structure- a lil stretched out man shorten em Also: Para I seen u repeat a few phrases thas not what u want to do fam REPEATS: ca-pi-tol? ill blast-this-fool, then laugh-at-you, cuz you need to stop RAP-PING-dude leave you cracked-in-two, STOP RAPPING, stick wit sleeping, eating, and crapp-ing-poop ya said stop rapping within 8 words of each other dont repeat fam Breakdown: Punches: Cap Flow- Cap Structure- Cap Multies- Para Wordplay- Cap Personals- Neither Good vote return the fava Fams Dont hate vote me for given honest votes plz |
This was feedback posted for Capitol
checkin the pollz..............................looks like a good battle
will be a close one ya'll |
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Voted For: Capitol
v/ cap yo cap takes it here jus on about every level.... first off, the flow was much better... death or parasite or w/e, i jus couldnt stay wit you man, it seemed like all of your lines were stretched....jus didnt help you out at all (some of the kind of shit that would probably be a lot better audio wise)... punches cap takes dis with ease really..... he kept em going through out the entire battle....death had em through most but you gotta get em all the way through.... structures not really a big deal, but both of yours were fine... punches is what wins battles man....Cap had more of em,, i liked em better too.... but flow can really mess shit up if it doesnt work out.... pretty good for the most part from both of you though... |
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Voted For: Capitol
flow=tied meta4=cap punches=cap multie=death both verse were decent but death i really aint see no punches, you should come alot more harder. you had mass multies bro, enter the multi league and battle with punches cap had some different punches but maybe i aint read them right but you barley made it vote=cap |
Voted For: Capitol
Opener - Capitol, both were weak tho. Closer - Capitol, although weak...Deaths was WACK! Punches - Capitol, funny ass punches. Personals - Tie, bpth used each others names nicely. Metas - Tie, both had dope metas. Multies - Capitol, and Death...using-dashes-on-words-arent-multies. Structure - Both were bad...Deaths were worse...kid you made your text smaller and it still didnt all fit on one line in places. Vocab - Capitol, nothing special about Deaths Creativness - Neither, blahhh. [b]As you can see above, Capitol took this one easy. Death, your lines were so fucking extended. Because of that you had no flow and it was more like a paragraph instead of a line. Capitol, you actually had some funny lines and nice wordplay. One more thing Death...like I said, its not considered a multi just because of your dashes you used. Stop trying so hard...kick back and just let it flow...I wanna see both of you elevate in your next battles...no hatin, just an hounest vote...payce. |
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